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"Ember!" Star cried frantically. "Let her go!" 

Ember removed her hands from Shadow's throat but looked at Star in anger. "She needs to be taught a lesson."

"Not that way," Star hissed. 

Ember growled at Shadow. "Star is not for you to touch," Ember said. She got off of Shadow and glared at her. 

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4 minutes ago, Shard of Thought said:

"Ember!" Star cried frantically. "Let her go!" 

Ember removed her hands from Shadow's throat but looked at Star in anger. "She needs to be taught a lesson."

"Not that way," Star hissed. 

Ember growled at Shadow. "Star is not for you to touch," Ember said. She got off of Shadow and glared at her. 

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How bad is the burning going to be? And it going to be around the neck isn’t going to be good either. 

 

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Just now, Inklingspren said:

 

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Really bad. Ember is under the infuence of the potion that makes her stronger and she's already super duper OP when it comes to destructive capability - meaning her heat. She didn't mean to hurt you badly enough that you'll never recover, but she doesn't have as much control with the potion's effects. 

 

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*Rubs hands together evilly* 

There was no response. Her cheeks were already blistering, along with her forearms. But the neck and hands were the worst of it. 3rd degree burns exposed tissue and bone in some areas. Blood had dried up, so there wasn’t much of a puddle. 

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A metro train exploded out of nowhere next to Dapper's jet and rammed into it. Both the train and the jet imploded a split second later.

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Specifically not anarchy.

 

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We have a continuing storyline and what you are adding, while it may be plot, is not this story and therefore not what we want here

No need to report him

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Just now, Dr. Dapper said:

 

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 If you would’ve been like “Hey, can I join this RP?” That would’ve been better than ‘spamming’. We had every right to scream at you.

 

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"Ok"

You could have said: "If you want to join, here's what we're doing..."

Also I'm not spamming. Just adding something that isn't directly related to the story everyone else is doing.

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18 minutes ago, Inklingspren said:

There was no response. Her cheeks were already blistering, along with her forearms. But the neck and hands were the worst of it. 3rd degree burns exposed tissue and bone in some areas. Blood had dried up, so there wasn’t much of a puddle. 

Star looked at Ember, fury written on her face. "Why did you do that?" she said, horrified. 

"She was hurting you, I-"

"No!" Star said. "No, you don't get to say anything. She was using words. You had no right to do that, not to defend me or anyone else. She has been hurt enough! Look at her and see what you have done." 

Ember regarded Shadow blankly. Then her eyes widened. "I only meant to... I didn't mean for such damage." 

"The hell you did," Star swore. "I don't care what you meant to do. You hurt her."

"No-"

"I don't want to hear it. You're a Narrator - heal her."

"I have never-"

"Get down on your knees. And Narrate." 

Ember knelt as commanded, looking over Shadow's injuries. She really hadn't meant to hurt her that badly at all. Send a message, sure, but this... She looked at her hands, at the rippling air around her. "I cannot."

"Ember, I-"

"Her injuries will only worsen."

"Get. Over yourself. They're just words."

Ember closed her eyes tightly. And spoke. It wasn't quite like speaking though. More like... painting. Adding to the story. 

The damaged skin, muscle, and bone on Shadow's body from the wounds Ember had inflicted began to heal. It would take time, but with a Narrator's words on her side, the process would be sped up. 

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Stupid out of reputation points!

Dapper, I’m sorry for the rude welcome. I would love to incorporate you into the story but can’t think of a way. Maybe Xino would have an idea but this is kinda a closed plot.

Again, sorry

 

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Anyone else hear Ember as Nebula from Guardians of the Galaxy or is it just me? 

 

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Just now, Inklingspren said:

 

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Thank you. Ember and Star are interesting. Ember is very opinionated and headstrong, but because of how she was written, she will do pretty much anything Star tells her too. Plus, Star is really passionate about Shadow and not using force. 

 

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