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  1. Aeoryi
    Here is the post (it got mixed up and nameless thought Desolation grabbed foreshadowing, so I just cannonized that) Rirrom can do so temporarily. Hence the "82.9% chance of collapsing" and becoming plot development again. "It will just become ordinary plot development, so make sure to have luck on your side when you use it."
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    You know enough to make a conclusion
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    Thread locked?
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    "It's a bit unstable, but it has about a 82.9% chance of collapsing each hit, but that's the best I could do. It should be good for one hit or so." Plot development is the original plotblade
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    Inklings are cool. I think I've set them up well enough that any inkling should be unique
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    "What have you the impression that inklings needed to kill narrators? That isn't even the actual goal." Cognition pondered, then said, "You've been listening to Desolation, haven't you? What did he tell you? That inklings are living in fear of narrators?" Rirrom showed platypus the plotblade, Plot-significance. "This can end anyone's arc with just a scratch; be careful with it."
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    Would it be better to rephrase it into: "Some people don't feel emotional attraction in their current life"? I really don't want this to escalate into a religion or emotion arguement, since this is probably not the place to do this
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    it means someone who wants to be a single pringle basically Unfortunatly, I don't think this is true Some people ignore them. Its not alwAys
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    okay
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    "I decline your offer. I came here for a weapon to prevent narrators from destroying the inklings, not to make them fear us. I once again, am asking for a weapon. Are you even the Dreamsmith?"
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    ig thata where we start
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    yeah that would be good our attemps to make tlt comprehensible. is he still around
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    that scene made me laugh so much. if you could find the page where second was that would be cool.
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    Cognition thought, pondering this offer. Then she finally spoke, "I will need to know what conditions there are first."
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    what about the chess game with eof as a pawn?
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    "I am going to get platypus to kill him."
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    "I seek the power to resist narrators, yes."
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    is the cucumber person important later? sighs
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    Desolation kills because truth bending. "lnkling of the past, brought back by some ancient curse. He can absorb and steal narration, and has a plotblade of his own."
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    at what page? I've gotten to the part where mythos meets the cucumber person
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    "An inkling is an invincible sentient goo mass, basically, and I got Plot development when I first met desolation." "I- Okay."
  22. Aeoryi
    King's folly will probably consist of an adventure instead of fantasy plot. 3 brave adventurers go out to seek help from a demon, who ends up flooding their homeland, forcing them to seek help from elsewhere.
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    page 2117- it has been absolute comedy, but most posts basically consist of: The angry man was angry Very angry unfortunately the angry man was killed by the sad man The sad man was killed by the bat man the bat man was killed by Batman But Batman's power paled in comparison to the Manbat, who had the power of anime on his side But then Batman began a conspiracy plot to destroy manbat Suddently, Pineapples Batman ate the pineapples Suddently, Pineoranges Batman also eats those Suddently, pineapples Batman goes and removes the person behind the pineapples But he never suspected grapes.
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    Rirrom glanced over his shoulder, then spoke, "The effects of Side character have been eating at my soul. I don't even know if the blade will work on an inkling."
  25. Aeoryi

    Why does everyone else have brilliant ideas?

    Okay to be fair I sorta do but still I can't find the momentum for this and such. 

    King's folly - The antagonist is not there. I was considering having Desolation, but he just does not fit.

    So I was thinking about having something with the Ethercosm go on or that- but if nothing else, I might simply write the Prose king's folly.

    Fenrin's arc is incomplete, so I was thinking about making the king's folly actually split between pisces and Fenrin rather than Pisces/Fenrin/Nymphis. Nymphis works much better as a  standalone character for a standalone story.

    but it needs more help. it just isn't right.

    1. Edema Rue

      Edema Rue

      Aww, Aeo. Comparing your writing will never make it better. You write beautifully (I realize i don’t usually respond, but I read a lot of King’s Folly), and your ideas have potential. They aren’t perfect, but no writing is, and looking at what others write and wishing you could do that won’t change it. Don’t give up on things because they aren’t polished yet.

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