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Tesh last won the day on August 4 2021

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    Byeeeeeeeeeeee!
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    I genuinely don't know where I am.
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    I love reading (anything from epic fantasy to gothic horror to sociology), writing, musicals (some of my favorites are Come From Away, Les Miserables, and The Clockmaker's Daughter), history, crochet, The Owl House, Hollow Knight, and The Locked Tomb. I'm currently learning how to use French smallsword and rapier, and how to speak Welsh and German. And I'm an anthropology major!

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  1. Tesh

    I just made some edits to a short story I wrote titled Here Be Dragons. I cut out around 400 words, and reworded some stuff. I know some of you read through it and gave me some (really good) feedback, and I really appreciate it. 

    If any of you would be willing, I'd really appreciate it if some of you read through it again (or for the first time) and let me know what you think. I still have a few days before submissions are due. Feel free to comment directly on the document.

    Thanks!

    Here Be Dragons

    (The link leads to the Google Doc, so don't go on it if you are signed into your email account and don't want people to see your name. Sign out first, or open it in an incognito window.)

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    2. Tesh

      Tesh

      Thanks!

      I feel like I might have worded that update a little too strongly...

      If you don't want to read it, I completely get it, and please don't feel like you need to.

      However, there is a dragon.

      And it's only eleven pages.

      But please don't feel like you need to.

    3. Condensation

      Condensation

      I'm a little busy, but I'll try to get to it. And you don't have to worry, I can deal with strongly worded things.

    4. Flying

      Flying

      I went through it again and couldn't really find anything that needed a lot of editing. I think it's very close to being a final draft, except for a few odd word choices or small things that I found. Most of the parts I criticized the first time are reworded and read better now, so good job on that. Anyways, I think it's looking pretty good where it's at. Good luck with submissions :D

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