Email List and Submission Dates

[Robinski he/him]

Shiver me timbers, me too, please!

[Silk she/her]

So @kais,  @Mandamon, and @Robinski for Monday. Any other takers?

Is Monday really going  to be the 27th of January  already...?

[Mandamon he/him]

Oof! This next chapter is 6000 words, but my chapter last week was pretty short. Any objections? The two after this are even longer, so I'll have to split them up into two parts each. (But hey, @kais, it's all about the apprentices and the Ari!)

[kais]

I actually have the same request as @Mandamon. My short story is 7500 words, and I have to turn it in to the audio readers by next Sunday, so no time to split. Would it be all right to sub it all through? 

 

[Mandamon he/him]

9 hours ago, kais said:

I actually have the same request as @Mandamon. My short story is 7500 words, and I have to turn it in to the audio readers by next Sunday, so no time to split. Would it be all right to sub it all through? 

Alright with me.

[Silk she/her]

@Mandamon @kais We don’t have a full roster this week and nobody’s raised any objections, so I’d say go ahead. 

[Robinski he/him]

16 hours ago, Silk said:

@Mandamon @kais We don’t have a full roster this week and nobody’s raised any objections, so I’d say go ahead. 

No objection from me.

[Mandamon he/him]

I'd like a spot for next week. This chapter is suuuuper long at around 7500 words, so I'll try to find a good place to divide it unless people are just really excited about a long chapter.

[Majestic Fox he/him]

Hello friends. How are you all? Hope everyone's writing has been going well. 

Feels a bit cheeky dropping in without having posted anything or given feedback in a long while. I'm claiming fatherhood for my extended absence. Harder to find time now, but the writing is still happening.

Would it be indecent of me to throw a short story out for feedback next week?

[Robinski he/him]

8 hours ago, Majestic Fox said:

Hello friends. How are you all? Hope everyone's writing has been going well. 

Feels a bit cheeky dropping in without having posted anything or given feedback in a long while. I'm claiming fatherhood for my extended absence. Harder to find time now, but the writing is still happening.

Would it be indecent of me to throw a short story out for feedback next week?

Mr. Fox! Good to hear from you.

As a father, I would say no, not indecent at all. Go for it > 1 vote.

[Mandamon he/him]

Also looking for a spot next week on Feb 10th. I've got the second half of this chapter which is 1) a lot shorter and 2) finally gets out of the waffling stage (I hope).

[Robinski he/him]

I'd like a slot on Monday, please. Need to get the momentum back  

[Silk she/her]

So we have @Majestic Fox, @Mandamon and @Robinski for Monday?

[Majestic Fox he/him]

On 04/02/2020 at 10:24 PM, Robinski said:

Mr. Fox! Good to hear from you.

As a father, I would say no, not indecent at all. Go for it > 1 vote.

Thank you, sir! 

Much appreciated. 

[Mandamon he/him]

I'll go ahead and put my name in for next week.

[Robinski he/him]

Me too as well, please.

[Robinski he/him]

Quandary: I've re-written the ending of Chapter 19 (25), but I really don'y want to submit it a third time, that is unfair, and the first bit (up to where they leave D's house) is unchanged. They end up in the same place, subduing the agents, and with the same last line, so I feel I can push off from that point with Chp 1A (26) just as easily.

Any opinions about what you would like to read next (A) 1,600 re-written words of that blinking Chp19 again, or Chp 20?

[Mandamon he/him]

9 hours ago, Robinski said:

Any opinions about what you would like to read next (A) 1,600 re-written words of that blinking Chp19 again, or Chp 20?

I'm fine with a summary, if you want to submit some new stuff.

Also, a question/warning from me: I'm submitting half this chapter for next week, but the best place to break it is around 6000 words. Is that ok?

(I'll submit the other 3000 (!) next week)

[Robinski he/him]

I have no problem critiquing 6k words, and thanks for the feedback, @Mandamon.

Edited February 15, 2020 by Robinski

[shatteredsmooth]

20 hours ago, Robinski said:

Any opinions about what you would like to read next (A) 1,600 re-written words of that blinking Chp19 again, or Chp 20?

I'd rather get to new stuff. You could always just include a little summary of how the last part changed. 

11 hours ago, Mandamon said:

Also, a question/warning from me: I'm submitting half this chapter for next week, but the best place to break it is around 6000 words. Is that ok?

(I'll submit the other 3000 (!) next week)

That's fine with me. With the following week being shorter, the two subs will end up averaging out to the right lengths. And I get so caught up in your subs that I probably wouldn't even notice the extra words. 

[Mandamon he/him]

Putting my name in for next week to finish off this chapter. I may drop back the week after and resubmit an edited first chapter, if I get it done by then.

[Silk she/her]

Just @Mandamon so far for this week? Any other takers?

[Robinski he/him]

I'd like to submit, but it's very unlikely to be Monday, or even Tuesday, I'm afraid  

[kais]

On 2/14/2020 at 11:39 PM, Robinski said:

Any opinions about what you would like to read next (A) 1,600 re-written words of that blinking Chp19 again, or Chp 20?

I don't mind rereading things at all, so I'd say yeah, submit again. It makes future crits more accurate, too

[Robinski he/him]

On 23/02/2020 at 9:45 PM, Robinski said:

I'd like to submit, but it's very unlikely to be Monday, or even Tuesday, I'm afraid  

I'm still not done editing the chapter. I'll wait till next Monday.