Clockwork

Honor: 5 Cultivation: 7

Honor: 11 Cultivation: 7

Endowment: 2 Honor: 10 Cultivation: 8

Second post in Corvallis! Feedback wanted. I want to make my writing as good as possible.

Chasmfiend sat bolt upright just as thunder crashed, covered in cold sweat, and looked at the clock to his left. 2:48. And felt a sword stab straight through his side. He cursed, and looked over. There was a vanilla standing a few feet to his right. It had a strange stance, more beastial than human. He pulled the sword out of his side, grabbed the vanilla by the neck, lifted it up, and rammed the sword up through its stomach into its head. He then looked out the window, and saw the corpse of his beast. A vanilla was on top of it. It sprinted forward, but Chasmfiend cut it in half with the sword. Why are they attacking me? And why do they look... demented... Three more broke through the door. He kicked on into the wall, breaking it's spine, then crushed the other two's heads. He finally checked the clock again. 3:02... 3:03. Good... Have at them, Gemheart. He heard a sound like screeching metal, then one that sounded like loud thunder. Gemheart was back. Nice to have you. Kill the Demented. Then come to the center, Corvallis. It's not far, and I'll be there. If I can't sleep, then I'll work. If they have anything for me to do. As he walked out his door, the beast was being barraged by several Demented and Epics, who obviously were scared of him. "Sir! Sir! Help!" A lower Epic rushed forward. "Why would I help you?" He replied. He couldn't fathom helping those he didn't need to, not without a reward. "B-because the vanillas... they're attacking!!" "So I noticed. Ok, I will." He turned as if to kill the Demented, by swiftly turned back and cut the Epic's legs off with the sword that had once, not long ago, been hanging on his wall. "You no longer have to run from them. After all... you can't." He went back to walk while calling back, "Don't get in my way!"

Endowment: 6 Honor: 11 Cultivation: 6

Endowment: 7 Honor: 14 Cultivation: 5 Oi! Stop that! Honor's the good guy!

Mine's like yours, but darker. As far as I can see, very few uninteresting people have joined. (I am sadly uninteresting.) And if your reputation is OVER your # of posts, you CANNOT be uninteresting. It would be going against the will of the other 17th sharders.

Welcome! Have cookies! They make you strong!

Lightning bolt

Endowment: 8 Honor: 14 Cultivation: 7 Honor must live!

Oops. My bad. Sorry.

Oops. Posted from the wrong page. Was on page 3. Endowment: 13 Honor: 12 Cultivation: 7

Endowment: 14 Honor: 10 Cultivation: 7 Autonomy: 3 Devotion: 6 Adonalsium: 4

Endowment: 10 Honor: 13 Cultivation: 6 Autonomy: 4 Devotion: 8 Adonalsium: 10

Voice in the back of your head? Mine's like a blaring trumpet. I spiked myself. 32 times. *shuffles as if fighting something* *shoves cookies at Thisismyusername*

Endowment: 10 Honor: 12 Cultivation: 9 Autonomy: 7 Devotion: 7 Adonalsium: 10

In Corvallis, (Wasn't certain whether to put this in a spoiler box or not. Went the safe way.) This is important to Chasmfiend (Epic).

Endowment: 10 Honor: 11 Cultivation: 9 Autonomy: 9 Devotion: 6 Dominion: 0 Adonalsium: 12

I decided I will make it a team instead of the one rouge hunter. Please give feedback. 1st member; Leader, Sniper, Tech Name: Kyordu Jarnot Age: 23 “Powers” (Skills): Not really “powers” per say, but he is insanely intelligent. More so than his brother. He tends to move from one small town to the next, killing the weakest epics and then wiping the rest of them out. Appearance: White, blue eyes, brown hair, constantly looks like he’s bored and doesn’t care about you or isn’t impressed. Modus Operandi: Logically plans out assassinations of epics, usually for proof or revenge. Currently moving to Corvallis, as he heard his brother is there. Plans to kill him out of Revenge for the rest of their family. Has killed 5 epics, 4 normal and 1 High. 1st was out of anger. 2nd was to test if he could do it again 3rd was after he recruited another member to prove it was possible 4th was after recruiting another member for the same reasons 5th (High Epic) Was to see if they could bring one down before Chasmfiend They are NOT Reckoners. In fact, on the last one, he shot a Reckoner in the leg before the guy could kill the epic. 2nd member; Point Man (NOT Major POV)- Name: Ulfric (note: sample. will be changed. couldn't decide on a name.) Age: 30 Skills: Strong and very fast, he is trained in martial arts. He joined after his daughter was killed by an epic. He wishes for revenge, like Kyordu, and has nothing to really live for. Appearance: He is black, and has a look of constant suspicion about him. Green eyes, black hair. Modus Operandi: He mostly follows Kyordu's orders. Wishes to find the black cloaked epic that killed his daughter. Currently moving to Corvallis, as Kyordu is. 3rd member: Operations/Secondary Tech Name: Farengar (another name that will be changed) Age: 17 Skills: Recently made lorist, and a fairly skilled engineer. Works with Kyordu to provide tech. Joined because he wanted to learn from Kyordu, but was at first skeptical of the ability to kill epics. Appearance: Pale White, with black hair and brown eyes. Always looks down, as if ashamed of something. Modus Operandi: Runs from behind the lines. Doesn't go outside a lot. Lays low in the base or runs errands when someone has to.

That's a rule? Didn't know about it. Broke it again, didn't I? Preservation: 0 Endowment: 10 Honor: 16 Cultivation: 10 Autonomy: 11 Devotion: 7 Dominion: 7 Adonalsium: 11

Really, That late?

been a member since last june or such. just learned how to do this.

I feel as if I need to remake this character.

Preservation: 3 Endowment: 10 Honor: 14 Cultivation: 10 Autonomy: 11 Devotion: 7 Dominion: 8 Adonalsium: 11