Darth Woodrack

Thanks. I will. I'll probably add another smaller thing to even out the difference, but it should be good. Side note: I just did everything that was put in to say the point system shouldn't be used. Huh. That was hypocritical.

Doing that for one simple reason: it saves me the fifty, and spares forty five, allowing me to remove the nearsightedness, and allow him to have a fifteen pint weakness, such as being a savant. I think that's a weakness. Boom. Tin Misting +35 M Division +45m Reaction time +30m Physical Attributes +5m +25sk (He is incredibly strong normally, and the mask assists him) Rage +45m Staff +20sk Actual Skill +50sk Political Skill +15sk Armor +10 sk Personnel Rage -20 Mask That Grants his Powers Meaning Removable -60 Likes to Play with his Food, Meaning he will Refrain from Finishing his Enemy off, if he can Practically do so, to Lengthen their Suffering(I decided to add a few more weaknesses as without the mask, he is still a tin compounder) -15 He is a tin savant -15 Bad at, well, being a good person. This means that he will shun people, and will generally not make them like him -20 While he can predict the movements of his main enemy, he fails at predicting third parties, which allows him to be surprised(Thrawn Syndrome) -15 Which collects up to, in my opinion, with all the weaknesses, 100m 50sk. I retract my request for community approval. He should be fine now. Thanks guys, you're the best!

Ummm... The small problem with this is that he is a tin compounder. I never intended to actually use it to this degree, and it was really just him using a bare minimum, so he can sense stuff. Just to explain, he cannot show anyone any clues to his identity. I know I should have mentioned this before, but I forgot to and I didn't expect anyone to point system it. It is. He is over 60 years old. He has a voidspren in a gemstone in his helmet. That is also how he powers the division surge. To define the power fo the surge, if he presses his hand to someones face, he sends a surge through their head, destroying their head, and he can blow up a thin wall. I don't think this was increased that much, but it was increased beyond natural levels. You also forgot the staff, and you didn't remove the weaknesses. Here's what I have if I follow this stuff, Tin Compounder +100 M Division +45m Reaction time +30m Physical Attributes +5m +25sk (He is incredibly strong normally, and the mask assists him) Rage +45m Staff +20sk Actual Skill +50sk Political Skill +15sk Armor +10 sk Personnel Rage -20 Mask That Grants his Powers Meaning Removable -60 Likes to Play with his Food, Meaning he will Refrain from Finishing his Enemy off, if he can Practically do so, to Lengthen their Suffering(I decided to add a few more weaknesses as without the mask, he is still a tin compounder) -15 Incredibly nearsighted without his tin -30 Bad at, well, being a good person. This means that he will shun people, and will generally not make them like him -20 While he can predict the movements of his main enemy, he fails at predicting third parties, which allows him to be surprised(Thrawn Syndrome) -15 Which collects up to, in my opinion, with all the weaknesses, 100m 100sk. Which means I need a set weakness that removes roughly 50 points, that doesn't compromise the character. Any ideas? Thanks dude. Really.

If that is the actual reason, I will kill him. I'm serious, but I don't mean actual murder. I mean, I would be angry enough to do so, but have enough self control not to do so. ................sorry? WARING: EMOTIONAL INFORMATION. SKIP IF IT WILL MAKE YOU UNCOMFORTABLE I apologize for the outburst. It is just, not only doesn't Ark move the vote from 10 to 8 to 10 to 9 which is a much worse fro me, I just have a lot riding on the Jackal, emotionally. I almost quit for good when the Halo aspects of the Precursors were revoked, kind of because of the Jackal. The Jackal started as a Halo Jackal pirate. He was the only survivor of 1,000 Jackals who went through the Spartan program. That is really all you need to know about that. I had plans for him, I really wanted to do him, and then Halo got blocked. I almost broke down. I stopped myself, and came up with The Jackal, which is where the name comes from. To lose this one as well would leave me with no where else to go, and I do see a way out. Add that with personal issues that none of you want to hear about, and I really need to see a therapist about, and this just seems like a dark hole that if I fall into, I can't get back out of. I know it doesn't affect me in real life, but the Shard is my only real escape from real life, and The Jackal is the main part of me getting back up to a stale emotional state. If I lose him, I won't have anything else to do, and everything that I have worked for will collapse, and I am very unhappy with Ark for changing his mind to be completely against what I need so much. Thank you for caring enough to read this.

I never said who the redacted arty was. Why? Did somebody bribe you? The last thing that I remember you saying is that you don't care either way! You do realise that literally all of my plans for era three hing on the Jackal, right? You are the only person who I actually explained this to! Why did suddenly change your opinion to completely against it? Without him I have no plans for era 3 and I have no reason to continue doing this! I only became active again when I went inactive because I came up with him! EVERYTHING THAT I HAVE PLANNED IN THE ALLEYVERSE FOR AN ENTIRE ERA HINGES ON HIM! WHY WOULD YOU, A PERSON WHO IS MY FRIEND IRL GO AGAINST THAT!? IT DOESN'T AFFECT YOU! @#Voidapple

Wait, what?!? Didn’t you say you didn’t care? Also, didn’t you vote no opinion? This is the most complete turn around in opinions I’ve seen since [REDACTED FOR POLITICAL REASONS]!

Thel walked in, looked around, and sat down in the seat marked 'Police Force Representatives' and waited.

He is a villian. Completely filled with rage from him looking through the helmets eyes, though he can control it and it doesn't affect him that much, and most of his powers come from the mask. He is his own plot, essentially. I have a plan for him, and I don't intend to change it, but if he actually gets caught in his thread fro hunting him, then I will accept it. He will be sed responsibly. @Archer , if you could put my recap at the end of my really long debate thing in the OP with him, that would be great, as right now people are only seeing his powers, and not what I am actually doing with him. He is incredibly overpowered, and that is all that people who aren't reading my post are seeing.

Need I say more?

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I might have forgotten this one, and will be removing it. Hey, Ark! I di the same thing you did when you fought Devaan! 275m 90 s. He is one of the best fighters in the entire Alleyverse. The Darkness isn't that deep, but he also has a very very very weak division surge. Like, very weak. And he has a weakness of almost all of his powers coming from his mask and, well, let me put it like this. His mask's eyes radiate hatred. Anyone who looks into them feel a deep burning rage that they can barely control. He is always looking through those eyes. I also think you put to many points on the age thing. That is his own personal age, and he cannot do it very quickly. Just my own two sense, but I would put it at ten. And don't forget the invincible obsidian staff he can control with his mind, split in two, and reform. Yeah, that was more of a plot armor, surprise, attack, with them attacking one by one win. If I was fighting someone else controlling the Jackal with all of those characters, I would have won. He also kind of lost when my sandling with porous bones got involved. I'm asking if I can use him as a plot device really. He will have his own side plot, and will show up whenever the Bureau asks me to bring him. The only real difference between him and a normal Bureau character, is that he's slightly less powerful than I believe they will be, and he is not limited to a single plot. You misunderstood this. He is a bad guy, who works with the bureau. To recap, he is the person who I am going to spend the next six months throwing my characters at, and beating them up against. He is mainly a plot device, though he will have a lot of character development, and I intend a lot of twists and turn for him. He will only show up in the thread I'm going to make, The Hunt for the Jackal, THFTJ, or THJ, any plots where he has been requested, and Bureau plots. I won't use him as I use my other characters, showing them up whenever I feel like it, and he does have some weaknesses. Those are not enough for him to be a normal character, but they are there. All I'm asking is to be allowed to use him in the ways that I have listed. Please?Please? PS. Can one of the mods make this a poll?

So, if I were to make a pair of plots, one of which being WDDWTW and the other being THFTJ, would that be okay?

Eventually this is going to get longer than the longest thread ever, because no one will admit defeat.

The Mask? So, you okay with it, @Gancho Libre?