Yeah. I dont know, I just want to get the beginning down. I think I need to start earlier than I did, maybe. So it starts with Riem getting the job, some world building, job, capture.
I think I want to handle the characters past Cowboy Bebop style. Flashbacks are short glimpses, most of it is told though the present story and while you may be able to figure things out you never get any actual answers. I like that. Ambiguity, I like ambiguity.