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Wrong.

 

Also I modified the boast a little(sorry for these edits) and want make a detail clear: the shadow described in the penultimate line is not the "author" of the boast, but the one he is a shadow of.

Posted

Oh! I think I got it. Is it Tobias' aspect? Stan or something like that? I can't find the name, but I think it is the aspect of Tobias that is always telling him weather conditions.

Posted

Luckwielder got it right, it's Stan!

 

He lives in a orbital satellite(can't get any higher than that)

He gives weather forecasts

But gives them only to the one who can hear him.

Unfortunately he is an hallucination,

an hallucination of an hallucination.

an this hallucination is the wise guy of the group, and one of the three Stephen always takes with him,

but he is only one of the many aspects Stephen has.

Posted

Wow. That was a very good boast. Nice job Topomouse.

I worship the sleeping,

I am called to zip

My brother a scribe,

My daughter alive.

Posted (edited)

My cousins and I enjoy swift-moving games

I elude all airsick lowlanders as I please

Most take for granted my friends' agreements

The ways of my best friend take some time for me to learn

And my ways also take time to learn

But if he truly is a friend he will

Edited by Xaladin
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My cousins and I enjoy swift-moving games

I elude all airsick lowlanders as I please

Most take for granted my friends' agreements

The ways of my best friend take some time for me to learn

And my ways also take time to learn

But if he truly is a friend he will

Syl?

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It's my turn, but I've got midterms tomorrow, so I can't write one until Friday, and then I'm leaving town for a week and won't be able to check the responses. I can write one on Friday and give someone else the answer so they can judge, or someone else can just take over this and write the next one.

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Posted

Uh, would anyone like to revive this? I know it's somewhat presumptuous, but the thread's been dead in the water for a while, and it might be nice to move things along :)

Posted (edited)

You're right. Here's one I just wrote up.

Battling waves of blue,

Covered in red,

In beaming white,

Fighting a land without color.

Edited by Sirce Luckwielder
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