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OKAY FUN IDEA
anybody who writes (or even if you don’t feel free to participate), what are a few sentences/phrases you’ve written recently that you really like?
i’ll go first
“She managed half of a smile, but it looked more like heartbreak.”
“It coated her lungs in a thin layer of frost, which was expelled again in soft, white plumes. Her tennis shoes shuffled over a puddle-filled pothole.”
”The city lights were behind her now, and the rush of ungodly-early morning traffic had faded to a dull hum. She was in the outskirts of town now, where a few small homes, shops, and gas stations stood guard against the night.”
”He was hungry.”
“Weary, she closed her eyes and took a deep breath of the steamy, metallic air. It smelled hot, like sweat, steam, and cloth, like human oils on metal and like work. The air was damp, plastering her hair against the back of her neck and her clothes to her skin. Sounds of scissors, scraping chairs, and fabric filled the factory, of sniffles and heavy breaths, but the loudest of all was the silence between the women. It would be dark soon, and the cacophony would continue by candlelight.”lol those are just some random ones i like but yeah
I WANNA HEAR ALL YALLS FAVORITES THAT YOUVE WRITTEN IN THE REPLIES
OK GO
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I've got a note on my phone containing all the random lines I think are clever that probably aren't. I can't even remember the context for half of them, but I look forward to finding places for them.
Spoiler"Are you afraid that we'll drift apart? Or are you afraid that I'll say 'I love you'?"
"The ice cream was delicious, and so was she." (I meant this in only the most wholesome of ways but it still felt like I needed to go to church after writing it)
"I wonder which line at your funeral will be longer: those who came to mourn you, or those who came to spit on your grave?"
"Which are you?"
"Undecided." (ngl I'm really proud of this one)"I'm dating a moron."
"But you are dating me." (Obvious reference is obvious, but still fun)"Where's it written I have to like you?"
"'Love thy neighbor with all thine heart...'"
"'Love', yes. Don't say nothing about 'like'.""It was six of one, half dozen of the other, but all the eggs were spoiled."
"She thrived on contention--not to say that she was a contentious person, but rather that it was in hostile environments that she was able to do her best work." (This is my other favorite.)
"He was chasing yesterday while tomorrow called after him."
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@Slowswift ooooh i love the hostile environment one
and quite frankly the ice cream one is cute lol
and the very first one
wow a lot of those are rlly good
