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    Butt pouts.
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    "But..she's loved characters before!" Ah! You're back! You know...I was actually pretty terrified you had actually done something to yourself before you posted about losing your Shard access...
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    "Hey! That was love! Not just loyalty!" "Sure," Butt said rolling his eyes, "easy for you to say, 'Good try! But you failed to save one of the few things you care about but its ok!' How is that supposed to make me feel better?"
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    "Fine...If she blasts me to bits you better bring me back though, Ok?" Butt leans in, not making eye contact, and gives Star a quick peck on the cheek. Tears form in his eyes. "Star...wake up. I...I need you." The tears fall from his face onto Star's. "Star, 'I need you' is what I've always said before, but...I need to confess. Star, (i can't believe i'm doing this) ever sense you helped me realize that you and other Narrators aren't all villains I have admired you. I tried to avoid my feelings about you, saying that I just respected you. That it was only my thanks for everything you have done for me. I never had the guts to tell you...or myself that..." Butt leaned forward for another kiss. His lips meet Star's. Heat rose in his cheeks as the kiss continued, but Butt couldn't stop. This was his first kiss...and it was wonderful, he was kissing the only girl he truly loved, under his own free will. As the kiss went on Butt began feeling self conscious...as he pulled back sheepishly he opened his eyes to see... I have no idea where all this came from...I feel awkward now...
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    "Wouldn't kissing her without explicit permission, even to save her, be rude and inappropriate?"
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    “Ummmmm?” Butt looks behind him, glances back at Ember, traces her gaze to him. Once again looks behind him. Walks around behind him making sure nobody was invisibly behind him. “Me?” Quick godmodding? “Yes, you. Who else?” “No, sorry. Not possible. I don’t love her I just really enjoy her company and would do almost anything for her and idolize her and *groan* I storming love her don’t I?” “Well it doesn’t matter, if I love her it’s still not true love cause she definitely doesn’t love me. She’s in love with Marsh and maybe Xino. And they won’t work because Marsh is dead and Xino is gone.”
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    Ok...nevermind then. Back to the story! Butt heard Star, reminding him that she existed. too sad to write
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    Is anyone else creeped out that BoS left the Shard right after having her character commit suicide?
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    Um...no. Just no. Please? I understand dark and depressing. But suicide, even if it will be magicked away is too far.
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    “Stop ignoring my super emotional plot driving points!!” Butt yelled. “Stop running! Stop! You..you..Coward!”
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    “Wait! BoS! You think you know suffering? You think your life is hard? Go, grab Star’s hand. I dare you. Then you will know true suffering. Otherwise, you don’t deserve to be sad or whine about your life.”
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    “Ember! Please catch her! I wasn’t done being emotional with her!”
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    “Shadow...Star needs you. You’re a foil to her character. You make her what she is.” Butt unleashes a wave of power that removes all underage substances from the thread for an indefinite amount of time. “Please? For her? For me?”
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    “That is the first thing you have said that makes sense” How is Star doing right now?
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    “No, she just had...a forceful personality. She expected people to follow her and they usually did. And she did let others have their own stories. While she had hers, just like now actually. Somehow the people who banished her thought that she was the villain! Can you believe that?”
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    Butt was silent, thinking. “I don’t know, I don’t understand her deep thoughts... As for why she was banished, other Narrators didn’t like the way she was driving the story”
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    “She..saved me...saved everyone in fact. She was a Narrator, she chose to become a character to be with and protect her love, Marsh. She drove the story for a long time. She truly cared.” He goes into a tangent about how awesome Star is, completely glossing over the fact that he attempted to destroy her for her treacherous acts of villainy.
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    So...Astral? But on fire? Sorry I haven’t read that story line just guessing. “Star! Please!” Butt looked up at Ember, “Please do what you did to me to her. I need to...no...must help her. I will take on part of her burden once again. Then you can ease her pain. Star can save us. I know she can.”
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    In a really emotional scene Butt turns around, sees Star, cries out, then gives another person a hug once again. “I’m sorry Star, I wasn’t strong enough.” “Oh...and I’m sorry Ember”
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    Butt’s fragile mind slowly brought itself back together. “So, you aren’t Star?”
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    Posted this in the Meme thread and had to repost here. “Star? What’s wrong?” Butt says letting go of her. “You’re healed! Thank you for saving me from the pain.”
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    Butt opened his eyes. His existence was over, the pain must have ended, Butt must have been ended. At least he thought. His mind didn’t want to think. Thinking brought pain. He heard Star’s cry. And everything returned to him. Looking at Ember he asked, “Star? What just happened? I...” He starts crying and once again tries to give someone a hug. Only this time it’s Ember because his broken mind thinks its Star.
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    Butt's mind screamed, non-canonically attempting to spread his pain to other worlds to save himself.
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    Butt didn't want to think...but then he thought about not thinking and that brought pain...perhaps only pain existed and there was nothing else. He couldn't remember anything other than it anymore...he only could remember one thing, a face. A figure that gave him the pain. Butt wanted to hate her, but for some reason he didn't. He must've cared for her before the pain, but she did this to him. Before he could finish his internal monologue the pain attacked. When it receded he didn't remember what he was talking about. Butt gasped. "Yes! Please take it" he thought to the voice. Another part of his mind begged him to take hold of the pain, to not give it away. His mind screamed, fighting with itself. "No!" the other part yelled, "Let me keep it. I must protect you" even thought it had no idea what it was trying to protect.
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