the fellowship of the thing The Mishmash Inn (Retired)

[Channelknight Fadran]

"Well... we would begin the game in a few days, and before then, either team captain would have to recruit people to their team. If that were the case, I would change the winnings to a prize pool; 1000 MM to the winning team, to be divided up amongst the players however the captain deems fit. The captain may present deals with these winnings to the players to sway those players to those side. Any deals that the players agree to are considered binding, so you're not allowed to lie."

[Condensation she/her]

"That's a good idea! Yeah, I like that."

[Turtle they/them]

“Ooh! I’ll go for that. My teams max number of players is gonna be 11, and I’ll decie where the MM goes, though I’ll do deals of anyone wants.”

[Mist she/her]

"That'll be interesting. Well, I'd better get back to work. You know where to find me." Shay walks off into the hallways, just after checking the contents of the vending machine.

[Channelknight Fadran]

1 minute ago, Mist said:

"That'll be interesting. Well, I'd better get back to work. You know where to find me." Shay walks off into the hallways, just after checking the contents of the vending machine.

You can't see what's in the vending machine, and there's a huge payment slot.

[Enter a username]

Enter inserted his arm into the vending machine. As in, he cut it off, regrew it with gold compounding, and stuck the severed arm into the payment slot.

[Mist she/her]

1 minute ago, Channelknight Fadran said:

You can't see what's in the vending machine, and there's a huge payment slot.

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I'm the Engineer. I was checking to see if it needed restocking. 

 

[Channelknight Fadran]

Just now, Mist said:

I'm the Engineer. I was checking to see if it needed restocking. 

The vending machine never needs restocking.

[Mist she/her]

1 minute ago, Enter a username said:

Enter inserted his arm into the vending machine. As in, he cut it off, regrew it with gold compounding, and stuck the severed arm into the payment slot.

A sheep, a sword, and a sling come out.

Just now, Channelknight Fadran said:

The vending machine never needs restocking.

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Okay.

 

[Turtle they/them]

summer stuffs multiple orange apples into the vending machine

 

[Enter a username]

3 minutes ago, Mist said:

6 minutes ago, Enter a username said:

Enter inserted his arm into the vending machine. As in, he cut it off, regrew it with gold compounding, and stuck the severed arm into the payment slot.

A sheep, a sword, and a sling come out.

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[Scarletfox]

"Sounds fun to me! I like games!" Rubrum smiled, she liked games, a lot. "Who wants to be on my team?" She asked. 

[Condensation she/her]

"Um, I don't know. I kind of feel like that might be a wise idea, but I also want to get something if or when I win."

[Mist she/her]

15 minutes ago, turtle said:

summer stuffs multiple orange apples into the vending machine

 

Out comes a bottle of orange apple sauce.

[Turtle they/them]

"Twenty MM if you join my team!" Summer shouts while eating her orange applesauce. 

[Condensation she/her]

"No matter if we win or lose?"

[Scarletfox]

"You'll get 50 MM if you join my team! Whether or not we win, though we undoubtably will." Rubrum says with a sly smile.

[Enter a username]

"I don't completely trust you. I'm joining Summer."

[Condensation she/her]

"Um, I'll join you. What did you say your name was?" asked Aria, heading toward the girl smiling slyly.

[Scarletfox]

"My name is Rubrum. And we will have the winning team." Rubrum says confidentally.

[Condensation she/her]

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That should be either *confidentially, or *confidently.

"Hi Rubrum, I'm Aria. I was thinking the best way to get through this game would be to be on the same team as you, I hope you don't mind."

I paused. "Wait, is Narration or spying on Narrators allowed?"

Edited September 25, 2020 by Condensation

[Scarletfox]

Just now, Condensation said:

"Hi, Rubrum, I'm Aria. I was thinking the best way to get through this game would be to be on the same team as you, I hope you don't mind."

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Whoops, that was a typo; it was supposed to be confidently 

I believe the third comma in that sentence should either be a semicolon or a period; correct me if I'm wrong.

"It's certainly a pleasure to meet you, Aria. You have good tastes." Rubrum replied.

[Condensation she/her]

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I don't think so, but the first comma shouldn't be there. Just realizing this.

"Same to you. Obviously no matter if we win or lose, we'll have fun!"

[Scarletfox]

1 minute ago, Condensation said:

I don't think so, but the first comma shouldn't be there. Just realizing this.

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Sorry, I'm a debater at heart 

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I think the two sentences need to be separate because they're both independent and not being connected by a conjunction.

 

"Yeah!" Rubrum said enthusiastically, though she very much cared about winning, inside the rules, or not.

[Condensation she/her]

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She's apologizing for thinking badly of Rubrum, although of course she's going to continue. Rubrum is rather creepy.

"So, do we want to ask anyone else to be on our team?"