Patar Posted April 11, 2016 Report Share Posted April 11, 2016 Post is up, let me know what you think. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nashan’Elin Posted April 12, 2016 Report Share Posted April 12, 2016 I really liked your post, it was really well-done. Can't wait to see where it leads! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BreathTaker Posted April 12, 2016 Report Share Posted April 12, 2016 BB, do you want one of the other Mandos to find you and help you? Also, I think we should start a Mandalorian clan on the Shard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citadel16 Posted April 12, 2016 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2016 (edited) BB, do you want one of the other Mandos to find you and help you? Also, I think we should start a Mandalorian clan on the Shard speaking of which, how should we do that? different threads? Group PMs? secret handshakes? Post is up, let me know what you think. upvote. upvote is what I think. tempted to have my sith lord contact him with a job to hunt down valran. he's not a jedi after all Edited April 12, 2016 by WarriorMark16 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elithanathile Posted April 12, 2016 Report Share Posted April 12, 2016 BB, do you want one of the other Mandos to find you and help you? Also, I think we should start a Mandalorian clan on the Shard Yeah, I'd be fine with that. Meeting up with another Mando sounds like a good idea, but I think we first need to have people land on a planet, so the meetup can be there, instead of in the middle of space, as well as needing an actual reason to be together. Maybe the other Mando needs help with a bounty, and hires my guy? It's slightly general OOC of Mandos, but if they were having a lot of trouble, then it could work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clockwork Posted April 13, 2016 Report Share Posted April 13, 2016 Post is up. Please give feedback. Feedback will be loved here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citadel16 Posted April 13, 2016 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2016 Post is up. Please give feedback. Feedback will be loved here. anything can be bought on the black market these days. curiosity, that famous cat killer, has asked me to ask you which sith he will be hunting and was also wondering if we might have a strange moment when both our characters bump shoulders without realizing that they just both walked by a protagonist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citadel16 Posted April 13, 2016 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2016 hmn... Im not sure what to think of someone who posts without introducing himself first... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nashan’Elin Posted April 13, 2016 Report Share Posted April 13, 2016 hmn... Im not sure what to think of someone who posts without introducing himself first... Well, the post is pretty good, so I think it's OK. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citadel16 Posted April 13, 2016 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2016 Well, the post is pretty good, so I think it's OK. yeah, I agree, it was a fine post. I'll just PM him to see if he knows about this thread. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Windspren Posted April 14, 2016 Report Share Posted April 14, 2016 (edited) Sorry, I didn't know that you were supposed to post here first... Name: Faolin Nirdaesa Race: Human Height: 6'2" Weapons: A custom blue lightsaber, usually a blaster, and whatever else is on hand. Ship: He goes through ships really fast, as they tend to get destroyed. He doesn't usually name his ships, as they are destroyed often enough that he doesn't bother. Abilities: He has terrible Force sensitivity when compared to the Jedi, and can barely execute a decent Force Push, but has excellent precision in using the Force. Personality: Basically a more cheerful Kaladin. Background: He was raised by the Jedi in the hopes that he would be a powerful Force user, but once he started training, it became clear that he had very little connection to the Force. He was later dismissed from the New Jedi Order for his lack of powerful Force abilities and for lacking the ability to contain his emotions, and has roamed the galaxy for various reasons ever since. Appearance: Brown hair and light grey eyes. Edited April 14, 2016 by Kevino36 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nashan’Elin Posted April 14, 2016 Report Share Posted April 14, 2016 Personality: Basically a more cheerful Kaladin.My only problem is the use of the words "Kaladin" and "cheerful" in the same sentence I'm just kidding this looks pretty good 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Windspren Posted April 14, 2016 Report Share Posted April 14, 2016 My only problem is the use of the words "Kaladin" and "cheerful" in the same sentence I'm just kidding this looks pretty good Technically, that was a fragment, so it doesn't count. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citadel16 Posted April 14, 2016 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2016 (edited) I think Kaladin can be cheerful. He's just never cheerful on his own. he needs friends. which is why... everytime he finds himself in a hard position... he finds the people around him.... and holds onto them... as hard as he can... but friends are like fine pottery... they break if you shoot them with half a dozen arrows and trample them as you carry a heavy bridge. yeah. I know. anyway, here is something I find fun Obi-wan sass. its almost as if he's looking up to the thing I wrote. Edited April 14, 2016 by WarriorMark16 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patar Posted April 14, 2016 Report Share Posted April 14, 2016 (edited) BreathTaker, did you want Rook to show up to one of the sentinel training sessions? Vornskrs (what Storm is) can actually detect the force. Maybe the younglings could be given a test/trial, and Rook and Storm could help supervise (if that's alright, of course). Warrior, perhaps your Sith could hire a group of bounty hunters? Those who want to participate in the hunt for Valran can, but if they had some other direction they wanted their character could go through they could instead pursue that? I don't know, I'm just trying to throw out some ideas. Edit: I'm also a bit confused on what we are doing for the whole council thing. How exactly does that work? Edited April 14, 2016 by Patar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citadel16 Posted April 14, 2016 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2016 Warrior, perhaps your Sith could hire a group of bounty hunters? Those who want to participate in the hunt for Valran can, but if they had some other direction they wanted their character could go through they could instead pursue that? I don't know, I'm just trying to throw out some ideas. Okay. that sounds like an idea worth working for. Edit: I'm also a bit confused on what we are doing for the whole council thing. How exactly does that work? What I think we should do is have the council meetings be a big collaborative... thingy. anyway, if we did it the way I think we should, we would have it be from the perspective of the person the council is interviewing and they would do react to what we make our council characters say and do. or we could do it the old fashioned way, post by post. btw, what planet is the council on. I vote Yavin 4 or Naboo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Windspren Posted April 14, 2016 Report Share Posted April 14, 2016 Does anyone want to be the assassin that's trying to kill me? A cloaking device could explain how they went unnoticed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citadel16 Posted April 14, 2016 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2016 (edited) I have always thought it better to have a personal sub plot so when the writing gets isolated and you don't know where to move you can always throw your antagonist into the mix and spice things up. maybe you could have this assassin character to play that role? Edited April 15, 2016 by WarriorMark16 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BreathTaker Posted April 16, 2016 Report Share Posted April 16, 2016 BreathTaker, did you want Rook to show up to one of the sentinel training sessions? Vornskrs (what Storm is) can actually detect the force. Maybe the younglings could be given a test/trial, and Rook and Storm could help supervise (if that's alright, of course). Warrior, perhaps your Sith could hire a group of bounty hunters? Those who want to participate in the hunt for Valran can, but if they had some other direction they wanted their character could go through they could instead pursue that? I don't know, I'm just trying to throw out some ideas. Edit: I'm also a bit confused on what we are doing for the whole council thing. How exactly does that work? I like it. PM me and we'll talk deets Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citadel16 Posted April 19, 2016 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2016 this thread is quiet. so I will spice it up. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patar Posted April 19, 2016 Report Share Posted April 19, 2016 PM'ed Breathtaker last night, we'll start working on a post soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citadel16 Posted April 19, 2016 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2016 sweet! I have two posts ready on my typing device thingy, but I cant find the cord that connects it to the computer... first world problems. anyone ready to accept the call? because Ventrus is sending out a recruitment transmission to the bounty hunters. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citadel16 Posted April 19, 2016 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2016 (edited) hey guys, I just wanted to ask is who's interested in hunting down Valran? there's lots of $$MULA$$ in it for you your character Edited April 19, 2016 by WarriorMark16 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patar Posted April 19, 2016 Report Share Posted April 19, 2016 (edited) hey guys, I just wanted to ask is who's interested in hunting down Valran? there's lots of $$MULA$$ in it for you your character I'll have Rook start tracking him as soon as his meeting with Kalin is concluded. Also, 400th post. Edited April 19, 2016 by Patar 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nashan’Elin Posted April 20, 2016 Report Share Posted April 20, 2016 hey guys, I just wanted to ask is who's interested in hunting down Valran? there's lots of $$MULA$$ in it for you your character IX39-B can hear the message on its ship 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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