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Verdance

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  1. Verdance

    no pressure

    Waiting for a Miracle is my fav
  2. It is good to read this Also catgirl pfp is super cute
  3. “Counterpoint- arson,” Verdance says. “Gets attention but erases evidence. Plus it’s really funny when you burn down places of ill repute, hypothetically like a cig store- the irony is delectable.”
  4. Ver perks up. “Did somebody say crimes?”
  5. Verdance

    no pressure

    I meant that mentally, like over stressing yourself over work the poem is trying to describe cyclical anxiety, where both relaxation and responsibility bring major stress Idk far more often when I mention blood in poetry it isn’t a SH thing, more referring to like, acne scarring and appearance issues when I refer to SH stuff I prefer elaborate depressing musical references or just like, knives, scars, idk
  6. Verdance

    no pressure

    No SH occurs in the space of this poem
  7. Verdance

    no pressure

    TW: despair Had to get this one off my chest, happy poetry ti come
  8. I did lol
  9. So, the magic system was… bad. Like, mechanics wise, it was very very bad to be honest. Paolini did lock in and work somebof it into the culture in interesting ways, but… not great magic. Cool magic. Flashy magic. But not sanderson smart magic. the writing improves over time, the characters improve over time. The dragonlore is super cool. Can’t wait to see where the Murtagh novel is going if he ever releases another
  10. Thank you so much! I’ve been enjoying short stories lately as I don’t have the attention span to try writing a novel again, and that seems to help. Your writing is great too!
  11. Eragon!!! original favorite fantasy series!!! I have all five major books! BRISINGRrRrRrRr
  12. :3 okey lol but only if you do the same lol i DO get notifications for the MFDs
  13. Erm time to practice drawing for new profile pic

    whenever i get home :3

  14. Inkwell’s form suddenly melts into mordite ink as he becomes a witherfallen, continuity being frustrating as usual. Before he can, you know, murder everything, his author yanks him from the realm, taking his place (and his soda). Reality rebels, resisting his arrival with a storm of blue sparks which may seem familiar, even contrived, to Coder. “Oops. Well, was bound to happen to him eventually. Carry on,” @Verdance says.
  15. No a worries i read like a dozen MFDs late lol But like seriously read the carnival one whenya getda chance i put a lotta effort into it :3
  16. Okay, just read OSC’s Wakers and thats like my favorite romantic relationship ive ever read since YatNP also welcome to the Shard!
  17. If i have found serious fault or flaw with your work, ive told you, otherwise i view it as like- 9-10/10 Alsho has done read me new story perhaps?
  18. okay, ive spent the last like five years of my life adapting my worldview to the perspective that identity on a deeper level that behavior is subjective to the individual and this is confusing me if you say you are a girl does that not make you a girl is that not enough you have already convinced me, why are you psyching yourself out? Delusional would be what i did, where i said i was trans because i thought i couldn’t have friends- but your worth is not subject to your identity, but your actions. so i ask once again: who do you want to be?
  19. I think your work deserves to be published. I’m assuming that this isn’t your absolute most effort possible and that if this casual-ish daily stuff is this good, you could practically make a career out of long term high investment projects
  20. Uh idk my brain is fried by like three ice cream sandwiches lol idk why was talking like that so in order i find that knowing the answers has never been the problem for me, usually. It’s more that i make easy choices instead of good ones. uh sleep token reference lol idk self explanatory hopefully
  21. I don’t really associate that kind of typing with being feminine- not exactly the pinnacle of masculinity myself but i wouldnt say i see :3’ing is anything less than androgynous Then again, take it with a grain of salt —— Im not sure what you find is the problem with just continuing to affirm yourself as feminine.
  22. Thank you so much! This is a bit autobiographical, i wanted to capture the feeling of fighting depression in myself and what i have seen in others. Its supposed to reference the isolation caused by the pandemic, for one thing the torch refers to digital relationships, if that makes sense but very happy you enjoyed! Hoping this seems somewhat hopeful, in the end
  23. My knowledge has proven useless my metaphors fall short in the end understand you are not alone in this
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