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Verdance

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  1. My coffee spilled and im mot allowed to heart the poetry
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    Poetry, but happy

    Endo (inner) morphisis (change) it is conparing the passage of genesis 1 to how people create art and asking the question of what inspired god last line is supposed to be jarring. existential dread, questions about the meaning of art and humanity. yeah i believe the default state of humanity is condemnation
  4. Legendary Verdance lore, i am an anime waifu
  5. if you don’t want to post it dont post it
  6. Notice how nothing I write considered happy is sunshine and rainbows more just depressing poetry with an uplifting realization near the end youve got this
  7. oh, okay. that works ado I need to write something
  8. I mean... go for it. maybe post it all in one massive backlog MFD, so as to not flood the blogs page?
  9. well, that's good to hear.
  10. I challenge you to write something uplifting... to Edgar Allen Poe's "The Raven" rhyme scheme
  11. my whole ribs just clenched reflexively when I read that yeah so here's what this looks like. TW SH
  12. Spoiler it if it shows SH? theres a lot here, nice work Im assuming most of this isnt autobiographical Right right… ? I think I am going to write one scene with SH and abandon the topic altogether I have spent enough time obsessing over it, it has been three months and I haven’t done it since idk, not a commentary on your work just an observation and determination i suddenly have
  13. To answer your question, go for it. Art is art. If youve written a million depressing mfds, i would inquire as to whether you could write a non depressing mfd, but i would still read through all the others cause its really cool to read something with passion and emotion ingrained in it and uh i recommend you find a friend you can DM at all hours, i or my best friend am never online when i need to be and always online when i dont and so feel trapped when im depressed, so this is also something im trying to achieve but having a close friend who cares about you at your fingertips not just because its their job is amazing You associate your name with being in pain? Geez. church is super important to me its where all my irl friends are You don’t know my irl name right Its a bible name and means peace or respite, so i associate it with lies or hypocrisy or falling short, since my respite or distraction causes me stress which dominates my life and i could truly rest if only i actually worked hard for once
  14. Hell does this mean? But yeah all of the above is like 80% exactly my social experience, just without all the church and being stupid and everything
  15. Are they helping?
  16. My friend you didn’t miss anything too special to be frank
  17. See like my initial reaction is that yes I want to be a kid again but i was also never online and homophobic and lonely
  18. I am trying to cancel my action. GMs might be busy
  19. Uh, i just made up a nebula name for the ORV fans on the Shard. That other one is cooler though
  20. Im writing a lot of lyrics for a band with a friend that are stupid depressing. Not saying its bad to do that, just diversify your output a little. Curious to see what youve cooked up! For reference: a chorus to a song called ‘Wraiths’ (chorus screamed), references my friends trauma more than mine “My throat is an open grave, my life is a broken fate, i gave you all i had, you threw it back and laughed, my love, for me it’s far too late for me its far too late” and another depressing one thats more me: “Now im stuck in the spaces between moments, hoping that you’ll let me out, so i can live again. now im stuck, in these places without movement, hoping that you’ll let me up, So I can breathe again. Now Im stuck.”
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