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Just now, Aeoryi said:

Aeoryi groans. "Where did you get that book?"

"From the library? Where we are? There is a whole Brandon Sanderson section. It had every version of every book the guy had ever written. It was a little disturbing to be honest. Next I think I am going to read 'The Way of Kings' by Brandon Sanderson after I finish 'The Rithmatist' by Brandon Sanderson and every book in the 'Mistborn' series that is also written by Brandon Sanderson. Interesting, huh."

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2 minutes ago, shortcake said:

a sharp piercing pain shoots through his arm(s), spreading throughout his body. I causes great pain, but... it somehow seems to be calming Lundyn, in a way? Her breathing begins to slow, but her eyes flash purple, shooting another string of memories through to her mind, this one being open for Tal. the sudden remembrance of things is not only physically draining her energy, but also extremely painful for her Tal is able to see this memory as if it were his own.

@Edema Rue

Seeing that it’s helping, Tal grits his teeth and keeps pushing forward. 

Posted
1 minute ago, Canada Lover said:

"From the library? Where we are? There is a whole Brandon Sanderson section. It had every version of every book the guy had ever written. It was a little disturbing to be honest. Next I think I am going to read 'The Way of Kings' by Brandon Sanderson after I finish 'The Rithmatist' by Brandon Sanderson and every book in the 'Mistborn' series that is also written by Brandon Sanderson. Interesting, huh."

"Yes, Brandon is awesome. Just don't let the brandofandonitis take over."

Posted
1 minute ago, Canada Lover said:

"From the library? Where we are? There is a whole Brandon Sanderson section. It had every version of every book the guy had ever written. It was a little disturbing to be honest. Next I think I am going to read 'The Way of Kings' by Brandon Sanderson after I finish 'The Rithmatist' by Brandon Sanderson and every book in the 'Mistborn' series that is also written by Brandon Sanderson. Interesting, huh."

"I heard mistborn is a bad book. I don't know who said that but something to keep in mind"

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Also, argenti, good point.

 

Posted
Just now, The Honorable One said:

Honor looks at her weirdly. "Maybe that's the reason you are in the Insanity Clinic."

"What? The plot of the final empire is so generic! How could anyone like it?"

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This makes me die as I write this

 

Posted (edited)
6 minutes ago, Edema Rue said:

Seeing that it’s helping, Tal grits his teeth and keeps pushing forward. 

Argenti grabs Tal's shoulder and asks into their mind, "May I Help?"

  

4 minutes ago, Aeoryi said:

"I heard mistborn is a bad book. I don't know who said that but something to keep in mind"

 

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I try XD

 

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2 minutes ago, Edema Rue said:

Seeing that it’s helping, Tal grits his teeth and keeps pushing forward. 

Pic sees this is helping, and hums a determined, calming march. He loops the march and the staff wraps around his wrist and summons a marching baton. Grimacing, he presses this baton into the field. 
 

@shortcake

Posted
Just now, Canada Lover said:

Luna faints.

Aeoryi looks at Honor. "Well, we should probably take her to the medical wing."

Posted (edited)
10 minutes ago, Edema Rue said:

Seeing that it’s helping, Tal grits his teeth and keeps pushing forward. 

4 minutes ago, Cash67 said:

Pic sees this is helping, and hums a determined, calming march. He loops the march and the staff wraps around his wrist and summons a marching baton. Grimacing, he presses this baton into the field. 
 

@shortcake

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wait, pushing forward in a literal sense? because *cough* if Tal somehow manages to touch Lundyn, then she'll (Lundyn) end up just blacking out. basically my train of thought here is that one of the memory strings was causing to remember something traumatizing for her (which i'll be revealing here in a minute or so), and the force field is her immediate response to said memory, because its her form of "fight or flight." if someone is able to endure the pain from moving through the force field, then that triggers something in her brain, causing her to black out. the whole "flickering lights, color-changing eyes, etc. etc." is taking up a heck of a lot of energy for her. so if someone where to physically come into contact with her while she is in this state (or at least attempt to), then most of her energy will be contributing to subconsciously inflicting as much pain as possible to whoever is trying to touch her (bc reasons). once someone is able to touch her, all her energy is immediately put out. im thinking of her energy as a sort of fire.

@Edema Rue @Cash67

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Posted
13 minutes ago, Argenti said:

Argenti grabs Tal's shoulder and asks into their mind, "May I Help?"

  

 

I’m not sure, Tal replied. Something’s wrong with the girl.

8 minutes ago, shortcake said:
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Physically or mentally, whichever makes more sense.

 

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15 minutes ago, shortcake said:

 

6 minutes ago, Edema Rue said:

I’m not sure, Tal replied. Something’s wrong with the girl.

 

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Pic is copying Tal. Until he touches Lundyn he won’t. But he will endure the pain if he is receiving any. 

 

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Luna woke up in the medical wing. Last thing she remembered was Aeoryi saying Mistborn was bad. She saw Lundyn apparently in pain.

Instinctively, Luna reaches out to touch her. "I can handle the pain." Luna reassured the staff members.

@shortcake

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Aeoryi says to Tal, "I don't know what happened I was talking about the final empire and then she fainted I swear it's not my fault."

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1 minute ago, Aeoryi said:

Aeoryi says to Tal, "I don't know what happened I was talking about the final empire and then she fainted I swear it's not my fault."

Looking back at the people talking, Luna responded. "She said Mistborn was bad and the Final Empire was very bland." Luna pressed on.

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3 minutes ago, Canada Lover said:

Looking back at the people talking, Luna responded. "She said Mistborn was bad and the Final Empire was very bland." Luna pressed on.

"I never said that!"

Posted
8 minutes ago, Canada Lover said:

"Sorry, generic." Luna was almost touching Lundyn now.

@shortcake

"I never said that either." Aeoryi lied, now regretting calling the final empire mid.

Posted
1 hour ago, shortcake said:

wait, pushing forward in a literal sense? because *cough* if Tal somehow manages to touch Lundyn, then she'll (Lundyn) end up just blacking out. basically my train of thought here is that one of the memory strings was causing to remember something traumatizing for her (which i'll be revealing here in a minute or so), and the force field is her immediate response to said memory, because its her form of "fight or flight." if someone is able to endure the pain from moving through the force field, then that triggers something in her brain, causing her to black out. the whole "flickering lights, color-changing eyes, etc. etc." is taking up a heck of a lot of energy for her. so if someone where to physically come into contact with her while she is in this state (or at least attempt to), then most of her energy will be contributing to subconsciously inflicting as much pain as possible to whoever is trying to touch her (bc reasons). once someone is able to touch her, all her energy is immediately put out. im thinking of her energy as a sort of fire.

 

Lundyn's memory begins to play inside of Tal's (and anyone else who wants to) mind in flashes. First, Tal sees a younger version of Lundyn. He could tell that she was younger, because her wings are smaller and the feathers look less full. She's standing on a branch of a tree, the sun framing her. She's smiling. She's happy. next, another image of Lundyn, this one a bit older, sitting next to what one could assume to be her parents. She still looks happy, but then the image flickers, changing to an angry Lundyn. a very, very angry Lundyn, who is . there are large pieces of the ground floating around her, seemingly frozen in time. Her eyes have an orange glow to them. She is floating in the air, wings spread. the second-to-last image lasted for not even five seconds. it's an image of her parents. they're lying next to each other in a field of daisies. they're holding hands. Something made Tal realize that was the last thing they ever did. the last image was of Lundyn flying away.

54 minutes ago, Edema Rue said:
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Physically or mentally, whichever makes more sense.

 

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we'll say physically.

47 minutes ago, Cash67 said:
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Pic is copying Tal. Until he touches Lundyn he won’t. But he will endure the pain if he is receiving any. 

 

36 minutes ago, Canada Lover said:

Luna woke up in the medical wing. Last thing she remembered was Aeoryi saying Mistborn was bad. She saw Lundyn apparently in pain.

Instinctively, Luna reaches out to touch her. "I can handle the pain." Luna reassured the staff members.

@shortcake

8 minutes ago, Canada Lover said:

"Sorry, generic." Luna was almost touching Lundyn now.

@shortcake

a sharp pain last for a brief moment before everything stopped. No more force field, no more piercing noise. The lights begin to flicker back on. Lundyn's body has gone limp.

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we'll just say that Luna was able to touch her, kay? :3

@Edema Rue @Canada Lover @Cash67

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Just now, shortcake said:

Lundyn's memory begins to play inside of Tal's (and anyone else who wants to) mind in flashes. First, Tal sees a younger version of Lundyn. He could tell that she was younger, because her wings are smaller and the feathers look less full. She's standing on a branch of a tree, the sun framing her. She's smiling. She's happy. next, another image of Lundyn, this one a bit older, sitting next to what one could assume to be her parents. She still looks happy, but then the image flickers, changing to an angry Lundyn. a very, very angry Lundyn, who is . there are large pieces of the ground floating around her, seemingly frozen in time. Her eyes have an orange glow to them. She is floating in the air, wings spread. the second-to-last image lasted for not even five seconds. it's an image of her parents. they're lying next to each other in a field of daisies. they're holding hands. Something made Tal realize that was the last thing they ever did. the last image was of Lundyn flying away.

a sharp pain last for a brief moment before everything stopped. No more force field, no more piercing noise. The lights begin to flicker back on. Lundyn's body has gone limp.

@Edema Rue @Canada Lover @Cash67

It was Aeoryi who screamed first, confused at what the storming was going on.

Posted
11 minutes ago, shortcake said:

Lundyn's memory begins to play inside of Tal's (and anyone else who wants to) mind in flashes. First, Tal sees a younger version of Lundyn. He could tell that she was younger, because her wings are smaller and the feathers look less full. She's standing on a branch of a tree, the sun framing her. She's smiling. She's happy. next, another image of Lundyn, this one a bit older, sitting next to what one could assume to be her parents. She still looks happy, but then the image flickers, changing to an angry Lundyn. a very, very angry Lundyn, who is . there are large pieces of the ground floating around her, seemingly frozen in time. Her eyes have an orange glow to them. She is floating in the air, wings spread. the second-to-last image lasted for not even five seconds. it's an image of her parents. they're lying next to each other in a field of daisies. they're holding hands. Something made Tal realize that was the last thing they ever did. the last image was of Lundyn flying away.

a sharp pain last for a brief moment before everything stopped. No more force field, no more piercing noise. The lights begin to flicker back on. Lundyn's body has gone limp.

@Edema Rue @Canada Lover @Cash67

Pic stumbled forward to the floor, overcompensating now that the field was no longer there. He groans, and rolls over to his back so he can hop up. He turns around, and sees Lundyn's body on the floor. He curses under his breath and rushes to check for a pulse. When he finds one, he sighs in relief, and picks her up, careful not to mess with her wings too much. 

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btw @shortcake how large are Lundyn's wings currently?

"Ash, where the heck are you?!" @InfiniteInsanity Pic yells as he carries her over to Tal.

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2 minutes ago, Cash67 said:

Pic stumbled forward to the floor, overcompensating now that the field was no longer there. He groans, and rolls over to his back so he can hop up. He turns around, and sees Lundyn's body on the floor. He curses under his breath and rushes to check for a pulse. When he finds one, he sighs in relief, and picks her up, careful not to mess with her wings too much. 

"Ash, where the heck are you?!" @InfiniteInsanity Pic yells as he carries her over to Tal.

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oh yeah, i forgot about that part-

uhmmmmm they've stopped vibrating and they're really scrunched up now. also some of the feathers that are on them have changed from a cream color to more of a gray, some feathers being darker than others

@Cash67

Posted
Just now, shortcake said:
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Wait I just had a brilliant idea what if Aeoryi sees stuff differently?

Aeoryi quickly exited the medical wing before something bad happened 

Posted
10 minutes ago, Cash67 said:

Pic stumbled forward to the floor, overcompensating now that the field was no longer there. He groans, and rolls over to his back so he can hop up. He turns around, and sees Lundyn's body on the floor. He curses under his breath and rushes to check for a pulse. When he finds one, he sighs in relief, and picks her up, careful not to mess with her wings too much. 

"Ash, where the heck are you?!" @InfiniteInsanity Pic yells as he carries her over to Tal.

Argenti walks forward and touches her forehead
He peers into her mind and sees...
@shortcake

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