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10 hours ago, Emi said:

Norie looked at all people going through the portal. 
“Are you sure, that it won’t take us to some bad place?” She asked Fadran unsure.

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Emi, I've noticed that you have a problem with placing commas where they don't need to be placed. This is not all of the commas that aren't necessary or that are needed, but I'm going to let you know and correct you no longer. At least where it comes to commas.

That was kind of mean. Sorry. I know this is your second language, I'm trying to kindly correct your mistakes without being condescending. I'll stop.

8 hours ago, I Used To Be A Fish said:
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:ph34r: I'm hoping I won't get yelled at.

Fish flopped around.

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Wow. Thanks.

7 hours ago, Nathrangking said:

"Let her leave Winter. Let them all leave. What can they give you that I cannot? I will stay if you let them go to the place of their choosing and you never do anything to them again. Fox when you go, leave your demons behind. I would have been here sooner, but I had demons of my own to exorcise. You alone can defeat them. You are a survivor. You have made it. You control your past it does not control you. It will whisper lies into your ears. It will tell you that you deserve to suffer and that you are weak. It promises to save you if you give in. It can say nothing else for you have survived it and moved beyond it. Desperation makes it speak these words. There is no other way for it to gain control. It took me until now to realize this." I send through our mental connection the same warming light as before.

@KyL

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Commas! You get no leniency because I am fairly certain that English is your first language. If I am wrong, correct me.

4 hours ago, Bearer of all agonies said:

Yes, unskeaily snuck away. 

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Hey, Bearer, I just have one thing to say to you.

"My name is Condensation. You killed my sanity. Prepare to die. My name is Condensation. You killed my sanity. Prepare to die."

Anyone who gets that quote, please say so!

Assume that Herate went through the portal.

I've been making notes on what will happen on Sel. I have blueprints for Wyrm's castle, a basic outline of the story(with lots of room for improvisation), and posts drafted for weeks in the future.

Herate finally noticed Jared and audibly gasped. She pulled out her Essence Marks in preparation for the possible fight.

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20 minutes ago, Condensation said:

Herate finally noticed Jared and audibly gasped. She pulled out her Essence Marks in preparation for the possible fight.

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Princess Bride.

 

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2 hours ago, Condensation said:

Emi, I've noticed that you have a problem with placing commas where they don't need to be placed. This is not all of the commas that aren't necessary or that are needed, but I'm going to let you know and correct you no longer. At least where it comes to commas

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Well, I know about it. That’s my biggest problem and my English teacher told me about it already. However I’m for sure not the only one in my class, who has this problem. It’s caused because in Polish you use commas far more often than here and I can’t remember when I should use them here. This is just way too confusing for my bad-in-languages mind and even though I’m learning English for like 10 years already, I still can’t remember it. 
 

Yes, I know, I’m bad at English. Just tell me: does normal person who learned one language for 10 years do that much mistakes?! :(
 

Well, just ignore me. I’m bad at everything.

 

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@Condensation, I was making fun of Channelknight Fadran who had originally said ‘unskeaily snuck away.’

Yay! My 100th, 200th, and 300th posts are on the fellowship! Yay!

Taln randomly starts doing the chicken dance. 

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10 hours ago, Channelknight Fadran said:

I'm calling double godmodding. Hax!

Also gn all

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Sorry (-*-) but hey, it's Winter's mind.. I'm pretty sure I got permission from both of them when we started to do stuff like that

 

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Good morning! A lot happened yesterday after I left. So, once again, I have no clue what Queen is doing.

 

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1 minute ago, Bearer of all agonies said:

You went from blushing at anything Fadran said to icy-cold and business-like. Right now, Taln is doing the chicken dance for no reason.

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Isn't that the plotline of The Fortune Teller episode of ATLA?

 

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2 minutes ago, Bearer of all agonies said:
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You went from blushing at anything Fadran said to icy-cold and business-like. Right now, Taln is doing the chicken dance for no reason.

 

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Oh, yes. Of course.

Queen gives Taln an odd glance.

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4 minutes ago, Bearer of all agonies said:

“Because I want to.”

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Is Jared currently in the same area as us?

 

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Just now, Channelknight Fadran said:
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Yes, and he is watching all of this unfold.

 

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Nice.

"Well, you might want to stop dancing, as we kind of have an evil villain bad guy here to deal with."

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13 hours ago, Channelknight Fadran said:

Emotion! Fadran tells himself. Do the opposite of what Nath taught you... sadness, loss.

"She's... gone." Fadran replies, lowering his sword, feigning loss. "Winter... a crazed and unstoppable spirit... Winter took her."

"What?" said Jared, breaking his Silence. "You let her be kidnapped?"

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“We didn’t let her be kidnapped!” Taln said in an enraged voice. “You should’ve-” he cut off, as he realized he was taking things too far, and didn’t want to cause infighting. “Sorry,” he said. 

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The other party reaches the edges of the city and Vale stops, breathing hard. 

"We didn't lose anyone, did we? We're almost out of the range of our first portal."

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