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8.9.21 - Moonsilver - Dreams of Devils Chapter 1 (2520 words) (D, V)

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Hey y'all, this is chapter 1 of the first draft of my first fantasy novel, Dreams of Devils. It's rough so let me know where it's in need of polishing.

Questions:

1. What do you think of Nimos? Is he a character you can ride with?

2. Does the world-building get info-dumpy at any point?

3. Is there anything you feel the chapter is lacking?

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Hi! I don't know if it's an issue on my end but I never got the email with the chapter and I was curious if others are having this problem. If it is just me I'm happy to DM you my email so you can resend it. Thanks! 

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Same here, @Moonsilver. I didn't receive the email. I suggest resending it to the group. Looking forward to reading it :)

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I can confirm that I also didn't get the submission. We've occasionally had issues with Gmail flagging RE emails as "promotional" but that doesn't seem to have been the case this time. 

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