Arranis takes patrol for a bit longer, before yawning and turning back into human shape. He walks back into the camp. "Next lookout" he says as he wraps himself up in his blankets
Aaron watches as the other goes to sleep, his own eyes feeling heavy. Need to keep a watch he thinks to himself, knowing the dangers of the world, but quickly falls asleep
I fly superman style to the moon racing @BlueWildRye there, and when he arrives I steal the sandwich off him, by cuffing him, and metalbending the cuffs into the ground
So this is my first time posting something I wrote for a competition recently. I don't think it was my best work, and I think that one of my drafts were better, I am looking for some feedback though on my writing style.
A Fathers Grief:
I had a limit of 1000 words or so I thought, it was changed to 1500 and I did not notice, but could I have some feedback?
I would make a trust fund, and only use the interest out of that to do what I want, and let it build up so I can be even more rich,
I have just got to learn how to be patient
How much are we considering rich anyway? @ΨιτιsτηεΒέsτ
Aranis smells something on the air, his nose quivering, something foodlike, but nasty smelling at the same time, he follows it briefly discovering it was something the others were eating. Bleghh, he says to himself, Do not eat those .