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Hyper129

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  1. dang bruh
  2. "In the midst of chaos, there is also an opportunity." - Sun Tzu
  3. I have not interacted with Stick but she seems like a good person so
  4. He's also the one who is telling the stories in every Secret Project
  5. pfft this is one of my favorites
  6. Oh okay (there weren't any pronouns before)
  7. Dude I wish I could carry a story like that... I have approximately 30 different random ideas I've started and haven't gotten past the two-page mark with, so that's fun!
  8. For a second I was like "oh shoot did they (not sure if you want people to know ur gender on here) post the entire book?"
  9. I would recommend reducing the amount of power the MCs have. Start them with either one power they have semi-control of or two powers they barely have control of. Then, as the story progresses, they could grow in their control of power, unlocking new powers and wresting greater control of their previous ones. Afte that, come up with an antagonist. Maybe the antagonist could be unaware of the MCs, then some sort of incident happens publicly with each of them and the antagonist starts to take action, sort of like the Black Riders from LOTR. Other than that, I love the concept. Keep working hard! My friend @iLewoArtist29 is an avid writer, so she'd probably have some pointers for you.
  10. ... what the storms is happening
  11. hahaha vroom vroom Wouldn't the strings, y'know, sever your soul?
  12. Hey! (I know your name in real life but what shall I call you here?) Want a cookie?
  13. little bits of grape fall into the sink lol
  14. I was never part of the cult of the stick it doesn't count If I can't burn it them I shall consume it *eats stick*
  15. These are all so good XD thanks a ton
  16. decent
  17. cool cool
  18. you should get therapy or something depression is real bad
  19. *Summons spren Plumeria as a Shardlighter, lights holy stick on fire*
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