Lord Gregorio

Oh ya. I forgot about that. Very true.

Anyone have good book recommendations for books on how to write? Or maybe like an online class or something I can do. I feel like I need to know more on stuff that actual philosophy/science/professional writers may help with.

So far it seems pretty good; the biggest recommendation as of now is to just keep going. Coming back for an edit is a must anyway so the first draft will suck no matter what. Don't stress too much about that. I'll give some minor pointers (don't take them too seriously. This is coming from someone as experienced or less so than yourself. ) Also understand I might list some things that might be not errors at all, but completely planned on your part. I'll just see what I think. Some minor wording edits to give you an idea of my thoughts for when you go back for the second draft In spoilers because it contains stuff from the book (read cheesman's first draft before you look in the spoilers. It's good stuff) This is all I have for now. I really liked the bit you had and hope you'll be able to publish it. Don't give up. I want to buy it when you publish!! Sorry this turned out so darn long. Lol. Edit: I just finished reading what you've got on the google doc, and I finalize my thoughts. I thought it got really good toward the end. I thought it was a bit of a copy of Stormlight Archive at first, but it is not. It's hard not to see similarities, but that's probably because I've listened to around 400 hours of Stormlight . It's so good though. I like how you don't have to use swear words every tenth word to make people sound angry and stuff. Good work cheeseman.

"I've got a goat in my boot." "You are a sad, strange little goat, and you have my pity. Farewell!" "You are a goat! You aren't the real Buzz Lightyear, you're, you're an action goat!" - (My least favorite one of the three. Thought it would be funnier, but it was not.)

Still no. . Normally I just associate names with profiles. The green on yours threw me off for a second. I'll try to guess though. UUUUUHHH. Brown hair, brown eyes and light skin. . Perfect right.

Let's go. I uh, seal blood I think. Jk I haven't read the book with them yet.

Holy crap! You're wanting to get to 250,000 words! That's massive!

Welcome! This place is a lot of fun.

Sounds like an epic birthday @Channelknight Fadran, hope it ends up to be.

I kinda liked the old one, but maybe that's because I haven't looked at the new one hard enough. Like @The Wandering Wizard said, I like how it's more based toward learning how to solve problems yourself instead of following "rules". There are still rules God has set for us to become perfect, but the new For the Strength of Youth pamphlet is (like I explained before) to help one make inspired decisions by themselves. I had a similar experience. My life is a lot better and I'm a lot less depressed with the sin gone from my life. Love seeing others having great experiences of recovery.

Some terrible memes I randomly found.

Eyo. It's easily remembered, so it's gotta be good. Perry the platypus plumber? / Perry the platypus!?

Woah. That's a lot of adopted siblings. Do you bug all of them? Also that's a cool little quote. Good day/Bad Day (I think that's a good rating)

TPAM makes waffles. Yum.

*sneezes. "Sorry, am I intruding?" Anyway. how exactly is anyone going to win this? Answer: they won't Answer PT 2: Unless the thread gets locked because there are too many pages. lol.

I'm so behind on this thread (and all the others). This question is a super interesting one though because I feel like it's hard to answer (for me at least). I think the government should be able to take away any of our civil rights and they aren't to be taken and given and messed around with as they sometimes have been or are being. To be a bit more precise, before you correct my illiterate typing . I think the constitution should be what is able to restrict someone's more complicated rights. I believe with what cheeseman said a little after about this question. I think life, liberty and property (as well as pursuit of happiness or whatever) are super important, for example, for the United States to remain free. The civil rights part feels more complicated, but maybe it isn't. The constitution was created to keep the government in check while allowing for justice to those who break the law, but because of things that are happening that's changing. I believe we (some of us) as citizens should definitely be reading the constitution and stuff to improve our understanding of what our rights actually are. To have rights and agency there must be laws preventing those who would prevent others agency or take away their rights. Those laws must be protected by due process and knowledgeable citizens. Hopefully that wasn't too confusing. It's probably too close to night to be talking about government for me.

Currently using this to write a book, YES I got sidetracked. I know I should get back to writing, but it's almost bed time. Ugh. Here's an interesting question. Which is better, writing stories with (correction, while you listen to ) epic music, or is sleeping better than writing?

I started reading LOTR The Return of the King cuz I have to help with testing for a school. It's a lot more interesting when you're already bored. A lot easier to read through the slow parts too.

I thought you were gonna say stranger things when I started reading it and was gunna make a joke, but I guess not. SO. What's y'all's favorite ice cream flavor?

Ya. It's very unsettling.

Indeed. And everything fills it, or...something. Oh wait, that's the same thing as what you just said. Oh well.

I just thought of something, maybe it's been mentioned here, but how can one be disproportionately excited about space because your excitement will never be big enough. Space is basically eternal nothingness as we understand it.

I know what's happening, and I'm still confused. I'm not gonna even try joining the conversation. I've been AWOL for too long.

OOh. I love Shadiversity. Somehow I've never seen this video. It has Oz so it's gotta be good.