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Posted
Just now, DramaQueen said:

You're fine!!! Just try to be a bit more serious from now on. Fish can still be a rather silly character, just try to have the silliness fit into the story. Thank you!

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Fish right now has absolutely no relevance to the plot, so...

 

Posted
1 minute ago, I Used To Be A Fish said:
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Fish right now has absolutely no relevance to the plot, so...

 

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Hmmmmm...

You could have him follow us secretly, then jump in and save us at some point? Narrating his struggles as he tries to follow us without any water?

 

Posted
3 minutes ago, DramaQueen said:

Hmmmmm...

You could have him follow us secretly, then jump in and save us at some point? Narrating his struggles as he tries to follow us without any water?

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Fish wouldn't exactly struggle.

 

Posted
9 minutes ago, Bearer of all agonies said:

Yay! 101 posts today! This is my 400th post and it is on the fellowship! Just like my 100th 200th and 300th post! Yay!

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That's not okay

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:ph34r:

 

 

Posted
33 minutes ago, Bearer of all agonies said:

 

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It's impressive.

Please be sure to contribute with those posts. Some of those 100 were slightly redundant/not extremely relevant.

Regardless, good job! 

 

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"Watch the Fox, Korin. I give you a body because I find that I can trust you, but guard her with your life. Notify me if anything is wrong, I am tracking another source and will be back shortly. I cannot create Mordred's body, only the one who called her soul has the power to do so, and I do not trust in Loki."

"Yes, you have my word, Winter. I will guard her with my life."

Winter disappeared into his mind, dismissing Mordred and Loki to Mor's dingy apartment room.. His mind around him warped into a dirty alleyway. He stepped out, sinking against a wall, his wings screeching against the stone.

Da(rn) you, Winter. Trusting someone. I should need nobody, I should kill all of my emotions. Who cares about them anyway!? You shouldn't have left them with bodies, they could escape at will and all of the time would be wasted. But why should I care about time? Time is nothing.

The angel suddenly stood, punching the stone wall.. his hand broke the rock.

The slightest stir of wind from Winter's left;

There was a man standing at the entrance to the alley, bald on top with a half-doughnut of white hair and dark blue robes. He wore a crucifix at his neck and he was grinning, rather smugly.

Winter looked down at the two blades protruding from his chest and stomach;

Soul Destroying.

The angel's eyes glinted, and the priest started in surprise.

-XXX-

His eyes had the same surprised look, even after being separated from the head.

Winter left the collection of blood-covered body parts in the alley, summoning Mordred to the front of his mind.

Winter! Kor and Loki are gone!! They just disappeared.

Yes.

Mordred's silence asked the question for her.

They're gone. Forever.

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forgot to censor a swear
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The other shadow's voice is as the whisper of a dying man drawing his final breath. "What trick is this gatekeeper? You have no power to free us." The two shadows grow angry as a horde prepares to run them down. A broad shouldered monstrous beast a dozen feet tall knocks them aside and lunges for Nathrangking. It's eyes are mad with rage and it bares fangs drenched ruddy and scarlet. Creatures and deities wrench it back. legions of birds and flying beings descend. They freeze as a wall of air holds them back. Earth sundering yells erupt as blood is spilled. The hard ground runs with a ruby river which bubbles in the heat and then freezes in place.

My anger grows. "Enough." That singular word is a hurricane. The language which time strikes all of the assembled with more power than assembly of vengeful gods. Those leaped forward step back before my word. Above me the desperate flyers are stunned. "You dare attack one who would free you? I offer 1000 years to any who will find me one who I will gladly here to sate your hunger. Who dares take this challenge?" I turn to a women flying feet away a smirk on her face. "Circestran, would you dare find the one I seek. Do any of you have the courage or should I guess that you are incapable?" 

"Indeed I will go if it means that I have the chance to tear out your eyes." Circestran lunges for my throat.

I grab her with lightning speed." Open. I leap out as the door inches open. I slap the door when we are through and it instantly seals itself. The spells and chains return. The defenses return at double the force. "Circestran how long has it been since they threw you in?"

"You tell me husband. It was your treachery that cost me eons."

Posted
4 hours ago, xinoehp512 said:

Jared clenched his fists and exhaled.

Fine, he said.

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I don't know if this is on purpose or not, but I think it was really cool. While Jared was angry and kind of in 'narrator(that's not the right word)' mode, he was speaking with black background, but when he was worried about Abigail, we saw his human side and he talked just like everyone else. I'm being introspective right now, can you tell?

"So, what do we need to do to get the 'thing' you said could help?"

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