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he had the Ganon eyes.... and the yellow forehead crystal. those all suggest it was ganondorf *shrug*

we're forgetting all the stuff from the original trailer... zelda and link in the catacombs beneath the castle, finding the corpse of Ganondorf and all the malice. also elephants. elephants pog.

Hoid devoured 798 tasty souls for Thursday lunch. However, Hoid, who had formerly formulated a terrifying plan to eventually become Adonalsium, decided to devour pine-oranges v2.0 of pineapples; this made Hoid a supremely painful deity of waffles, chortles, and power; Fortunately, Jasnah decided to marry Hoid, instead of telling Kelsier YES to an awkward arrangement of marriage which caused a large explosion of pineapples.

Hoid devoured 798 tasty souls for Thursday lunch. However, Hoid, who had formerly formulated a terrifying plan to eventually become Adonalsium, decided to devour pine-oranges v2.0 of pineapples; this made Hoid a supremely painful deity of waffles, chortles, and power; Fortunately, Jasnah decided to marry Hoid, instead of telling Kelsier YES to an awkward arrangement of marriage which caused a large explosion

Calano grimaces as he hears what was said in Emma's dream. "I... I'm not sure what to say," Calano says. "You know I'd never actually say that to you right?"

Calano looks up at the statue, then down at Emma. His face crinkles in sympathy, and he wraps his arms around Emma. "Oh, Emma," He says, holding her, "I'm so sorry."

Calano nods, listening intently. "And then," He says softly.

"Then, what happened in the nightmares?"

Calano looks at Emma. "What happened in the dreams?"

"Nightmares," Calano says quietly.

Calano gets jump-scared by Emma's abrupt awakening and tries to calm her down, saying reassuring words, and offering many hugs as Emma blubbers in anguish.

Of course! It really is quite good though, can't wait to see more.

Grammar and structure is awesome, I love it. Seems a bit too Mistborn-Era 1 inspired, so maybe change up some details to make it more original? I feel taking inspiration from BrandoSando's work, I myself took base inspiration for my fantasy trilogy and the connected universe it's in, so the idea is great! But yes, it seems too similar to Mistborn, so maybe go back and fix that. Other than that, I like it! I definitely would want to read more.

The darkness passes through Wizard harmlessly. "See? What sister would attempt to kill her own brother? Her twin? Her other half?" He glowers darkly at Emma. "You killed me. That's unforgivable." Wizard fades away, and the dream begins to end...

"I'm not your brother," Spits the dream version of Wizard, "Not anymore."

Dream Calano raises his voice, and continues to advance. "You had the power! He was your twin! How could you let him die?" Dream Calano grabs her shoulders and shouts, "How?!" And then he vanishes in a puff of black smoke. Wizard appears in front of her.

Page 14: Tani melts presumably after Shadow messes with Nameless' head. The fake Sanderson book changes hands, and an argument in the clinic lobby ensues after Dom scolds Shadow for tormenting people. Shadow gets fired, and Frustration wants to turn Shadow into fire with a soulcaster. Dom gets angry and confiscates Frustrations' soulcaster.

Calano gently runs his hands through Emma's hair as she has her nightmares. "It's okay, it's okay," He mutters, but honestly, he doesn't know. And then Emma's dreams shift. The dream changes. Her clothes are still soaked with tears and sweat, but now she is in a black void. Calano stands in front of her. His eyes are bloodshot and griefstricken, and he looks at Emma with utmost Disgust. "Why didn't you try harder to save him?" He asks, and his voice echoes around the void. "You could have saved him. Why did you let him die?"

So here's a funny little story; Throughout the mainstream covid years (2020-early 2022) I suffered from mental, emotional, and spiritual burnout, and turned to some... not great things in an attempt to retain my happiness and sanity. I thought it was working. It wasn't. I commited some very agregious sins, and over the past few months, all the lessons in Priests Quorom and Sunday School have been about repentance. I don't think it was a coincedence. And I was in Priests Quorom just this past sunday, and the bishop (i love my bishop he is so cool) was giving a brilliant lesson on, you guessed it, repentance. And, I guess it finally clicked for me, everything I was doing wrong, and I decided right then and there, that it. Would. Stop. So that night, I went into my closet, knelt down, and spoke to my Heavenly Father for the first time in 2 years. I spoke to him as if he were in the room with me, and I was just... talking to him. Not using prayer-speak, just... talking. I asked Him for guidance. I asked Him for help. I asked Him what I should do. I didn't get a verbal response, but I did get a feeling. An overwhelming feeling of love, and of the Spirit. I had forgotten what the Spirit had felt like, and I vowed then and there, that I would try as hard as I could to never lose it again. It is now wednesday. I've prayed nightly to my Heavenly Father, and have felt His hand in my life already, even though it's been three days. And I have a beautiful testimony that He is there, and that He listens, and that the Spirit can be felt, no matter what you've done. The Savior will take your sins upon him, and you will be made clean. Isaiah 1:18 says it best; "Though your sins are like scarlet, they shall be as white as snow. Though they are red like crimson, they shall become like wool." I love you all, and I urge you to pray to Heavenly Father whenever the need arises.

Calano woke, and wrapped Emma in his arms, whispering reassuring words. He glared at the people gathered around the pit. "Couldn't you all do that somewhere else and cover up the pit?"

then why were you crying.