Darth Woodrack

Well... Old age can. If she dies from old age, she stays dead, because the rebirth doesn't make her younger. If she were to die from say, diabetes, she would still respawn. She would keep the diabetes, and any other illnesses, but she would respawn.

Hemophilia is the affilocation where your blood does not clot. You cut her, she either gets stitches, or will bleed out until she heals naturally. That is a very large weakness. Also, the cancer thing should cut the difference. You'd need to be a genus to exploit it, but we have quite a few geniuses. *Dusk* *Mack *Mac*

That is in the 100 point limit, so yay!!! Prime invisibility are 30. That is her prime invincibility. She respawns with any permanent ailments, and if she dies of natural causes, she does stay dead. So, she's fine?

Oh. Well, @Lord Meeker, are they okay? Wait, then why did you score the Jackal?

Walker hugged Silas back and said, "Yeah you to," @Ax is NOT Sherlock @Blessing of Potency @#Voidapple

DON'T QUESTION IT! @Archer, they okay?

Sarah arrived, "Oh, am I to late?"

Here is my first wave of Era 3 characters. There will be more. This is just all I have done right now. Silva Rey, Space Marine. Sarah Drown, Walker's Niece(I might have said cousin at one point. My mistake.) The Jackal. I'm just submitting his entire profile for cataloging, but Archer already said he was fine. Eric Darkhold. Mercenary. @Archer Edit: I was wrong, Dusk is 5 and a half, not sixth. Edit 2: Didn't read the guidelines, and am now fixing it. Edit 3: Archer, new weaknesses for Walker. Yes this is my solution to everything. He will put the lives of his friends and loved ones, before his life, his mission, and innocent lives. Mellody exists. Dusk exists, and won't leave. Like ever. He is always there messing with him. Edit 4: Forgot guild affiliation . Fixing. Edit 5: Finished another character.

Dusk arrived. Walker had said something that included hellbent is getting married, definitely, and come, so he decided to come. He looked around, saw the sane hellbent, and started walking over there, completely oblivious to the twenty precros running at him, to try and stop hellbent from seeing him. @#Voidapple

"Yeah, it has been a while. I was watching How to Train Your Dragon 3 for about three second in my head. It was good. How you guys been?" Said Walker. @#Voidapple @Ax is NOT Sherlock @Blessing of Potency

Thel continued to wait to be called up, as he was sitting down in his seat. He was completely ready to represent the precursors to the Alley Government. They just had to call him up.

"You're lucky. I barely met him, and he was the most despicable, most evil, most monstrous being in existence," Walker said, "Oh, look! Food! And Ambrosia and Silas!"

I think it should be fine. I would object, but you're using the same excuse that I'm using for Dusk, so I can't complain. Thanks Archer and Snipexe, now the Jackal is a normal character. Now, the daunting task of taking all of his weaknesses and putting them on a character profile. This will take a while.

Walker arrived with Melody. he looked pretty much the same, except now he was obsessed with The Jackal, had two of his enchanted swords, and his sentinel jacket was black and white. His sentinel helmet also now had a chin guard. He put his arm over her, "I still feel like fainting whenever I him, but Hellbent found love. That just seems crazy," @Blessing of Potency

The staff is staying. I already got rid of some other dramatic effect stuff, but the staff stays. Just give it 50 points, and call it a day. To the savant thing: He has only had the mask for around ten years. Before that, he was just a tin misting, who happens to be an extraordinary fighter. Additional weaknesses(Go from top to bottom if you don't need all of them) He has so many problems with him that the person writing him sometimes forgets about some and accidentally rps with ones he doesn't have, cementing them for all eternity in his character. Hates Sandlings. Hates slavers. A lot. If he meets a slaver, he will almost definitely kill them. If he thinks someone could be a worth challenge, he will go out of his way to fight them alone. Will put curiosity before safety, which is also a weakness of Dusk, though his it to a lesser extent. He can't stop scheming. Ever. He is always scheming. If he went on a date for some reason, still scheming He has a soft spot for orphans. This one is really small, like 5 points maximum, but it is there so I mentioned it. He hates randomness a lot. He has a voidspren on his forehead that interjects at random intervals with comments that are not helpful at all, and usually are along the lines of, "Why didn't you kill that guy? You should have killed him. Odium would want you to kill him," with no warning, or provocation.It is pretty much, in middle of fight, "Hey! Kill that guy! You should really kill him! He hates inquisitors, of the steel variety. Very closed of. If someone tries to help him, he won't tell them what he needs, he will just give them a task to carry out, without any explanation. Likes dramatic entrances. If he trusts someone, the slightest bit, if the betray him, he will go to the ends of the Alleyverse to end them. His forehead glows.(I mean, this is a given seeing as how it has a stormlight filled gem in the forehead, but I will mention it. This isn't a flashlight glow, this is a dim red glow that doesn't really let him see, but let's everyone know where he is.) He thinks chaos marines are untrustworthy, and dislikes them, and won't really work with them, if he has the choice. this comes from Crow trying to wipe out him and a lot of his criminal allies at the den, instead of sending help. He hates the fjordell religion. @Archer

Thel continued waiting. He would have intervened, but he fell asleep from waiting.

So, what is the new score?

Oh. I forgot the identity thing. Yes, that is a weakness. So, the armor is sandling scale coated in a special oil so it will be waterproof. I put it in there for gear points. He hasn't had the staff for that long, but he is very good with it. Like, he could be a sword master with it, but I counted that in what I scored his skill at. He has near peak natural human strength, and then the mask increases it a bit. I wouldn't rank the enhancement very high, but that's ust me. Think, weak pewter arm, if they were already near super strong. If you can get him in a head lock, you can rip of the mask. The chances of doing this aside, it is possible. If you read over my long duel right up in the Den of thieves, you will see that he actually lost because Walker picked up a shard blade, while he was toying with him. No, Walker gave that shard blade to Redken's family, he doesn't have it anymore. For the political skill, think of a normal politician. He can bend the story, and trick people into doing what he wants. Instead of the natural 100ms reaction time, he has a 90ms visual reaction time, and instead of the natural 50ms audio reaction time, he has a 40ms reaction time. He is over 60 years old, and trained in hand to hand, sword, staff, and knife combat. He has trained almost this whole time, and he has the body of a 25 year old. I cannot help but notice that you didn't include the age thing. I would remove the savantism, but that leads to the question of how he managed to last 60+ years, without becoming a savant. The bad person thing means that he does things to people and their families, that are not moral, and will make people hate him, without really knowing that it is wrong. You also forgot that he cannot work for anyone.This leads to conflicts with people more powerful than him. It will only be like 5 points, but still, it's there. I think that's everything you had questions about.

And I am death. Not Death, but death, the spiritual entity that kills everything it touches. Because, DEATH IS INEVITABLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Annnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnd, the pessimist side leaked out. Bad realist, bad! Get back in to my head! You are not allowed to shard! I told you this! Sorry about that.

Yeah, but it still caused him severe harm, and GOD still had to HEAL HIM. Also, even if this version is still slightly OP, the vote is in my favor. So there.

I seem to remember GOD having to UNDO THE DAMAGES that him being a savant caused.

Thel continued to wait to be called up, as he was sitting down in his seat.

A few things. I'm not looking fro your approval Ark. I am looking for Archers approval. Being a tin savant wasn't helpful to Spook, now was it? I would think that having the thing were your powers come from being removable would be a very significant weakness. You used to wrong list. I added another weakness to help with the difference in opinion. I would think that being filled with a deep burning hatred that leads to control issues, would be a good weakness, as he as trouble stopping hurting someone, and he explodes to small things. He can barely control his desire to kill everyone around him. Thrawn syndrome is a serious weakness, as it got Thrawn, the greatest non robotic tactical mind in Sci-Fi and fantasy, to my knowledge, killed. I don't think I overestimated any of the weaknesses, at least not by much. Sure, he can work on his own, and be a good individual, but he will be hunted by a large group, that probably won't fall apart. If he pushes everyone away, he could be taken down by a group, and he won't have plot armor that time. Sure, his political skill would help him, but all these handicaps would be a severe disadvantage. So, hi not being able to be genuine and make actual friends, for a multitude of reasons, is a very significant weakness. Okay, so, why do you even care? It won't affect you, and all you're doing is saying, 'he can't have a character who might be one or two points over the limit,' while I know for a fact you still have a near full power Hellbent stashed away somewhere, and you can't wait to pull him out. It just seems incredibly hypocritical, and I don't see your argument, at all. @#Voidapple

Okay, here's the Jackals current points, with a new weakness, jist in case I'm overestimating a weakness. I know I should be doing this in the Alleyverse character thread, but I would liek to resolve it here. @Archer? Is he good for character hood?