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  1. Okay guys, I’ve got a writing exercise for you.

    i do this a lot when I can’t get into a flow, on days where I’ve written a couple hundred words and deleted them and done it again about five times. So today, for example.

    you take a line of ambiguous dialogue and start a scene with it (on PAPER) and write one page in a notebook of that scene. (In a notebook, so pages are smaller than if you type). If a page is too much, set a timer for 5-10 minutes. Then do it again. Start with the same line, but take the scene in a whole different direction. A really fun one for this is

    “get up.”

    ”no.”

    but today’s official dialogue line is as follows:

    ”Catch me. I dare you.”

    you can also end a scene with it or put it in if you’ve got an idea. Do like three baby scenes, and then you can continue anything you want to, but you don’t have to. If you make anything cool, show me!

     

    1. Edema Rue

      Edema Rue

      I put one of mine on my writing thread if anyone’s interested :)

    2. Through the Living Wrath
  2. well hey, if you guys need anything pinned or unpinned or closed and so forth let me know (oh wait, elan can do that too can’t he? nevermind. oops).
  3. Except a very hungry caterpillar. woah when did this get so long I’m so proud
  4. Oh anytime, remember that only some of them taste good!
  5. Tropes I love #2:

    guy best friends

    like not gays

    but guys who are best friends

    young, rich (or very good at stealing), powerful, famous

    the ones who look at the world and know it’s theirs for the taking, who can walk into a room and make conversation stop, whose names turn brick walls into open doors, who move through life with a smile and a wink because nothing can stop them

    the ones who know each other better than anyone else, because they’re too apart from the world for there to be another person

    like…if Viktor and Jayce from Arcane were hotter

    or what’s his nose and what’s his bucket from jujutsu kaisen (sorry I’m really bad at names in anime, I’m too focused on…other things)

    Kaz and Jesper in Six of Crows

    Gansey, Ronan, and Adam in the Raven Boys (that was a weeeeird book but the motivation to write from it was so worth it)

    you guys know them

    dancing through life, perfect clothes, perfect hair, every motion graceful and fluid and easy. always smiling, they never miss a step. Opposites, paired. Not in love, but so in tune that the world bends to them. Best friends. Brothers. 

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    2. Through the Living Hope

      Through the Living Hope

      Valid

      OH 

      Percy and Jason, alternatively Leo and Jason

    3. Edema Rue

      Edema Rue

      Hope you’re so close but so far 😭 

      I realized a good Harry Potter one is Fred and George, except they’re a little too not evil.

      It could be Percy and Nico if they were best friends. But I’m just a Jason hater so you could be right

    4. TwinStorm

      TwinStorm

      oh I've seen it on broadway once, and a super good theater production of high schoolers

  6. So the place I work just opened a new escape room

    guys it’s so fun

    It’s the easiest to run by far and all the technical things are so fun because it’s like…a disaster in Tesla’s lab? So it’s got lots of super cool science things. And magnets. Which worked for my room earlier, but aren’t working now. Which is sad, but also fun because I get to go in and casually rub my hand against the wall and things just fall. I’m a MAGICIAN

    um anyway

    idk, I fear I may have gotten boring

    someone give me a dark writing prompt

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    2. RoyalBeeMage

      RoyalBeeMage

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      Sadly I'm out of rep

      i might be close myself...

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      I feel like we need just a little necromancy in here. Or possession. Like the ghosts posess others and generally torment the one interfering

      what if the possesion causes the person who is possesed to be visible to the blind medium...

      ooh what if the medium isnt blind but can only see ghosts... 

    3. Kansas Stormcursed

      Kansas Stormcursed

      Ooh that would be so cool. Kinda like a Steel Inquisitor, but it's just ghosts

      At this point we gotta throw in the other random friend who just always happens to be around in the shenanigans but has no idea what's going on because they lack context so everything looks just a little odd to them

    4. RoyalBeeMage

      RoyalBeeMage

      and you simply have to have the dog which is possesed by the medium's dog who died at the same time as the ghost friend. 

  7. “What was that?” Eh. Probably wasn’t that important, given everything he’d said already. “Good.” She hurried through the door.
  8. “This is crazy,” Aria muttered.
  9. Aria rolled her eyes, then started searching the room. No sign of Nite. “Does your man upstairs know where he is now?”
  10. “Something’s wrong with you,” Aria decided.
  11. “Say things that make sense!”
  12. “Can I meet him?”
  13. would I like more or would you like more? im sorry to say i dont speak French.
  14. :DD I’m tryinnggggggg
  15. Something New: sorry lol I know this only gives you more questions and has pretty much no answers
  16. “Whose? And…how? You’ve only known about him for the last three minutes.”
  17. My friends, writing is a joy

    preview of the current scene, I’ll put it on my thread tomorrow :D

    Spoiler

    “My name is Aria.”

    That was enough for the boy’s face to pale, his eyes to widen. Girls with pure white hair and dark eyes were Dollys. Dollys did not speak unless spoken to. They did not act without orders. They did not have names.

    Or or or

    Spoiler

    Teacher’s lip curled into a smile. “Nite,” he said. “I believe this man has threatened me, but I don’t want him dead.”

    Nite moved, and an instant later the man was on his knees, Nite’s staff across his throat so that his face was forced towards Teacher. If Nite had been practicing the move on another boy, there would have been some resistance. But this man didn’t even move, and only now appeared to realize what had happened. “How…” he cut off as Nite added pressure with his staff. Nite didn’t speak, but the message was as clear as it was when he disciplined the other boys: wait for Teacher. 

    this world is so messed up I’m obsessed with it

    @Spark of Hope, this scene finally connects Caretaker and Knights, the other ones I’ve posted here.

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    2. Through the Living Hope

      Through the Living Hope

      Oh I absolutely LOOOOVE dystopian

    3. Throw TheLiving Silverware
    4. Edema Rue

      Edema Rue

      okay okay it’s going up right…

      about…

      now

  18. “Hmm…” Aria studied the room. “You saw him?”
  19. Aria opened the door.
  20. “Huh,” Dayla said. “That’s a good point.”
  21. Dayla smiled shyly. “Maybe. But like I said, we travel a lot…I guess portals help with things like that. Maybe. I don’t know. Maybe.”
  22. new career path: quit everything and frolic through the woods all day every day

    not because I hate everything I’m doing, but because…

    look

    Spoiler

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    on a related note, the hoco dress is GORGEOUSSSSS 

    I actually hate dances, but I’ve gotta do them once in a while so that I choose not to do them because I don’t like them and not because I’m scared of them

    besides, how can I be stressed about stuff like that after nearly falling off several cliffs roughly 8500 feet above sea level? People should spend more time being legitimately afraid for their lives. Puts things in perspective.

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    2. Silver Phantom

      Silver Phantom

      Wow, just wow. Those photos are amazing!!

      I will also be taking

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      but I’ve gotta do them once in a while so that I choose not to do them because I don’t like them and not because I’m scared of them

      as a quote I use in every day life

    3. Argenti

      Argenti

      That makes more sense lol

    4. Just-A-Stick

      Just-A-Stick

      Yes Eddie!!!

      Come!!

      Destiny awaits!!

      You can show me real mountains :ph34r:

  23. Dayla shook her head. “Whatever I’ve got. It’s nothing cool, not like what I’ve seen people do since I left home. But it’s good to have something to do with my hands, especially with how much we travel.”
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