Delightful Posted March 5, 2015 Posted March 5, 2015 One of the nobles from Elantris? I've forgotten a their names :/
Cold Fusion he/him Posted March 5, 2015 Posted March 5, 2015 Good job Luckwielder, you're correct. It looks like you're up now...
Sirce Luckwielder he/him Posted March 5, 2015 Author Posted March 5, 2015 Gaining life for death, I ride the falling leaves, Weeping as he slew me, My Lord gave me to life again, To gain the third level.
mail-mi he/him Posted March 5, 2015 Posted March 5, 2015 Gaining life for death, I ride the falling leaves, Weeping as he slew me, My Lord gave me to life again, To gain the third level. Szeth?
Sirce Luckwielder he/him Posted March 5, 2015 Author Posted March 5, 2015 Nope, It's Syl. You got it. 1
Xaladin he/him Posted March 5, 2015 Posted March 5, 2015 (edited) My vision was hard I oversaw the arcane arts, when manifest At first, my retaliation was vain My enemies invited me to their ranks Their mistake engendered my victory over them Now that my vision is of hard material And I have rebelled against an even greater enemy I now serve my friend of the tones played together (how's that for more than four lines?) EDIT: Another line (though you probably won't need it) I am known locally as Death. Edited March 5, 2015 by Xaladin 2
Topomouse he/him Posted March 5, 2015 Posted March 5, 2015 How about this: I live with rich but I have not their wealth, I live with the talented but I have not their ability. To learn their secrets I carry their words around, and I tried to conceal the knowledge I have of them. I discovered a murderer in their ranks And, thought I was not alone in this, I triumphed his bests. English is not my first language, and writing something "poetic" is not easy, I hope its intelligible. 2
Sirce Luckwielder he/him Posted March 5, 2015 Author Posted March 5, 2015 (edited) I am feeling that this is from Warbreaker, but I can't remember all of what happened. I am guessing Treledees or Bluefingers. Edited March 5, 2015 by Sirce Luckwielder
Curiosity he/him Posted March 5, 2015 Posted March 5, 2015 This is good. I think it's Joel from The Rithmatist. 1
Topomouse he/him Posted March 6, 2015 Posted March 6, 2015 You got it! damnation, I thought it would last a bit longer, you guys got it on the second guess.
Curiosity he/him Posted March 6, 2015 Posted March 6, 2015 (edited) I liked it a lot though! Most people think Cosmere first though, so that threw me off. But it was nice, especially considering that English isn't your first language! I'll be getting a new one up soon. I have the bones, but I'll flesh it out a little more. Many sought me, but I did not let them find me I earned the right to rule though the land was not my own I am the friend of gods and adviser to kings Where the fists and arms of many failed My hands, with only burning, deathless shells for light While ruin lay near, laid low Gretgor's agents Edited March 7, 2015 by Curiosity 1
Topomouse he/him Posted March 8, 2015 Posted March 8, 2015 (edited) I knew I had got the planet right since I googled "Gretgor", but I wasn't sure about the character himself, nice. I seek knowledge by looking ahead of me, but I found the answers in the opposite direction. The twilight illuminated my hubris and ignorance while saving my life from father. In remembrance of this I received that which is most light and that saved me from the pitfall set over me. Edit: corrected a typo and added a line. Edited March 9, 2015 by Topomouse 1
Sirce Luckwielder he/him Posted March 9, 2015 Author Posted March 9, 2015 (edited) I haven't the foggiest idea so I figured I better start guessing. I think I am closer when I say Lightsong? Edited March 9, 2015 by Sirce Luckwielder
Xaladin he/him Posted March 9, 2015 Posted March 9, 2015 That last line says "form" and not "from" right? I guess Eshonai. 1
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