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15 minutes ago, Through The Living Glass said:

He grinned more widely than she had ever seen him grin in her life.

"I came to see if you needed any help getting to the Underworld, dahling."

aw wait that’s kind of cute wait

 “We’re all set.”

Posted
On 3/22/2025 at 9:52 PM, The Sly Cookie said:

 "I'm afraid that won't work." Cyrus says. Somewhere in his voice you can here an echo of sobbing, clearly trying to be hidden.

 

On 3/22/2025 at 9:55 PM, Hawks said:

"IT HAS TO! I CANT BE ALONE AGAIN. Not again." She holds rhe ground. And whispers. "Not again." Shes cursed. Everyone around her leaves or died. She was only 10. Why couldn't she have a normal life. "Ashton. Please come back. Please please please i need you! I loved you! You were my brother! I need you back!" She screamed. Tears ran down her face the same way they did when mam and dad yelled. 

 

32 minutes ago, SpiritOfWrath said:

Drin appears. “Do you need help?”

You might wanna catch up to atlas's little world flop

Posted
1 minute ago, SpiritOfWrath said:

Uuuuuhhhh

summary?

Gesp.

Ok

So thw Cyrus guy burnt all of cookies characters. And that includes Ashton. And atlas saw Ashton burn. She tries he narrate him back but it doesnt work. And that leads us to this.

Cyrus: I'm afraid that won't work little one. 

Then atlas says this quote

3 minutes ago, Hawks said:

IT HAS TO! I CANT BE ALONE AGAIN. Not again." She holds rhe ground. And whispers. "Not again." Shes cursed. Everyone around her leaves or died. She was only 10. Why couldn't she have a normal life. "Ashton. Please come back. Please please please i need you! I loved you! You were my brother! I need you back!" She screamed. Tears ran down her face the same way they did when mam and dad yelled. 

 

Posted
Just now, Hawks said:

Gesp.

Ok

So thw Cyrus guy burnt all of cookies characters. And that includes Ashton. And atlas saw Ashton burn. She tries he narrate him back but it doesnt work. And that leads us to this.

Cyrus: I'm afraid that won't work little one. 

Then atlas says this quote

 

Ooohhh

ok

@The Sly Cookie

Drin set a hand on Atlas’ shoulder, kneeling beside her and staring into Cyrus’ eyes. “Do not worry, little one. Do you remember what I told you, so long ago? They go on, to a better place. A happier place. All this means is that Ashton is there, now.”

Posted
2 minutes ago, SpiritOfWrath said:

Ooohhh

ok

@The Sly Cookie

Drin set a hand on Atlas’ shoulder, kneeling beside her and staring into Cyrus’ eyes. “Do not worry, little one. Do you remember what I told you, so long ago? They go on, to a better place. A happier place. All this means is that Ashton is there, now.”

she clutched the ground where ashton had been. "He was my brother. He's.  He's he's gone! No! Make him come back drin! Please!"

Posted
Just now, Hawks said:

she clutched the ground where ashton had been. "He was my brother. He's.  He's he's gone! No! Make him come back drin! Please!"

He looked down, tears flowing. “Oh, Atlas. I… I hope you understand, someday. This…. This is not to be.”

He swallowed. “Death is not meant to be conquered. Trust me.”

Posted
Just now, SpiritOfWrath said:

He looked down, tears flowing. “Oh, Atlas. I… I hope you understand, someday. This…. This is not to be.”

He swallowed. “Death is not meant to be conquered. Trust me.”

No not them both crying 😢 

she turns and clings to drin with more strength then a normal ten year old. Like he was her lifeline. 

Posted
Just now, SpiritOfWrath said:

He returns the hug.

um

yea

Im fleshing out his character

Fleshing out???

Huh.

"will i see him again?"

Posted
Just now, Hawks said:

Fleshing out???

Huh.

"will i see him again?"

“Yes, child. We all go to the same place, in the end. What matters is the time we spend together, the journey we walk until then.”

borrowing from Brando Sandro a bit for this speech

Posted
22 minutes ago, Through The Living Glass said:

okie the "dahling"is killing me to type tho I kinda hate it but that's how he talkssssssss 😭😂

"You're sure? I could help you get there much faster."

lol i can just imagine the accent 

“I think so.”

Posted
3 minutes ago, SpiritOfWrath said:

“Yes, child. We all go to the same place, in the end. What matters is the time we spend together, the journey we walk until then.”

borrowing from Brando Sandro a bit for this speech

What does fleshing out mean???

she nods "ok" she wipes her eyes but doesn't let him go. He can't leave her too. 

Posted
Just now, Hawks said:

What does fleshing out mean???

she nods "ok" she wipes her eyes but doesn't let him go. He can't leave her too. 

OH

it sounds wrong out of context

so

he didn’t really have much of a set personality before, I’m making it better, ya know?

He glared again at Cyrus.

Posted
Just now, SpiritOfWrath said:

OH

it sounds wrong out of context

so

he didn’t really have much of a set personality before, I’m making it better, ya know?

He glared again at Cyrus.

Ooh

Ok

 Makes sense. 

@The Sly Cookie

Posted
10 hours ago, Through The Living Glass said:

Jack?

If I interpreted you correctly, you said that a new character I made could be introduced through them sneaking up on him (he will literally jump ten feet in the air, it’ll be great). 

Posted
11 hours ago, Through The Living Glass said:

He shrugged.

"Alright."

He summoned a banana and started eating it, peel and all.

"--Uh-- um, Herm..... that's not--"

Posted
3 hours ago, Dragonheir said:

If I interpreted you correctly, you said that a new character I made could be introduced through them sneaking up on him (he will literally jump ten feet in the air, it’ll be great). 

Ah, yes, okay. I was just confused if this character was already established or a completely new one :P

42 minutes ago, Kajsa said:

"--Uh-- um, Herm..... that's not--"

"Hmm?"

Posted
2 hours ago, Through The Living Glass said:

He raised an eyebrow curiously but let her take it.

She took it and peeled it for him, then gave it back. "There you go."

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