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  1. "Fine, then. Here." Aerith slapped a piece of paper down. "Deed to a stockpile of weaponry down south. Big pile of swords and axes and whatnot. Consider it collateral before I can pay you back."
  2. HAPPY.

    Uh...

    Oh, right.

    ANNUAL SPAWN DAY!! OTHERWISE KNOWN AS BIRTHDAY!!

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!

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    2. Scarletfox

      Scarletfox

      Happy birthday!!! I hope it gets better!

    3. DramaQueen

      DramaQueen

      Happy birthday, CG!!!!

    4. Condensation

      Condensation

      Happy Birthday!!!

      Dang, I thought I was going to be the first one. :P

  3. WHAT ARE YOU???
  4. Janice shies away from where he's pointing, heading into the side corridor.
  5. Since T'Chala said it in the Hishe Dubs for Avengers: Endgame. Ask me questions in my AMA, Queen.
  6. My last lesson was two months ago? If you guys haven't finished your homework yet, then you ought to be ashamed of yourself, you dirty procrastinaters! We left on a cliffhanger, last time, after a pretty dang long post about Plot Development in Worldbuilding. I said I'd write the Character Development in Worldbuilding next, so... I guess that's what I'm doing? LESSON NUMBER FIVE wait, no, no... it's a two-parter. LESSON NUMBER... uh... 4.5? 4, Part 2? Lesson number 42? Four-two? Uh... You know what? Screw it. Moving on! Lesson 4 [redacted]: Character Development! We all love it, we all need it, we all know it's notoriously difficult to pull off. The hardest part about Character Development is making it work in the context of the setting. I once wrote a short story called "Division of Occult" or something like that (I don't actually remember its name), and as a story it was pretty good. The characters interacted well enough, I think, but there was one glaring problem that made it not-good: the setting. The World in this short story was one of oppression. The wizards (called Occults) were the peasant class, and the muggles normal people were the ruling class. I have my own opinions that the Worldbuilding for that, alone, wasn't very good, but that isn't the point; the point was that the character arcs could've been executed exactly the same without the setting. The setting was flavor; the worldbuilding existed, but it didn't matter. This is the first step to character development in worldbuilding: you need to make the world matter. In the vast community of authors, you'll find factions of people leaning towards one element of writing or the other. You'll hear things like 'a good world is the most important thing for a fantasy book,' or 'believable characters are the most important thing for a fantasy book.' Unfortunately, you need both of these things, entertwined, to create a good fantasy story. The world and the characters aren't separate; they have to be so closely related that the story couldn't go on without either. Nice, nice. Very nice, Fadran. Now, uh... could you maybe EXPLAIN HOW CHARACTER ARCS WORK BEFORE YOU EXPLAIN HOW THEY WORK IN WORLDBUILDING? Geeze, guys. Chill out. Honestly, I did nothing at all to provoke that anger, but you're acting like I wrote it myself! You're right, though; understanding how characters work is... kind of important. Only relatively. Just a little bit. Anyways, there are a variety of archetypes for character arcs, but they all follow a basic formula: False belief Growth Change It's... really that easy to write a basic character arc. Step one: write a character with some flaw. Shallan's only purpose in becoming Jasnah's ward was to steal the Soulcaster; she had no other reason to be there, and believed that that was the only way to help herself and her family. Step two: write some character growth. Shallan learned to enjoy being Jasnah's ward. She felt like she belonged there as a scholar of the Vorin faith. Step three: write some change. Shallan was willing to change and realize that she should be Jasnah's ward instead of going back to her family with the Soulcaster. Now, obviously, it isn't that easy, but those are the basic steps. Belief, growth, change. Boom, done. But Fadran, that's boring. What about fallbacks and failures? The double-f's? First of all: never again say the term "double-f." That sounds way too wrong. Second of all: You're right! Again! It's the bumpiness of the ride that makes a character arc entertaining and enjoyable. Shallan giving Jasnah the Soulcaster after stealing it was quite the shaker. Kaladin being able to suck in Stormlight was quite the shaker. Throw potholes into your unkempt gravel road of writing: the drive wouldn't be any fun without them! Anyhoo, back on track with the worldbuilding character arc thing. Perhaps you might be asking yourself how the heck you're supposed to entwine worldbuilding and characters. I mean, in English class, your teachers tell you that you need characters, plot, and setting in order to make a book: they separate the darned things! WHY DO THEY SEPARATE THEM?? THEY SHOULDN'T BE SEPARATED!!! *Clears throat, straightens vest, and puts on a calm face* Where was I? Oh, right... ranting. Hmm... I'd best be moving on from that. Entertwining! Let's do this. It's actually a lot easier to combine worldbuilding and character arcs in fantasy than it is to combine setting and character arcs in regular fiction. This is because of our unspoken agreement that almost all fantasy stories are save-the-world. In a good fantasy save-the-world, your worldbuilding should be very directly correlated to the plot. I think the best example of this is Harry Potter, because (rant in spoiler box): *Ahem* Anyways, in short, if your plot and world are closely correlated, then it's relatively easy to make your characters entertwined with the world as well. The characters change because of events in the plotline, and the plot changes because of worldbuilding elements, so who's to say that characters can't change because of worldbuilding elements? I really want to cite the Iconar Collective right now, but... I seriously doubt that you guys want spoilers for the climax of the third book, nor do I want to give it out (because it's gonna be SCUDDING EPIC), so I'll settle for some Mistborn. Turn your mind back to the climax of Hero of Ages. The reason Vin's able to defeat Ruin is because her Identity's been touched by the power of Ruin and Preservation. She's not held back by the anti-destructive Identity of Preservation because she's partly Ruin as well. Phew! Finally managed to write a good example. You know, the past six or so paragraphs were basically just me stalling until I could think of a good book to cite. So... there you go. Does that make sense! I'm always really insecure about these. Don't die! ~Fadran
  7. Zero Yes. The guy who introduced my to the Shard. Also... have you seen my Shardiversary status update? I have a Queedran picture in it. At least 3 YES
  8. Janice follows behind them all, feeling very exposed with her Traces out in open view.
  9. I don't care if people have already Happy Birthday'd you, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

  10. RAFO!! Just kidding. So the cycle is Earth, Air, Fire, Water. Earthlight dries all the water from Waterlight (creating dust for the duststorms), and Firelight is... kind of like a six-hour-long Autumn? The trees drop all their leaves, and these little buggers called Firemoths come out and eat them. They'll occasionally start small fires, so people are careful to rake the leaves into piles so that they don't burn anything before Waterlight. Overview: Earth: Dries Waterlight rains. Everything becomes dusty. Air: Winds pick up, and dust blows everywhere. Fire: Firemoths eat fallen leaves and start fires. Waterlight: RAIN XD
  11. “Well, I’m definitely not a Radiant Squire, so...” Fadran shrugs. “So how do we get into your base?”
  12. Phew! Finally back on-track. The following two chapters come after the chapter "Training Session," so if you want to go back and reread that... great! Chapter XIV: Chapter XV:
  13. It’s… been a year. Wowza, that shot by fast. It’s probably fate, then, that decided that it’d be fun to make me have a writer’s block right now.

    I’m not going to tag anybody… but then again, I might tag everybody. I’m not sure; I’m writing this ahead of time. I’m worried that if I tag people, I’ll inevitably forget somebody, and that’d be a sad thing. Heck; the Shard might not let me tag everyone, and we all know how feisty the status-update-editing algorithm is (I.E. it does not exist).

    There are definitely some things I need to address separately, so by using the POWER OF SPOILER BOXES, I can categorize stuff!

    The Iconar Collective:

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    Thank you guys all SO much for supporting my book series! I’ve always wanted to be a writer (though I’ve never really wanted to be a writer until a year ago or so), but I’ve never had the proper motivation. With so many people who read, talk, and meme about my book, I’ve been completely willing to keep going; to the point where I’ve written my (almost) longest version yet (it’s second only to Mark 3, but that doesn’t count because the margins are weird, and the font size was 14--in Arial, no less! And I plan on writing more today [yesterday for you guys] so maybe I will break my old record before this goes up).

    As a special thanks for all this support, all you lucky bugs are getting two extra chapters posted. I’ve been working hard on getting ahead of my posted chapters, and it’s paid off; I have three chapters that not even my Beta Squad has read (bwahahahaha!)

    The Fellowship of the Thing:

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    Holy cow, this RP’s only been up for a third of 2020 (yesterday was its 125th day up on the Shard). Since then it’s expanded into Side Tales, Other Tales, Mishmash Inn, a literal lore thread, and (my personal favorite) Seasonal. We’ve taken what was originally just my sheer, untamed boredom, and transformed it into the greatest story on the Shard (I don’t care if that title is self-proclaimed, it’s my Shardiversary and I can SAY WHATEVER THE SCUD I WANT). We got the most lore (okay, actually… probably not, but we can pretend we do), the most epic character arcs (*COUGH* Foxrangking *COUGH*), and the best ships ever (QUEEDRAN).

    Speaking of characters… I made this specifically for today:

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    Shoutouts to other RPs: 

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    Probably my favorite RP on the Shard is Siren’s Call, not least because JANICE. I’d be lying if I didn’t include Crystellation, though, and I’m still really excited for KrystalFyre to make it up there with the big kids. Let’s not forget the Caped Crusaders (Xaoth the Incredible will never die), Radiant Academy (Leonie and Shen may never know who’s the better chess player), Myths and Magi (mmhmm, honey, I know honey; do make sure to say hello to Jeana every once in awhile, mmkay hon?), and The Artifacts (I wonder where it’s going…?)

    The Shard in my Personal Life:

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    I joined the Shard on October 17th 2019 (I’m assuming you guys knew that), but before the pandemic decided to lock us all in our houses for an undisclosed period of time, I wasn’t exactly active here. I think I first started meeting the community on March 21, when I started the now-dead thread “Cosmere Board Games.” Both Experience and AonEne were on there, though I doubt I knew who they were at the time.

    Before The Fellowship of the Thing was put up, probably my most popular thread was High Imperial Academy. Wasing the still knowing of bright saying the say! We had McWafy, Enter a Username, AonEne, Shard of Reading, Experience, The_Truthwatcher, Truthless, Spren of Kindness, DramaQueen, Condensation, Hentient, Frustration, Negative_Null, Turtle (or… sorry, eltruT), and Scarletfox on there. This thread lasted through the beginnings and middles of the Fellowship of the Thing, and a lot of people on there turned out to be some of my closest Shardbuddies—and everyone listed there is someone I consider a Shardfriend.

    I know I said I wouldn’t tag anyone for fear of missing somebody, but now I’m even more afraid of missing somebody because of that massive list up there. I can’t forget Mist, Vapor, revelryintheart (didn’t capitalize it just for you), Matrim’s Dice, Nathrangking, Emi, Ghanderflaffle, I Am A Fish, Danex, Xino, A.C., Darkfinder, Doomstick, Awakened Salad, Fritz, Kelsier’sGodComplex, Bearer of Agonies, Chasmgoat, or Spock. I also hope to get to know people like King’s_Way, HoidWasTaken, MusicalReader, The One Ring, and Aspiring Writer in the future. Dear gosh… I hope that’s everyone. I’m AFRAID.

    Anyways… I had a mental breakdown just a couple days ago. If you’re wondering why I just said that, then you’re probably not alone. I have these every few weeks or so, because social distancing (*spits*) has a weird side effect of violent mood swings. During these breakdowns, I tend to think about the meaning of life, because… y’know. Consistency. During this particular one, however, I was thinking about my friends, many of whom I hadn’t seen since early March. I let my emotions guide me through my thoughts, trusting them to let me know if what I was thinking was right or wrong (that’s how I write emotional scenes, actually). When I turned my mind to the Shard, however, I didn’t expect a wave of gratitude, of all things. My parents don’t know much about the Shard, but whenever I talk about (which isn’t often), they’re always sharing concerned glances: Oh, Fadran’s on the internet. He’s talking to people on the internet.

     I try to respect my parents’ opinions because… well, they’ve been around longer, and they probably know more than I do, but if I had to say one thing that they were wrong about, then it would probably be you guys. I realized, in that moment, that you weren’t just random accounts on the internet; you weren’t even just people on the internet. I came to realize that I considered you guys, anonymous as you are, as friends. All those people I listed up there are my friends. And with so little to be proud of in quarantine, I don’t think I’ve ever felt more accomplished in 2020 than when I realized that I had been in this place with this wonderful community for a whole year.

    So... Happy Shardiversary to me, I guess.

    Thanks, everyone!

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    2. Aspiring Writer

      Aspiring Writer

      I just got over 44 notifs for this. What in the world happened in the 8 hours I was asleep?

    3. Channelknight Fadran

      Channelknight Fadran

      I'm very sorry, Aspire. I probably should've warned you about the dangers of replying to my status updates.

    4. Aspiring Writer

      Aspiring Writer

      It's fine. Just a little shocking is all. You are legit more popular than anyone I've met on the shard, and I'm out of rep points now, otherwise, I would've liked this reply and the answer to my questions.

  14. "They're like... giant colorful cockroaches."
  15. "Ah, uh..." Aerith searched his pockets and came up a few hundred short.
  16. "Blood test? Cool!" Fadran pricks himself with his Channelblade, put a couple drops in a vial, then drew upon his Channelblade's Divinity to heal himself. He then placed his blood onto the machine, waiting to see what happened.
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