DramaQueen

Greetings!!!!! *smiles and does a sneaky win*

I don't know, just do something that you feel shows your basic self? I mean, mine's just a picture of Shallan...

Hmmmmmmm I don't know. What kinds of things are you interested in?

True... I still don't talk to him often though.

Yeah, I probably won't end up doing it, my friend lives all the way across the country and I don't talk to him super often...

Oh, ok! I'd like to join the spectator doc, then.

Granted, your bane is the song Pink Fluffy Unicorns (Dancing on Rainbows) I wish for life to be like a musical.

In order to have the docs shared with me?

Oooh I have a friend who codes, that could be helpful.

Oh, wait. I'd rather not give my email for this game. Sorry for the bother.

Have you read his books? If so, which is your favorite?

*snek boi is smothered by @RadiantDramaQueen, sorry bout that.

Wasing the wanting of joining the game.

I am the first post to use the letter "i," so, in a way, I win.

Why do you guys even bother? It's clear that I am to be the victor.

I see one for Calamity and Firefight, but not one for Steelheart. Maybe you should start one!!!

Thank you for making this, there were a lot of people in my topic Ships!!! who were expecting it to be about seafaring ships, so thank you for making their dreams come true!!

Oooooh yeah that's my guess, too.

Shallan?

1. Yeah, I was going to fix that before I posted, I just forgot to. 2. For your first point, her father was super overprotective, she should have learned that years before, I just can't figure out a way to say that without maneuvering away from the story. Secondly, she still doesn't quite believe in humans at this point, plus, she doesn't have any knowledge of them besides stories, so she views them as monsters to be removed. She will realize how wrong she is later in the story. Also, have you read Brandon Sanderson's Reckoners Trilogy? In this: I think my character's situation is fairly similar...? 3. After you bring this up, I definitely see where you're coming from. That was not a good choice, I'm just not very good at that kind of thing. However, my story does take place in this world, there's just also a portal to a mythical realm. 4. I fixed this, thanks! You had two 4s. There is something like that. Spoilers for later in the book, though, so don't look unless you don't care about spoilers. 5. I agree that it probably is overdone, but would it work if I instead got rid of the abusive home? Her mother's suicide was the main trauma that I had planned on ever since I got the idea for this story, I only added the abusive home as I wrote this chapter. Thanks for your input!!! I would love some advice on how to better improve point 2, It's hard for me to think of a way to fix what you brought up without changing the story, especially since I'd still need a way to get June (and, in turn, Cami and Preston) to the human realm.

Just thought of this one... When, if you find a single person who has read even a single Sanderson book, you overwhelm them with facts, theories, recommendations, and questions on their opinions.

You could have kind of the same setup as the official Knights Radiant quiz, but only have the orders that you want. I guess that's not very academically driven, though.

Q felt all the air leave her lungs. She had never seen anything like this before, and she wondered if this was truly real or if it was just a dream. Tchanta, she thought to the mouse-like creature in her hat. Pinch me so I can be sure that I'm not dreaming. Sending a wave of laziness, Tchanta replied, I don't feel like leaving your hat, so this'll have to do. Queen felt a sharp tug on a strand of her hair, reminding her of a movie she had watched in her younger years, Ratatouille. OUCH! Queen was shocked at the strength of the small creature. Well, I guess I'm not dreaming. You didn't need to pull that hard, though! Sorry. Q could feel Tchanta's sarcasm. Had to make you certain of your awakedness.

I mostly just skimmed it, but that was really good!! Can't wait to read more! Lots of details on the characters, which is awesome!