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    "The plan is more or less unchanged," said Tom, turning away from Heather. "It becomes even more important we find Narrator Shadow now, I think. Silence may not believe us otherwise. You two, Xino, Star- that's your job. The other Tom and I will start working on the bridge. Astral and Sha-Heather will locate Pheonix and Butt and direct us to them. Any questions?"
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    Of course.
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    We make a new one.
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    Tom watched the serum work with satisfaction. "What did you say her name was, again?"
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    Who were you thinking of including?
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    There was an idea a few pages back. Rosharan characters.
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    Kill Raoden. Elend - 2 You are horrible people.
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    Heal Susebron, Hurt Raoden Elend - 2 Susebron - 2 Raoden - 1
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    Heal Susebron, Hurt Raoden. Elend - 2 Susebron - 3 Raoden - 2
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    Hurt Raoden, Heal Susebron Elend - 2 Susebron - 4 Raoden - 3
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    Hurt Elend, Heal Susebron Elend - 2 Susebron - 5 Raoden - 4
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    Canonically, that's in the Mountain of the Gods.
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    Hurt Raoden, Heal Susebron Elend - 4 Susebron - 6 Raoden - 3
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    I see. I would just call that non-canon and leave it at that.
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    Could you explain a bit more? I don't think I quite get it.
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    Tom knelt down and poured the serum down her throat. Then he jumped up and took a few steps backwards. The serum awoke. First, it thought, burns. A red glow began to emanate from within Heather's fallen form. Slowly but surely, her burns began to heal, flesh spreading together. Oh! it thought, as it felt something oppose it. What's this? Gently but firmly, it pushed on the whatever-it-was that was resisting it. The charred skin began to evaporate in trails of smoke as the healing accelerated. Next, it thought, loss. It touched Heather's soul with a comforting embrace, healing her grief and putting her mind to rest. She would still miss those she had lost, but acceptance would put her soul at peace. Finally, it thought, guilt. Cautiously, the serum opened up the memories of failure and confronted the poor soul. This part was outside of its control- it could try to provide assistance, but the ultimate result was up to the patient's subconscious. They would either accept the responsibility and the guilt, in which case the serum would soothe the pain away; or they would reject it, and he would be forced to leave it unhealed. At last, after each memory had been confronted, the serum released her mind. She had been rather disappointing, to be honest, rejecting far more mistakes than she accepted, but in other areas she had healed wonderfully. The serum didn't have a mouth, but if it did, it would have smiled in satisfaction.
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    Would it be non-canon? That seems like it would work better for this sort of setting.
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