ScarletSabre

Glad to hear it ! And yes it is, that's the point Can't wait to see the critique, and in the meantime, enjoy the next chapter! Chapter 4 - Another one I'm not entirely satisfied with bits of, but it's a first draft after all

Please, by all means do! I'm glad to hear you're at least being somewhat entertained by the story As for NPCQuest, it's an in-world game, and a reference to another of my projects, it's the working title for my story of the classic hero's tale - farmboy to king etc... told from the point of view of the beleaguered shopkeeper who's having to deal with all this when he just wants to make money and be left alone. As for the other questions... they'll be answered eventually, when I write more chapters, haha! I've only got a few more written at the moment, so what I'll do is post them one at a time so you, and anyone else who might want to read it, can give your thoughts on it By all means critique, but please let me know if it at least entertained you a bit! Chapter 3 - Apologies for the difference in formatting, copied this chapter from the Google Doc version rather than the USB the others came from

Silver is Allomantically inert, but is it Feruchemically inert? And if not, what could be stored in it?

One of the Stormbunkers in the warcamps?

Well, hopefully you all enjoy it ^^ Most of this is a first draft, so please be kind, but please let me know what you think Prologue - Honestly not too happy with this compared to the rest, feels very cliche Chapter 1 And if anyone wants to see the awesome, regal armour in question... It's based on this FANTASTIC Stand an artist helped me design ~ And chapter 2, with a bit more action and hopefully entertainment ^^ I have a few more chapters written, so if you'd like me to post them please let me know!

Waxillum? Is it HAS a lot of influence at the moment, or HAD?

Roshar itself? The supercontinent?

Heya everyone, I've amazingly not been completely avoiding/too depressed to write while I've been inactive on the forums, and one of the projects I've been writing is an isekai story, mainly because I've been watching a few isekai anime with my friend, who's got a huge fondness for them. He's been my only alpha reader thus far, and it's mainly been a way to practice and entertain him, but I'm curious if anyone here would be interested in reading it too?

Most likely, the second I read the words I instantly thought of him and that story, and was waiting for a reference to

Callsign: Scarlet If that's not available, Callsign: Sabre (and yes, I would specify spelled "re" ^^) If neither of those are available, Callsign: ScarletSabre, just to be petty, or Callsign: Arsehole, if given by others, most likely ^^ Or Callsign: Bugger, since I'm British and all that

Bloody hell I made it to the runner up of the last round xD I'm proud!

Granted. You become Rashek, just as you finish using the Well of Ascension and become The Lord Ruler. Enjoy a thousand years of conquest, slaughter, brutality and destruction, all the while having Ruin whisper into your ear and eroding your sanity and morality. I wish to have two Honourblades.

Vin?

This is an interesting discussion, I have to say, until now I honestly hadn't considered it as much from Moash's perspective as I could have. He committed to his goals, and got the revenge he desired, and that in and of itself is commendable, even if just to his commitment and resolve. I think for me myself, part of the problem is that we don't see Moash's confliction as much as we do Kaladin's, at least in Oathbringer. I may just be forgetting, but Moash doesn't seem to regret or consider that Kaladin is the only reason he has his chance at revenge at all, at least as much as he should. Kaladin saved him from dying in the Bridge runs, Kaladin taught him to fight, and thus he didn't die to the Fused. Kaladin made him a Shardbearer. Granted, that last one didn't last very long, but I don't remember getting a sense of regret that I feel Moash should have whenever he thinks about Kaladin or uses the skills he taught him. I think part of the problem is also that Moash seemed to have no goals beyond killing the king. He isn't using it as a rallying cry to destroy the Lighteyes structure or their rule or end slavery, as much as he seems to buy into those kinds of beliefs, he just feels like Elhokar deserves to die. Which is fair enough, if he feels like that, go for it. I can't say I wouldn't feel the same or have the same kind of ruthless streak for vengeance for someone I cared about. Hell, the Alethi can't even complain too much with the Vengeance Pact - AKA general genocide. And while we saw a lot of Elhokar's struggles and humanising moments, the reason for his paranoia etc, at the end of the day he still made many many mistakes. And of course he was trying to better himself, which counts for a hell of a lot. As for Kaladin, he did betray Dalinar, but I wouldn't say he full on betrayed him, more betrayed the trust put in him, at least for a time. Of course he needs to come clean about it, and very soon, but I wouldn't say he deserves as much flak as Moash does regardless.

Granted. However, you are a Feruchemist right as Rashek takes the power at the Well, and are thus turned into one of the First Generation of Kandra. I wish to be able to forget the stories of books I've read so I can experience them anew every time I read them.

Parlin Rysn Vstim Lewishi Iyatil Fjon Baxil Jenet Noro Beard Dunny Notum Palona Dedelin KanPaar Telden Kalak Eliminated Human - He's got a lot of passion and rage to make him a good match for the Shard, and I'm pretty damnation curious what taking up a Shard would do to an old-school, full Koloss, considering their Spiritual makeup... Which character would you want to see most in a Musical, and what kind of song would they sing?

@Kureshi Ironclaw I'm glad you think so! Yeah, I was worried about making it too much of an exposition dump, but I think I can get the balance a little better than I currently have it... We'll see, regardless, haha! Hopefully you'll like what I have planned and want to keep reading when I get to finishing the next part! @Snipexe Haha, you're too kind ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it, and don't worry, there will be a bit more mechanics coming along and some worldbuilding when we get to a more permanant setting and have more characters to interact with. Hopefully I'll have the next part done soon enough, since I do have plans for it, just need to make sure I get it done and hopefully correct and decently written!

Axies Parlin Rysn Vstim Lewishi Iyatil Shan Elariel Fjon Baxil Jenet Noro Beard Dunny Yeden Notum Human OreSeur Palona Balat Arclo Liss Kadash Dedelin KanPaar Allrianne Telden Kalak Eliminated Penrod since he's too much of a wise mentor figure who could try and provide stability or good suggestions while they're getting picked off one by one. Which character would be the LAST to die in a horror movie, or be the sole survivor?

Haha, thank you for saying so! I'm glad you liked the idea and found it interesting! I usually give TOO much description for settings etc, so I was trying to avoid getting too detailed and making it a wall of text, but I do agree! It could also probably be a bit more fleshed out with regards to seeing Elson in action, getting a grasp of his personality, I skipped over that for the most part to get to the interesting stuff, I could probably have added Overall though, I think it's not bad, if nowhere near as good as it could be.

Mistborn - Secret History

DemouxlyatilNaleNightbloodDenthArsteelYesteel Eliminated Marsh - With his Inquisitor powers, he can push away all of the other vehicles and get out of traffic jams. Plus nobody is going to argue the price or tip with his gaze! Who would make the best companion on a submarine?

MarshFeltMraizeOdiumDemouxKhrisallaNazhlyaltilTalnNaleNightbloodVasherDenthArsteelShasharaYesteel Eliminated Kelsier. I doubt he'd underestimate Nightblood's power, but he'd use him as a paperweight anyway, probably either for being sassy or just to set the dynamic of the relationship. Which THREE characters would hook up for a one-night threesome? They can regret it afterwards, and bonus points for the reason for it, or reactions afterwards!

Sebarial

Spook as a Lightweaver, only so we can see a spren like Pattern try and figure out his slang.

Hey everyone, just thought I'd share the first draft of the first chapter of a new story idea that popped into my head yesterday ^^ Be warned, it's a first draft so probably pretty damnation unpolished, but I think that there's no spelling or grammar mistakes... Hopefully you enjoy, and please tell me what you think!