Oooohhh new POV character!!! I really like this chapter the only thing that I’d change was when Dahlien says Storms;
It kind of brought me out of the story because that curse doesn’t fit with the world. Maybe you could do like “Stars!” He cussed “I need to think things through more often.” Or ‘Midnight’ or ‘ink’ or ‘by the sun’ or something else. If you do, you should probably make clear that he is using it as an exclamation of annoyance and he’s not just saying an extra word.
Otherwise? Chefs kiss <3