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24 minutes ago, The Stormfather said:
Mine is 'Journey before destination.'
That might end up being our team quote this year for XC.
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I have at least 40 points.
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On 7/14/2024 at 8:06 PM, Edema Rue said:
Aww, thanks so much!!
OK GUYS I HAVE LIZ
PLEASE NOTE: THIS IS A POSSIBILITY. I’ve been trying to figure out endings. This is one way the story could turn out, if it takes that path. I kind of like it, and I think it could work so long as I do things from Siylna and Ien’s POV’s from time to time. But it’s just a possibility right now.
Still I hope you guys enjoy it
Liz closed her eyes and felt the floor fall away beneath her. She knew if she opened her eyes, she’d be in the realm of gods, but she didn’t. Instead, she took several careful steps forward, then one to the left. She breathed in, and then there was a wooden floor beneath her feet. She opened her eyes to see her oldest friend trying to conceal a look of surprise. “Si.”
“Lizzy.” Siylna smiled, but to Liz she looked distinctly uncomfortable. Liz’s method of traveling was far from usual.
“It’s been a while,” Liz said coolly. “And I’ve stopped hearing your name.”
Siylna licked her lips. “Lizzy, we need to talk.”
“I know,” Liz said. “That’s why I’m here.”
“No. Not…not like you’re thinking.” Siylna took a breath. “I’m done.”
Around the small cottage, the shadows seemed to darken and grow, just the tiniest bit. Control yourself. “I’m sure,” Liz said, “I don’t know what you mean.”
“Don’t play games with me, Liz.”
Liz glowered. “Explain yourself, then.”
Siylna took a long breath. “I don’t want to throw away my life for this.”
“Throw away your life?” Liz hissed. “That’s the whole reason we’re doing it. ‘I won’t be forgotten,’ remember? Where is your anger, Siylna Beunar?”
“I don’t need it,” Siylna snapped. “Listen to me, Lizzy,” she pleaded. “This—this obsession of yours has to end. You’ve set the stage for so much good, Lizzy, and the world will never know it. Now let it all play out. Sit back and watch.”
“It isn’t me I’m worried about,” Liz said.
“You aren’t listening—”
“Neither are you!” The shadows twisted up the walls, and Siylna glanced at them warily. Liz wasn’t being careful. She couldn’t care less if she accidentally tore the small cottage apart. “You’re giving up, Si.”
“I am,” Siylna said, and strangely enough the thought seemed to calm her. Liz’s lip curled. “I don’t need the world to know my name, Lizzy. Just one person is enough.”
Liz was speechless for longer than she wanted to admit. “You…” her voice sounded weak. She cleared her throat and tried again. “You fell in love.”
Siylna blushed. Liz had never seen her turn so pink, not once. Not like this. “There’s so much more to living than bets and games, Lizzy.”
Liz shook her head, dazed. “You turned into one of them.”
“I grew up,” Siylna countered. “Don’t tell me you’re still a child.”
“I’m not a child,” Liz snapped, crossing her arms. “And giving up doesn’t make you any wiser than me, just weaker.”
Siylna took another breath, visibly calming herself. “Lizzy, I know your heart is hurting. I know this world has done such terrible things to you. But anger isn’t the answer—”
“You were an acolyte of Fury!” Liz screamed. “Don’t talk to me about anger. You lost your fire.”
“I let it go,” Siylna said deliberately. “I don’t need a wildfire, I need a hearth. Please, Lizzy, just listen to me. I know how you feel, I swear I do. Better than anyone. I wanted to break this world. I wanted my name burned into the corpses of everyone who had ever hurt me. But I can promise you now, it won’t help.”
“Why’d you stop?” Liz spat. She looked away, gritting her teeth and trying to keep from trembling. “Why’d you stop?”
“I never would have if not for you,” Siylna said, smiling. She looked so kind in that moment. So warm, so welcome, so motherly. Liz wanted to hit her, to stab her, to hurt her until she remembered to be who she was. “We aren’t who we were,” Siylna said, as if reading Liz’s mind. “I’m so sorry you had to become this, Lizzy, but it isn’t too late to change. I did. It’s never too late.”
“Why are you apologizing?”
“Because no one else will.” Siylna reached forward, grasping Liz’s fingers. Her hands were icy cold. Liz stiffened, eyes widening, but she didn’t pull away. “No one else can. I know you don’t see it. I know you spend all your time in that prison. But Ien did it, Liz. He did what we always dreamed of.” Siylna’s eyes glittered wetly. “He fixed it. And now I don’t need to, and you can rest.”
“But the bet—”
“It’s not about the bet, Liz!” Siylna shook her head. “It was never about the bet.”
“Yes it was,” Liz insisted. “I gave up everything for this bet. I gave up my education, I gave up Ien, I’ve given up my entire life. Any hope I had of a future. And I did it to win.”
Siylna shook her head again. “No, Liz. Maybe it started that way. It did for me. Winning was so important then. But then we started changing things, and all of a sudden it’s become so much more.”
“No.” Liz shook her head frantically, pulling her hands free. “No. It can’t be. It isn’t over. There’s so much more to do.”
“Maybe,” Siylna said gently. “But you don’t have to be the one to do it. You’re allowed to rest, Liz.”
“No,” Liz said again. Her eyes were wide, and the shadows were twisting so wildly that the whole room shook. “No. I won’t let him forget me. I won’t be weak. I need to win.” She clenched her fists, trying to keep her hands from shaking. “I need to win.”
“Lizzy,” Siylna said, impossibly gentle, “you still love Ien, don’t you?”
“Assassins don’t love,” Liz growled. “I broke him. My plan worked. It worked.” Her eyes turned wild, the shadows reflecting into them. “I made him a hero. He hates me, but that doesn’t matter. It worked.” She laughed suddenly, high pitched and free. “It worked.”
“Liz,” Siylna said, and her voice cut through the madness like a sharp dagger through flesh. Liz blinked, and the shadows receded.
“You see it,” Liz said quietly. “I can never rest, Siylna, for I’ve lost my mind. Isn’t it beautiful?”
“It is,” Siylna admitted, and Liz almost thought she heard a note of jealousy. “But it’s dangerous, Lizzy.”
“I’m dangerous,” Liz said, and she felt herself smiling. “I could kill you now. I could kill you so easily.”
“Why haven’t you killed me, then?” Liz didn’t answer. “Liz,” Siylna said, and Liz blinked, forcing the fuzz from her mind.
“That’s cheating,” she said. “I want to beat you. I don’t want you dead.”
“Lizzy,” Siylna said quietly, “I want to thank you. For all of it. Arania couldn’t have become what it is without you.”
“Why are you thanking me?” Liz laughed, and suddenly her eyes stung. She hated them for doing that. She hated her heart for feeling. She hated her hands for trembling. She hated Siylna for twisting her strings, like she was little more than a puppet dancing to a tune she’d never hear.
“Because no one else will,” Siylna said sadly. They sat in silence for a long moment. “I’ll miss you, Lizzy. I already miss you.”
Liz cocked her head, suddenly feeling her heart pounding. “What are you talking about?”
Slowly, achingly slowly, Siylna pulled a dagger from her sleeve. “If you live, you’ll only keep pushing. You’ll ruin it all.”
“You can’t kill me,” Liz said, sending her chair clattering to the floor as she stood. “Ien’s been trying for a year.”
“I know he has,” Siylna said. “Are you ready to become a goddess, Lizzy?” She stood as she spoke, crossing the room until she was standing in front of her old friend.
“You can’t kill me,” Liz said again. “This is nonsense.”
“Enjoy their world, okay Liz?” Siylna smiled, but her eyes were still and wet and deep as the sea. “I’ll see you when my time comes.”
Liz started laughing as Siylna pressed the dagger to her throat. “You can’t kill me,” she said between giggles. “You can’t kill me.” She felt her blood beginning to drip onto her collar. She met Siylna’s eyes only to see her friend was crying.
That gaze filled her mind as she sank to the floor. “You can’t…” she coughed wetly. “You can’t…kill…me.”
“Goodbye, Lizzy,” Siylna whispered, but Liz only barely heard the voice. The world had gone black, and she couldn't move. She couldn’t breathe, couldn’t even feel her own body. All sound faded, and for a terrifying moment of silence, Liz understood. This was what it felt like to die. This was what eternity felt like.
Then the silence was broken by two icy, damning words.
“Hello, Heiress.”
INCREDIBLE!!!
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Heal Lem, hurt Ranette.
Gaotona - 8
Hesina - 10
Lem - 7
Ranette - 6
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Hurt Ranette heal Lukel.
Gaotona - 8
Hesina - 9
Lem - 9
Lukel - 5
Ranette - 8
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6 hours ago, Edema Rue said:
DONT YOU DARE
DONT EVEN THINK ABOUT IT
I CAN BRIBE BETTER
AND BLACKMAIL TOO
ARE YOU SURE THATS THE SIDE YOU WANT TO BE ON
Hmm…what do you have to offer? And how will you blackmail me?
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Just now, Cash67 said:
*offers 4 broam's worth of stormlight*
*offers new trauma for your OCs*
*mixes KI and H2O2 in copious amounts*
*explosion ensues*
Just the explosion was enough, my characters have enough trauma :))
*joins Cash*
*takes away @Edema Rue’s writing instruments*
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1 hour ago, Cash67 said:
@Dragonheir can you be bribed?
I can be :))
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8 hours ago, Just a Silvereye said:
Wow, this is all really good !
PS: you posted the second one within seconds of me finishing the first, just giving me enough time to be angry at you for that cliffhanger.
Yay!!! Thanks!
2 minutes ago, Edema Rue said:Th-they’re both 11…
there are two chapter 11s
both are amazing though
…yeah they are. Not anymore though! Thank you!
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Double post, but here's 12!
SpoilerNathan tried to slam the door closed but the demon reached forward and grabbed it, wrenching it back open with ease. Its face devoid of expression as it attacked Nathan. He showed no sign of surprise as it attacked, instead seeming fully focused on not getting slaughtered. He stumbled backwards and Levi heard an audible crack as the demon’s fist met Nathan’s ribs. Lazarus yelled and rushed forward, tackling the demon and pinning its arms behind its back. He overpowered it for a moment and Anson joined him, holding it down. It struggled but didn’t seem to be able to escape.
Levi stumbled forward, looking at the demon. It appeared just as Anson had described, like a corpse that was somehow moving on its own. It continued struggling against the two boys but they held firm. Levi grabbed his dagger from his belt and plunged it into the demon’s neck. It didn’t seem to notice. Levi immediately felt something discomforting, why had it suddenly become harder to think?
A black shape floated in through the doorway, answering Levi’s unasked question. It turned to face him, though it was barely distinguishable that it had a face, its humanoid figure barely defined. The mind-numbing influence of the demon increased as it drew closer, but Levi managed to stumble away from it, backing into the tunnel. He pulled Adelia and Phoebe along with him, moving to be in front of them. Adelia stepped up next to him, and though he wished he could protect her instead, he knew she’d be better at stopping this demon than he was, physical attacks seemed to have little effect on it.
It reached forward as if to grab Levi’s throat but then stopped. Adelia grunted and it was forced backwards and out of the Corridor by her Shaping. At the same moment, Anson and Lazarus managed to shove the other demon out of the doorway, both boys panting heavily. Phoebe ran forward and slammed the door shut, locking the two creatures outside. Levi heard the physical demon banging on the outside of the door and could see it vibrating, despite it being half a foot thick.. The pounding was relentless, and Levi knew the demon wouldn’t stop until it had broken in.
Nathan coughed, bringing Levi’s attention to him. In all the commotion he had almost forgotten that the demon had wounded him. Nathan tried to sit up but Phoebe stopped him. “You’re hurt, don’t move yet, I’m not sure how bad it is.”
“I just cracked a rib or two, I’m fine,” he said back gruffly, but his voice was weak and he was treating his left side gingerly. He coughed again, wincing and lying back down.
“It might be best for me to take a breather,” he said in resignation. “We need to stop those things though, if they get in we’ll be finished.”
“How do we stop them, they’re invincible!” Adelia asked, voice bordering on terror. “The physical one doesn’t notice wounds, and we can’t even touch the other one! The best I could do was make it go backwards and that took a huge chunk of my Manna!”
“Calm yourself,” Nathan said soothingly. “There’s more than one way to defeat an enemy. If we lure them inside here we can lock them inside and get a head start on our escape. This door’s sturdy, it should hold them for a while.” His answer seemed prepared, as if he’d thought of it before. How could he have though?
“How are we supposed to lock it from the outside?” Phoebe asked.
“I have a way, I always thought the Corridor would work well to defeat an enemy we couldn’t beat by force,” he said with a smile. “This wasn’t who I was planning on using it on, but it’ll work just as well.
So that was why his answer was prepared. What had he been planning on using it for? It didn’t matter right now, the plan was a good one.
“Adelia and Phoebe, I need both of you to force the mental demon to stay in here after we’re all out. Anson, you pull Nathan out of here, Lazarus and I can make sure the Physical one doesn’t escape,” Levi said, hoping it would work. Thankfully no one counteracted his orders, but a second later Naomi spoke up.
“And I keep the demon here too,” she said with determination, though her voice trembled with fear.
“Yeah, you can do that,” Levi said without consideration. “Is everyone ready?” They all looked at him and nodded, though he knew they weren’t. How could they be ready to face these demons,enemies who couldn’t be beat, that they could barely combat at all? And how had he started leading them. If this went wrong, it was his fault.
“Now!” he yelled, pulling the door open. Both demons rushed in, instantly heading towards Naomi. She screamed and the mental demon froze in place, its form shifting slightly but unable to move. Naomi crumpled to the ground, unmoving. Deviating from the plan, Lazarus rushed to her side, throwing her over his shoulder and charging out the doorway. Anson tackled the physical demon to the floor while the other two escaped and for a moment he battled the demon alone. Then Levi arrived, kicking the demon off his friend with a Manna-strengthened leg and pulling Anson outside of the Corridor. Phoebe, Adelia, and Nathan were waiting for them which meant everyone had made it out. Levi pulled the door shut behind him as he exited, then pressed himself against it just in time to feel the physical demon slam into it from inside. He pulsed Manna through himself, trying not to think about how low his levels were at the moment. If he didn’t use it now though, he might never get another chance to.
“Whatever you have planned, do it now!” he grunted at Nathan, feeling the door start to push outward, moving him. Adelia and Anson joined him and they managed to close the door again. Nathan flicked his hand and something clicked into place just as Levi’s Manna ran out completely and he fell to the floor, exhausted. It was hard to think through the fog his brain was covered in, but he knew they’d won. They had won, right? Or succeeded at least, they had no way of beating the demons. How long did they have before they escaped?
He glanced over and saw Adelia kneeling over Naomi, silently crying. How had he forgotten something had happened to Naomi? It was so hard to think through the muddled mess his mind had become after using his Manna so quickly. He dashed to Naomi’s side, next to Adelia. “Is she ok?”
“She…she will be,” Adelia said in a shaky voice. “She used her Manna so quickly it put her into a coma. She’s done this a couple of times before, she isn’t able to control the output of her Manna well. But you saw what she did there.”
“She was incredible,” Levi agreed in a soothing tone. “How long did it take her to wake up the other times?”
“Once a couple of minutes, the other time a few hours. She didn’t have as much Manna those times though, there’s no way for me to tell how long she’ll be out this time,” Adelia answered, tears flowing freely down her face.
“It’s going to be ok, we have to move now though,” Levi said. He helped Adelia to her feet, then bent down and managed to put Naomi’s body over his shoulder. He struggled to his feet, exhausted and devoid of Manna but determined to start moving ang get as far away from the demons as possible. He slowly started walking up the hill.
“Levi? We go this way,” Phoebe said, pointing downhill. He turned and started moving where she’d said to go. The way Manna messed with his head was so annoying! He glanced at Phoebe again and noticed she was supporting Anson. What had happened to him? Levi decided to ask later, it was taking all his concentration not to trip, Naomi’s weight throwing him off balance.
“Let me carry her,” Adelia said to him, wiping the tears out of her eyes. “You look so tired, but I didn’t…I didn’t do anything.” Her eyes brimmed with fresh tears to replace the ones she had wiped away earlier. “Didn’t do anything,” she whispered where he could barely hear.
Levi slumped down, gently setting Naomi on the floor so Adelia could pick her up. He felt bad about making Adelia carry her, but he probably would slow the entire group down if he tried to take her. “You did do something. When Naomi stopped the demon, you pulled her to safety. There wasn’t much you could have done to the demon after Naomi used her Manna, for all we know the demon still can’t move,” he said, trying to force a smile.
“I guess,” she said, sounding unconvinced. She picked up Naomi and lifted her, wobbling slightly. Then she straightened and Levi knew she was using Manna to help herself. He made a mental note to have someone else take a turn carrying Naomi after a little while.
“I need to go check on Anson, I’ll be back though,” he said. It sounded dumb as soon as he said it, but Anson had seemed hurt and Levi needed to know what had happened.
“Ok, that’s fine,” Adelia said, though she sounded disappointed. Levi ignored that for now, walking tiredly over to Anson and Phoebe.
“I’m fine!” Anson whispered somewhat forcefully to Phoebe. “It doesn’t hurt.”
She raised an eyebrow at him, the gesture just visible in the dimming evening light.
“That bad,” he added. “It doesn’t hurt that bad.”
“What doesn’t hurt that bad?” Levi asked, making the two jump.
“Nothing!” Anson answered quickly.
“When he tackled that demon it did some damage before you went in and helped him. Show him what happened,” she told Anson.
Anson sighed but lifted up his shirt sleeve, revealing a large bruise that was forming on his arm. “It just barely managed to hit me, and it was just a glancing blow too! That thing is strong.”
“I know,” Levi said back. “And it’ll be chasing us again soon, it’s a strong door but the demon is relentless and you just showed how strong it is.”
Anson nodded. “I don’t know how fast we’ll be able to move, you, me, Phoebe, and Lazarus are exhausted, Nathan’s hurt and Naomi’s unconscious.”
“We’ll be able to move fast enough,” Phoebe said forcefully, as if her projected confidence could make it true.
“We’ll have to,” Levi said, attempting to match that tone. Anson and Phoebe both nodded grimly, knowing it wouldn’t be an easy trip.
Levi made his way back towards Adelia, who seemed to be doing fine carrying Naomi. There was no way to tell how much Manna she was expending though. As he approached, she smiled at him and everything felt a little bit better.
“Is Anson ok?” she asked him lightly. Levi couldn’t tell by the sound of her voice, but he thought she might be faking it, there wasn’t a whole lot to be happy about at the moment. It seemed to be a night for faked positive emotions though, as the opposite would do them no good.
“He’ll be ok, the physical demon got him pretty good.”
Adelia winced in sympathy. “We need to figure out something to call them other than ‘physical demon’ and ‘mental demon.’ Any ideas?”
She was right, it would help it be a lot less confusing to discuss if they had more identifying names. And he was also grateful to think about something other than how poorly the night had gone. “The physical one looked… well, you know how it looked. Dead. So, call it the Corpse?” That didn’t sound quite right to him.
“Yeah, maybe…” she was silent for a moment. “An ogre, maybe? Like the monsters of legend?”
“Yeah, that could work, it’s the Ogre.” He didn’t say anything else for a while. “I’m not able to think of a good name for the other one though.
“Neither am I, but if you do think of one, let me know.” She sighed softly, looking down at the ground.
“Are…you ok?” Levi asked hesitantly. Had she been hurt and he hadn’t seen?
“I’m not very good at this, pretending to be happy, pretending to be ok. I’m sorry.” She didn’t break from her staring match with the floor.
“Hey, you don’t have to pretend,” Levi said comfortingly. “I don’t care if it’s the best day of your life or the worst, just be honest with your emotions.” He smiled gently at her.
She finally looked up from the ground and met his eyes. “Thanks,” she said simply. He hesitated for a moment, then awkwardly put one arm around her in a strange sort of side hug, made even more uncomfortable by Naomi’s body. Levi quickly let go and resisted the urge to walk away in embarrassment.
“You guys are weird,” Naomi mumbled from her position across Adelia’s shoulders.
Adelia shrieked, nearly dropping the other girl. “You’re awake!”
“Yep,” Naomi said simply.
“Why didn’t you say anything?” Adelia said, putting Naomi on the ground, then helping her to her feet.
“I didn’t want to walk,” Naomi replied, unashamed.
“Naomi!” Adelia said, though there was only relief in her voice, no anger. “I’m just glad you’re ok.” She hugged Naomi, now beaming. Levi took a step to the side, feeling as if he was intruding.
“Sorry,” Naomi said without any conviction.
“It’s ok, you’re ok and that’s the important thing.” Naomi tried to take a step and collapsed to the floor. Then she started giggling. “Carry me?” she asked Adelia. Adelia sighed but obliged, Naomi returning to her original position over her shoulder.
“I bet you wish Anson was carrying you instead,” Adelia teased.
“Of course I do, he’s hot,” Naomi said back with a smile. Adelia laughed and Levi joined in, still feeling like he didn’t belong with the other two. And maybe he didn’t, they’d known each other for a lot longer, they probably wouldn’t notice if he left. All he was doing there was making things weird.
He started walking away and, much to his disappointment, Adelia didn’t seem to notice, or, if she did, she didn’t care. And so he walked alone, the darkness his only companion.
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Here's the next!
Chapter 11:
Spoiler“What the frosts just happened?” Levi asked. All of the good feelings he’d had with Adelia were gone. Phoebe looked like she was about to faint and Anson didn’t look much better. And a date, since when had their plan been to go on a date? Had Anson been trying to hide this from him? Did that matter?
“We got attacked by what we think is another kind of demon,” Phoebe said bluntly, exhausted.
Oh, well that was perfectly reasonable… “Another demon?” he asked, finally realizing what she’d said. “What do you mean?”
“We think it was a demon,” Anson said. We can’t really be sure, it wasn’t like the one from before. That one was about to attack us too though.”
“What? Tell me what happened, all of it,” he said, trying to keep his voice from hysterics. He slid down next to Anson, his attention directly fully to the story they told.
“So there’s a physical demon too?” he said.
“We think so, it would make sense,” Phoebe said back. Her head was resting on Anson’s shoulder now, she looked like she could fall asleep at a moment's notice.
“Yeah… I guess it would. And you stabbed it and nothing happened?”
“Yep, it didn’t seem to notice. It was strong though,” Anson said, holding up his wrists where nasty bruises had started to form. Phoebe lifted her head from his shoulder and touched his wrist lightly.
“I didn’t know you’d been hurt, I’m so sorry,” she said, tears welling in her eyes. “I should have done something to help.”
“You couldn’t have known that mental Shaping was ineffective on that thing,” Anson said consolingly.
“I still should have done something other than fall down and make you slower, you could have died because of me!” she exclaimed.
“But I didn’t, we're ok,” he said gently. She nodded slowly but seemed unconvinced. She returned her head to his shoulder though, appearing to be too tired to argue. A few seconds later she had fallen asleep. Anson brushed a few strands of hair out of her face, smiling.
“So the demon attack wasn’t the only thing that happened today I assume,” Levi said, raising an eyebrow at both of them sitting there together. They really were cute together, even though Phoebe might be destroying Anson and Levi’s bond. They were like brothers and she might come between them.
“I guess you could say that,” Anson said, his grin growing wider.
“I will say that,” Levi said, grinning back. “Are you two a thing now?”
“I don’t really know,” he replied. “I sure hope so,” he said with a blush. The corners of Phoebe’s mouth twitched, leading Levi to believe she might not be asleep like he had assumed. What did she think of this? Did she just want to hear Anson’s perspective or was she just tired?
“Why do you want to be?” Levi asked, hoping both to understand exactly what Anson saw in Phoebe and to see if he could get a reaction out of her.
“Well she’s clever, she’s strong, she’s determined, she’s a good Shaper,” he said quickly. Then he added, “and she’s really pretty,” he said, turning his head to look at her. He didn’t seem to see it, but her face was filled with concentration at trying to keep a straight face. “In the end, I guess it’s just that she’s awesome,” he finished. That finally got to her and a grin broke out across her face. She sat up straight and looked at Anson.
“Thanks,” she said, leaning forward and giving him a quick peck on the cheek. They both blushed a deep red and she put her head back on his shoulder, scooting a little closer to him,
“I…didn’t realize you were listening,” Anson said.
“Here’s a little secret, girls are always listening,” she said back tiredly.
“Well there’s nothing I said that wasn’t true,” Anson said, his blush starting to fade. Phoebe smiled again but didn’t move more than that.
“So I guess we’ll figure out what exactly we are later,” Anson said, looking at her fondly.
“Yep,” she said happily, looking very comfortable next to Anson.
“I guess someone should tell Nathan about the new demon,” Anson said after a moment, sounding reluctant. He suddenly sat up straight, making Phoebe jump. “And Lazarus! He doesn’t know that the demons are nearby! Someone has to warn him and make sure he doesn’t get hurt!”
Levi jumped to his feet. “You both are exhausted, I’ll make sure he’s ok.” He dashed towards the door. He almost yanked it open but decided it would be best to open it slowly, he had no clue what could be out there. For all he knew, the demons were waiting to ambush him. Levi prepared to strengthen his body to yank the door back closed if he saw anything suspicious. He cracked it open and saw someone, or if what Anson and Levi had described was right, a demon. He slammed it closed, his heart pounding.
“Is everything ok Levi?” Anson asked from his spot in the hallway.
“It’s here,” Levi said, flexing his fingers and preparing to punch the demon if it tried to enter the Corridor. The door opened and he pushed Manna into his arm, feeling the strength of his muscles increase. His punch connected solidly, sending the demon sprawling. It groaned and sat up, looking woozy.
“Lazarus?” Anson asked, confused.
“Who else would it be?” Lazarus said from lying on his back. Levi rushed forward and pulled him into the Corridor, shutting the door behind them.
“I’m so sorry!” Levi said hurriedly. “I thought you were something else, there’s some stuff we need to tell you.” He tried his best not to make eye contact with Lazarus.
“What kind of stuff?” Lazarus asked. He groaned again, then laid his head on the ground. “And can it explain why you hit me? That hurt!”
“Bad stuff, and yes it can, I’m so sorry about that.” Levi turned to Anson. “You should explain it, you were there.”
“You’re right.” Anson launched into the same explanation he’d told Levi. Lazarus’s expression went from pained to confused to terrified in a matter of moments.
“Do you know what this means?” he asked them.
“Uh…Galahad has another weapon we didn’t know about until now?” Anson replied.
“Yes, but it also means he knows where we are, or he will soon. I’m not sure if the first demon can communicate, but if the second one has a mouth, it can probably talk. We need to get ready to leave as soon as we can.
“Can I sleep for a little bit?” Phoebe said from Anson’s shoulder. Lazarous raised an eyebrow at the sight of them together.
“For a little bit, until Nathan says we need to leave,” Lazarus told her. “Levi, go tell Adelia and Naomi that we need to prepare to leave.
“Alright, I’ll go find them,” he said, beginning to walk away from the group.
“I don’t know how fast that demon can move so I don’t know how much time we have before Galahad’s men get here.” His expression got even more severely worried. “He could send the Violet Guard our way too, so we need to get out of here.”
Levi nodded, running down the long hallway, searching for Adelia and Naomi. He heard laughter coming back from where they’d played Hoops together and he followed the sound to them. He stopped when he saw them, Adelia laughing at something Naomi had said or done. They didn’t know how much danger they were in and he was reluctant to make them afraid when they were obviously enjoying themselves. They needed to know though.
Adelia’s laughter cut off abruptly as she saw him. She must have noticed something about his expression because she quickly asked, “What’s wrong?”
“Galahad knows where we are, or he will soon. We need to get ready to leave,” Levi said urgently.
“What? How did he find out?” Adelia asked. Naomi ran over to them and reached out her hand, grabbing Adelia’s.
“What’s happening?” Naomi said.
“Galahad knows where we are, but it’s going to be ok,” Adelia replied consolingly, giving Naomi’s hand a comforting squeeze.
“I know it’s going to be ok,” Naomi replied simply.
“We need to leave,” Levi said firmly, feeling bad about hurrying them but knowing it was necessary.
“I know!” Adelia said harshly, then winced. “Sorry, but I need to take care of Naomi and that takes time,” she added apologetically.
“It’s ok,” Naomi said. “Let’s go.”
“Where are we going?” Adelia asked.
“I think up by the entrance, Lazarus should be explaining things toNathan,” Levi said back. He started running down the hallway but quickly slowed down so Adelia could keep pace, as she had in turn slowed down for Naomi. Eventually they reached the end of the tunnel and foundNathan waiting for them.
“Galahad will know where we are soon. I thought we would be safe for a while as the first demon had no apparent way to communicate with him, but this second one can most likely talk.”
“Second demon?” Adelia whispered to Levi.
“Yeah, it’s like an animated corpse or something.”
Adelia gasped quietly and Naomi shuddered as Nathan continued. “We need to abandon the Corridor and go back to Strathe, where we will join with the revolution. After a couple weeks there we should be able to take down Galahad and return our world to freedom. But right now we need to focus on escape. Lazarus, Anson, and Levi will carry these packs with supplies for our travel,” he said, pointing to four packs laid out in front of him. Adelia, you will take care of Naomi as we return, and Phoebe, try to regain your strength, you’ll need it.”
Levi stepped forward and grabbed one of the packs. It wasn’t nearly as heavy as he’d expected, it looked like there wouldn’t be much in terms of food or water for the next few days. Nothing he wasn’t used to though.
“I’m scared,” Naomi whispered to Adelia, barely loud enough for Levi to hear.
“I know,” Adelia whispered back to her. “We’re going to be ok though.”
Nathan opened the door to the Corridor and stepped out into the light. The sunset was pretty on the horizon, a stark contrast to the ugly, corpselike demon waiting for them outside.
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57 minutes ago, Edema Rue said:
Here’s another lil scene I wrote…it has a lot of potential, but there are also a lot of things I’d like to change, especially the ending. I think it’d also work better as like…a short animated clip than a short story. But I like it, and I hope y’all do too
Also, there’s a song by The Amazing Devil that’s been stuck in my head for a good minute now called Secret Worlds…it’s kinda woven throughout this scene.
EDIT: and also one called Farewell Wanderlust, it would seem.
Secret Worlds:
The boy could feel it when someone looked over his shoulder. He could tell that someone was reading as he scribbled down word after word. He glanced up furiously at a girl. She grinned, and before he could say a word she grabbed his hand.
“Come on.”
He stumbled after her, unsure what else to do. He tried to pull his hand away, but she gripped it tighter, and suddenly they were out the door and into a garden he’d swear he’d never seen before. The girl cocked her head, looking back at him.
“That’s new.”
“What’s new?”
“This.” She winked and gestured out to the flowers and trees.
He clutched at his notebook. “Who are you?”
“I’m me,” she said, pulling him deeper in. “Come on.”
“Why?”
“I’m me,” she repeated.
So he followed.
The garden seemed to stretch for an eternity, the boy wrote after. It was every color I’ve ever seen, and a few more too. One of the trees had blossoms, and when I followed her under it they fell, and it looked like snow. The whole world was lost under curtains of white, and all I could hear was laughter. I kept following her, of course I did, and there was so much more. There were flowers brighter than the sun, mountains sharper than knives, grass I wanted to lie on forever…
I don’t have the words to describe it.
But it was a world like nothing I thought existed.
Just before she left, she said, “Write me well, love.” I don’t know if I can do that.
When she next appeared, it was late. The boy heard a tapping on his window, and looked over to see her face. He blinked, thinking he was dreaming, then stood up and crossed to her.
“Follow me!” She whispered slyly.
The boy looked longingly back at his warm bed. Then he stepped out the window. On the other side was an unfamiliar street made of stone. Ancient looking houses lined it. When he looked back, his window was fit into a cottage that matched the rest of them. He poked his head back through the window, and he was in his room again. He leaned outside, and he was on a dark street.
“Come on!”
He went.
There were so many stars. That’s what I noticed most. There were no street lamps, no lights in the distance, and the stars were so bright. It was like someone spilled a bucket of glowing sand across the sky. We walked and she laughed. I know that we talked. I don’t remember what we said.
I know that I asked her name. Right at the start. “What’s your name?” I said.
She looked at me for a long time. It was almost frightening. “The devil knows my name,” she finally said, “so I’d rather you didn’t.”
That was all. I don’t mind.
Somehow, I don’t think there’s a name that would fit her.
Her fingers were stained a bright purple as she ate blackberries. He ate them too, from a basket that sat between them on a log. Then, in a moment of strange daring that sent his heart pounding, the boy picked up the basket and scooted into its place. The girl’s eyes filled with delight, and she rested her head on his shoulder. It felt like a challenge. So the boy ran his hand through her hair.
Today was…
Weird.
I’m not really sure how else to describe it.
She was quiet, subdued. “Hey.”
“Hey.” I wanted to ask if she was okay. I wanted to make it okay. I should have been able to make it okay. It’s—it’s what I do. It’s what I’m supposed to do. I’m supposed to know what to say. I didn’t. I think she understood, though.
She kind of smiled. It was a really sad smile. “I don’t think I want to laugh today,” she said. “I don’t think I can. Should we see where it takes us?” I nodded. I grabbed her hand and gave it a squeeze. She squeezed back. Then we opened the door.
The place on the other side defied any description I can give. We weren’t inside, but we weren’t outside either. The ground wasn’t stone, or sand, or grass. Wood might be the closest comparison, but it wasn’t that either. There was no color. It wasn’t black and white. It wasn’t gray.
It was colorless.
I don’t think it’s possible to explain how terrifying that was.
There was no color.
She seemed as scared as I was, so I squeezed her hand tighter.
Then this darkness came out of her. It didn’t have a color either; it was just dark. It soaked her shirt like blood. It dripped out of her and she gasped. That was scarier. I thought I would lose her. But I didn’t. And then the darkness was flooding off of me, too. It was cold. It was endless.
We ran.
That wasn’t something we could have fought or hid from. It was all the nameless things that sleep with us at night, and they’d been brought to life by whatever secret world we’d tried to escape to.
We have so many secret worlds.
I’d just never seen one so cruel.
But there was a comfort in it. She has the darkness too.
I thought I was the only one.
They called the boy weird. They avoided him as best they could. He couldn’t care. In his most lonely moments, he felt her hand in his. He heard her voice in his mind.
“Write me well, love.”
So the boy kept scribbling into a notebook. And each time the girl appeared, he followed her in a heartbeat.
“Where are we going?”
“I’m not sure.”
“Aren’t you afraid?”
“Terrified.”
Trees. I never expected trees, of all things.
They were so tall. They were curved and wild and utterly free. And they were huge. Magnificent. I couldn’t even see the sky from the bottom. She led me to a tree and I saw that there was a staircase encircling it. So we climbed. We climbed so high. And at the top, there were branches thicker than most trees’ trunks. We walked out on them and the world became green and bright and even more strange.
It was like we were birds. We jumped from branch to branch, and for once I didn’t worry that I’d fall. Each pool of light was a shard of stained glass. She danced through them, and I laughed. It felt nice to laugh.
The girl took him to the sea.
It wasn’t the one of crystalline water and white sand. This beach was a deep gray, nearly black, and the waves were purple, the foam a dazzling lavender. It crashed against the rocks, and the boy shivered. The girl gasped, and ran forward to touch the water.
“Freezing,” she reported. Then she cocked her head. “What’s wrong?”
“What?” The boy frowned. “Why would something be wrong?”
She raised an eyebrow haughtily. “We don’t find these worlds. We make them.”
“We do?”
“We do.” She smiled softly. “And this world feels like a broken heart.”
“So,” the boy said, understanding, “is it mine, or yours?”
They explored that shattered world for a long time. They found sharp cliffs and icy tide pools. They waded into the water, then ran back to shore when it got too cold to stand. They built a fire of driftwood and sat next to it.
“She told me to smile,” the boy blurted. The girl met his eyes, listening but not interrupting. “She told me to be happy.” He squeezed his eyes shut, taking several ragged breaths. “I don’t think I can.”
“You don’t need to,” the girl said.
“But I should be,” the boy said miserably. “I have no reason not to.”
“Yes you do,” the girl said. She put her hand over his heart. “That’s your reason. Remember the darkness? It’s in you. And it’s in me. But it isn’t in her, and so she doesn’t understand it.”
“But…” the boy trailed off. “How can I make her understand?”
“I don’t know.”
“I have to make her understand.” The boy made a motion, as if writing. “I’m supposed to make them understand. I’m supposed to be able to write until they see how it is.”
The girl nodded once. “But do you understand it?”
“No.”
“Then maybe,” she said thoughtfully, “you need to understand it first.”
They sat quietly for a long time, staring into the dancing flames. “I don’t want to go back,” the boy finally said.
“Me either.” The girl swallowed. “It’s frightening there.”
“But you’re so brave.”
The girl shook her head. “Not there. It’s easy to be brave when they aren’t around.”
“Oh.” The boy didn’t have the words. He wanted to say something. He wanted to tell her she was the bravest person he’d ever met. He wanted to explain how much he trusted her. He wanted to say he understood. But the words in his mouth were clumsy, not like on paper. None of them seemed to be what he meant. So he put his arm around her shoulder. “Maybe we can stay here for a while.”
“That sounds nice.”
She’s—
I’m—
We
I don’t
I can’t
I don’t have the words.
I don’t have the words.
I wanted…
I…
Hoped.
I hoped.
She
She let me
Hope.
And now—
No.
I can’t.
I…
I could write it.
I could write it all.
The words would come.
But they wouldn’t
They wouldn’t be right.
They wouldn’t feel.
They wouldn’t show
That I
Feel.
I know it couldn’t last forever.
I don’t
Know why
I expected it to.
Because now she’s gone, she’s gone, she’s gone she’s gone SHE’S GONE and I
I don’t
There’s
Nothing.
I
Numb.
I’m numb.
I can’t
Cry
Why can’t I cry?
I keep looking
Outside
And waiting
For her
To
To
To be there.
I can’t
Quite
Comprehend.
I can’t
Believe
That she isn’t
Coming back.
She isn’t
Coming back.
He took her he took her he took her
He took her.
She told me she warned me
The devil knows my name, she said, the devil knows my name and the devil knew her name, he knew her name and he took her away and she’s gone
She’s
Gone
Because I
Asked
I asked
Why did I ask
I wanted
I thought
We were safe
That whole place
It was so dark. It was so terrible.
It was my
Fault
My fault my fault my fault all my fault my fault
my
fault
She came
“I don’t think we should go today,” she said. We were both hurting so much, and she knew what would happen if we went in. I told her okay, I told her we could stay. We didn’t have to make anything today. And then
I opened
My bedroom
Door
And on the other side
The other side
The other
The other side.
It was
It
It
It was
I can’t write it.
I don’t want to see it.
But
I have to
If
If I don’t write it
Then they
Won’t know
They won’t know
About her.
I can’t let myself forget her.
I can’t let them think nothing happened.
I opened the door and it pulled me through. And before I even realized what was happening, she jumped through after me.
She was so brave.
The boy and girl fell into a world of sharp things, cold things, dark things, angry things. Everything in it wanted to destroy them. It tore at their faces and it tore at their hearts.
“Look at me,” the girl whispered. “Look at me.”
The boy met her eyes. “You don’t have to be scared here,” he whispered.
“And you don’t have to be alone,” she said. He gripped her hand, and she entwined their fingers. “This is our world, remember?”
“Our world,” he repeated. “Our broken hearts, our paradise. Ours.”
“Ours.”
The boy leaned to her, and she pressed her mouth to his for a single, desperate moment. “We don’t need to be scared here,” he repeated.
The world heard them, and it answered them. It calmed. As their hearts stopped pounding, the storm slowed to a gentle fall of rain. The boy looked at the girl, and together they burst into laughter. Soaking wet, filled with adrenaline, they laughed.
“So,” the girl finally said.
“So,” the boy repeated. “We. Uh. We’ll be okay.”
“Yeah,” the girl said, brushing away a lingering tear. “We…will. We will.”
The boy watched her for a long moment. She watched him back. “What’s your name?” He asked quietly.
She stiffened. “I can’t tell you.”
“Can’t?” The boy asked sadly, “or won’t? Don’t you trust me?”
“Of course I do,” the girl said, leaning into him. “More than anyone.”
“I don’t know your name.”
The girl hesitated. She hesitated for a long, long moment. “Okay,” she whispered. “But you can’t use it. You can’t say it, not even once, because he knows my name.”
The boy nodded, and the girl leaned and breathed a single word into his ear.
It happened before I could stop myself.
I…
I said her name. I repeated it. I wanted to feel it on my tongue, I wanted to hear it spoken out loud.
“Ari,” I said.
And she screamed.
She sounded so scared, so hurt. She—
She sounded like she must have felt.
Like she knew what I’d done.
Then he was there, a thin figure in a black cloak. He stalked towards her, he reached for her and she hid behind me. I
I was
She
I
She turned to me to protect her. It was my fault it was my fault and she trusted me to protect her
And I froze
I
Froze.
He put his arm around her waist. “I’ve missed you, Ari,” he crooned. And I opened my mouth but I couldn’t speak and she was screaming, screaming, screaming. “It’s okay,” he told her.
“You don’t need to be afraid here.”
She shouldn’t have needed to be afraid.
It was our world
It was
Ours
But he held her
And the storm
Turned
From rain to thunder and lightning and wind
It came back
So much stronger
Than before.
The wind whipped at our faces, and just then I saw her darkness
The shadow that lived in her most secret heart
It exploded out
And it
It overcame her
It surrounded her
I reached
I tried
I promise
Ari
I tried
But he reached first.
He ran his hand along her cheek, and darkness trailed from his fingertips like a weapon. He took the pain we’ve been fighting and learned to use it.
The girl struggled against the grip of the devil. The boy tried to reach her and found himself caught in the storm.
Then the devil turned, and he met my eyes, and then I was falling out of the world. “Thanks,” he hissed, “for calling me.”
She watched me. Her eyes were wide and terrified, and I knew her heart was beating too fast. I opened my mouth, but he spoke first, and then I was back in my room.
“It’s too bad you couldn’t protect her.”
I couldn’t
I couldn’t protect her
She’s
She
She
Gone.
She’s gone.
I’m sorry.
I’m so
I’m so
Sorry.
Incredible. I want in my heart for it to end differently (not saying it needs to) which is a good thing, it means it was well written enough for me to get attached.
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I have several chapters that will be coming in the next few days, here's the first.
Chapter 10:
SpoilerAnson grabbed a box, lifting it onto a handcart piled high with supplies. When Lazarus had said he’d be getting supplies, Anson had imagined weapons. Spears, swords, bows, or even something more exotic, like a halberd. Instead they had gotten more mundane things, like food, water, and clothing. He understood they were necessary, but they were also boring. He tried to shove down his dissatisfaction regarding the supplies by focusing on something else. And so, naturally, his mind turned to the pretty girl standing next to him. Some people might find it unattractive to see a girl performing heavy labor, but Anson liked it. It meant she was willing to work hard and to do things unconventionally. And, if he was being honest with himself, she didn’t look bad at all. He was getting more and more certain that she couldn’t look bad in any circumstance.
She said something, and he blinked out of his daze “What?” he asked. He probably looked like an idiot now, though he always did anyway.
“Are you ready to go? We’re done here, all we need now is Lazarus.” She said, looking at him carefully. “Are you ok?”
“Yeah, I’m fine. And I’m ready to go whenever he is,” Anson replied. He looked back into her eyes and found once again that he quite liked the little touches of green in her otherwise blue eyes. But he needed to focus on something other than her, he probably looked like a creep. An idiot and a creep. He barely kept himself from sighing in annoyance. Why couldn’t he be more like Levi, more calm and collected, not always acting out in stupid ways like himself. But no matter how hard he tried he always ended up doing something dumb or saying some weird joke.
“Lazarus is talking to one of the higher-ups in the revolution, he usually takes a little while. If you wanted to, we could go without him…” she said, her tone hopeful.
What did that mean? What did she want with him, or did she really just want to get out of the dingy warehouse they were in. Why was this all so confusing all of the sudden? But, disregarding all the questions flooding through his mind, he definitely would like some time with Phoebe without Lazarus grilling him about his life every second of the way.
“Sure, that sounds good to me,” he said, excited. She grinned broadly, and he knew that he'd said the right thing. Well, hopefully he had, he could never be certain. People could be quite good at faking things.
“Great! Let's get going then,” she said, grabbing the cart and preparing to tow it away.
“Should we tell Lazarus that we’re going?” Anson asked. “I don’t want him worrying about where we are.”
“Good idea, let’s do that. He should be just over here,” she said, walking towards a door that was only in slightly better shape than the rest of the building. She knocked twice, paused, then rapped three times in quick succession. A burly man with a square beard opened it. He had dark brown hair, though it had a sprinkle of grey in it. “What is it?”
“We just needed to let Lazarus know that we’re going back to the Corridor, we’ll take the supplies with us,” Phoebe said. The man opened the door wider, allowing Anson to see into the room. Lazarus was looking at a map splayed across a large table. As soon as he saw Phoebe and Anson, he flipped it. Anson noticed some kind of inscription on the back, though it was too far away for him to read it. Why was Lazarus hiding the map, was there something he didn’t want the rest of them to know?
“Did you hear that, Lazarus,” the man said in a deep, gravely voice.
“I did, and you two don’t need to worry about taking the supplies, I’ll get them. There’s a few things I need to add anyway.”
“Oh, thanks!” Phoebe said, seeming strangely excited that they didn’t need to take the cart. Not like it affected her much though, Anson would have taken the cart. One of the few lessons he remembered from his mom was that he should always at least offer to carry things for a girl, and she’d always teased him by saying that was especially true for pretty girls. Well, Phoebe was definitely a pretty girl. He smiled to himself, glancing over at her. She looked back and smiled too. He looked away, embarrassed.
“Should we go then, or is there something else you need to do here?” she asked him, seeming anxious to get out.
“I’m ready to go,” he replied. She walked out of the room and he followed her. It was a several mile journey back to the Corridor with only her, that was going to be nice. Was that why she’d been excited? But she’d also looked anxious, was that about spending time with him? Or was he reading it all wrong, this was so confusing!
“I’m glad we’re getting out of here, I hate the warehouse,” Phoebe said, a look of disgust on her face.
“Didn’t you volunteer to come here?” Anson said jokingly, though it was a legitimate question. He thought he might know why, but he wanted to see if it was true.
“Well yes, Lazarus needed another helper and Adelia was going to play Hoops with Naomi,” she said, looking embarrassed. Anson decided to press a little bit further, trying to confirm his suspicion that she’d come along because he was going. Or was that just wishful thinking?
“What about Levi, he could have come,” Anson said, hoping she’d say it was because he was there. It would be nice to know someone actually wanted to be around him other than Levi. And she was funny, pretty, and smart, so that didn't hurt either.
“Well he could have, but I volunteered first, didn’t I?” she answered slyly. “Anyway, I think Adelia will enjoy the opportunity to get to know him,” she said with a smirk.
Anson decided to ignore how she’d dodged his question and interrogate her more on the second comment she’d made. “Why would Adelia be interested in Levi?”
“Well, he’s a boy that she said she finds attractive, so I think that’s the main reason,” Phoebe said.
“Oh, yeah, that makes sense,” Anson replied, feeling uneasy. Should he tell Levi that Adelia was interested in him? He’d want to know, he always wanted to know what other people were thinking. He said it made them more predictable. But Adelia probably wouldn’t want him to know, and if Anson told him it could make Phoebe wary of trusting him. He decided not to worry about it at the moment, there was someone that deserved his attention instead, and she was walking right next to him. Now he just needed to figure out how to get a good conversation going with her.
“So, I don’t really know a whole lot about you,” he said, trying to keep his tone casual. “What do you like to do?”
“For fun? I like playing games, Dragons and Uncertainty are two of my favorites. I don’t really like Hoops too much, but playing it with Naomi is fun. She makes everything fun,” Phoebe said fondly.
“Dragons, Uncertainty, and Hoops, I definitely know how to play those,” he said with a halfhearted laugh that he knew sounded forced. Why was he so bad at this?
“Oh, you don’t know how to play? I’ll teach you them sometime,” she said.
“I’d love to, I like games,” he said, though he was more excited that she would be teaching him then about learning the games themselves.
“Ok, that’s good,” she said, relieved. “What do you like to do for fun?”
Anson thought about that for a moment. What did he like to do? Games were fun, but he rarely had both the time and the means to play them. “I like telling jokes and listening to stories,” he said after a while. “That might be why Cathy likes me, I’m the only one that listens to her stories, even if they’re definitely untrue.”
“Ooh, I like stories too! I prefer to tell them rather than listen though. And that crazy lady did seem to like you quite a bit,” she said with a wink.
“That’s perfect then, because I’m always happy to listen to stories. Do you have any good ones?” This was going well, right? At least they were talking, that was important.
“Oh, a lot, what kind do you like?” she asked, obviously excited. He wondered if she often got to tell stories to people.
“Any kind, really, but my favorites are mysteries. I like trying to figure out what’s going on and who did what.”
“I have a good one for you then! I bet you’ll figure it out before most people do,” she said.
“I doubt it, but I can try,” he said. She launched into a story about two lovers who found a dead man inside their house one day. It was complex, but he was pretty sure he knew who’d killed him.
“And Ethan's brother admitted what he’d done, how he’d killed Jaxon and put his body in Penny’s house,” Phoebe said, concluding the story.
“Ha! I knew it was him!” Anson said excitedly. “That was really great!”
“I told you that you’d figure it out,” she said, smiling. “Thank you, and thanks for letting me tell you! It’s been a while since someone else has been excited by one of my stories.”
“Well it’s their loss, that was really good!”
“Thanks,” she said, her smile growing wider. Then, suddenly, it disappeared. “Do you feel that?”
“Feel what?” he asked, disappointed that the happiness and excitement of the moment was gone.
“The demon, I think I can feel its aura. It’s close.”
Anson didn’t feel anything, but he trusted Phoebe’s senses. She was more in tune with the mental side of Shaping anyway. “Let’s go,” he said, all of his elation immediately replaced by fear. He started running, using a little bit of Manna to boost his speed. Phoebe kept up with him, so he assumed she was doing the same.
“We’re close to the Corridor, we just need to make it a little further,” she said between breaths.
They ran for a couple of minutes in a silence only interrupted by their labored breathing. Then Anson saw someone. They were standing on the crest of a hill, looking directly towards Anson and Phoebe and standing perfectly still. “Who is that?” Anson asked. “Levi?”
“I’m not sure, it could be someone we don’t know, maybe one of Galahad’s men,” Phoebe replied. “Be careful.”
As soon as she said that, the man began to move. He started running straight at them, moving faster than he looked like he should be able to. A Shaper then? Anson stopped abruptly, studying the man’s face. It definitely wasn’t anyone he knew, and there was something wrong with it. The strangeness was familiar, it was the same look that…that dead people had. That’s what it was, the guy looked dead.
“That’s not good, we need to get away from him now!” Phoebe said, her voice layered with fear. She turned around and started running in the opposite direction. Anson didn’t follow her, instead he drew his dagger and made sure his footing was good. He would protect Phoebe, and give her a chance to get away, then try to follow her if he could. The man approached him, and strangely he didn’t make noise as he ran. No yelling, barely any sound of footsteps despite his terrific pace, and was he even breathing?
“Anson, what are you doing?” Phoebe yelled.
“Keep running, I’ll hold him off if I need to! I’ll meet you at the Corridor!” he yelled. The man continued rushing towards him, not seeming to see Phoebe. He acted as though he only had one goal, and it was something to do with Anson. “Stop right there!” Anson commanded, trying to make his voice firm. The man didn’t appear to notice, instead he just kept running. As he approached Anson, he readied himself for a fight, though hopefully it wouldn’t come to that. A distance away, Phoebe tripped, slamming into the ground hard. She cried out in pain and Anson’s resolve doubled. He had to stop this man from doing anything to her.
The man barreled towards Anson and jumped at him. It was a predictable move, as the man hadn’t slowed down at all, he’d had few other options of attack. Anson dove to the side and the man flew past him, then somehow twisted in the air to land perfectly, not stumbling at all. He moved slowly towards Anson. He held no weapon, but if he was a Shaper then he wouldn’t need one.
“Why don’t we…” Anson started, then stopped talking as the man moved in for a grapple. Anson brought his knife up, straight into the man’s chest. The man made no noise or recognition of the injury. He didn’t even seem to notice it as he locked his hands around Anson’s arms with an extraordinarily strong grip. His body was cold and clammy, just like a dead body. This wasn’t a person, Anson knew that. How was that possible though? What form of Shaping could animate the dead?
Anson didn't have time to think about it at the moment. He struggled against the strange reawakened body and eventually managed to tear his hands away and jump back. The deep wound in the body’s chest wasn’t bleeding like it should, instead of gushing blood it was only lazily oozing out. Anson took another step back and the thing attacked him again. Anson lashed out with his foot and felt the kick connect solidly, sending the body sprawling. It moved fluidly to its feet, then surprisingly turned and ran, though Anson couldn’t fathom why.
It quickly disappeared between two hills and Anson didn’t see another sign of it. As soon as he thought it was safe enough, he dashed over to Phoebe. She had stood up, but her knees were wobbly, she looked like she would fall down again at any second. He put his arm around her shoulders, helping her stand. “What happened?” he asked, his voice cracking from fear.
“I…I tried to stop it with mental Shaping but I couldn’t! I couldn’t even feel it! It’s like it was…”
“Dead. Like it was dead,” Anson finished.
“Yeah…what was it?” she asked him, terrified.
“I don’t know. Something I’ve never seen before, I don’t know if anyone has.” He looked around, making sure it hadn’t come back. “Are you ok to walk?” She nodded, leaning heavily on him and taking a step.
“I think…I think I might know what that thing was,” she said quietly. He looked at her curiously and she continued, “I think it might have been another demon. It would match up with how Shaping works too, one mental demon and one physical.”
“You’re right,” Anson said, trying not to think about how much his body was in contact with hers. “You said you felt the mental one earlier too, we need to get back as fast as we can. It could still be chasing us, and there’s no telling how long the physical one will be gone.”
“I know, I’m sorry. I used so much Manna, I can barely walk. And it was for nothing! If I hadn’t done that we’d already be back!” she said, her voice cracking again and a tear running down her cheek.
“No, that’s now what I meant! I just wanted to say we need to get back,” he said quickly. He shifted so he was supporting more of her weight and they continued walking, moving slowly. Eventually, they reached the hill that contained the Corridor.
“Let’s stop here, you need a break,” he said to her, noticing how ragged her breathing had become and how she was stumbling on nearly every step.
“No, we can’t afford to waste time!” she protested. She struggled to take another step and nearly collapsed. Anson caught her and helped her to the ground. “Taking a short break is better than passing out or dropping dead from exhaustion. We’ll only be here for a minute,” he said consolingly. She tried to sit up weakly, but he placed a hand on her shoulder, gently pushing her back down. “Rest, just for a little bit.”
She sighed but obliged, though he could see the restlessness in her eyes. He counted to sixty in his head, then waited another moment, knowing she’d need as much time to recover as they could spare. “Alright, let's go,” he said, helping her to her feet and putting her arm over his shoulders. He helped her forward, trying to ignore how hard it seemed to be for her. She was right that they needed to get back though, the demons could be back at any second.
They were about halfway to the Corridor when he started to feel it, the draining of his mental energy. The pull got stronger as he continued up the hill, nearly pulling Phoebe as they walked. “Let me carry you,” he said, realizing that would be faster. He swept her into his arms and began to run, Shaping his muscles to have more speed and endurance and giving himself better balance. It drained his Manna quickly, but he didn’t have to go far. As he neared the secret entrance, he saw the demon, its black form stark against the brightly lit hills. He ran into the door, then opened it, rushing inside as the demon glided up the hill towards him. He slammed the door shut, and the draining feeling stopped. He laid Phoebe down on the floor, then sat next to her. She looked up at him, her beautiful face now covered in sweat and dirt, though it didn’t make her look any worse. Was she ok?
“Well that was one heck of a first date,” she said with a smile. “Although I’m not sure if it counts, you might have to take me on another.
He sighed in relief, she seemed to be fine. He smiled back at her, then put his arm around her shoulders. It was a nice moment.
Then Levi stepped into the entryway. “What the frosts just happened?”2 -
Are you Nergoul? Because I always feel a Thrill when you’re around.
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Ooh, how old do people think I am? Here’s a hint, I belong here.
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6 minutes ago, Edema Rue said:
Hmmm...
HMMM...
I know she's going to kill this character (I'll post the scene in a little bit) but I can't decide what I want first...
I like the idea of her forcing herself to like him...
*diesbecauseicantplananything*
Hmm…
if you want her to force herself to like him, you could have her kill him then have a moment of realization where she realizes her love for him was just to cover what she feels for Ien?
But honestly, whatever you come up with will be amazing, no matter what route you take.
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11 minutes ago, Edema Rue said:
GUYS I NEED A DECISION
DO I PUT LIZ IN A VERY TOXIC RELATIONSHIP WITH ANOTHER ASSASSIN
WHO SHE’LL LATER MURDER
OR DO I KEEP HER TRUE TO IEN
or do I make her PRETEND to love the other dude so that she can kill him
WHAT DO I DOOOOOOOOOOO @Anguished_One @Weaver of Lies @RoyalBeeMage @Just a Silvereye @The Wandering Wizard
Have her legitimately like him, but not love him? It could still be toxic maybe?
Edit: scratch that, it’s boring. What if she forced herself to have feelings for the other assassin to try to get rid of her feelings for Ien? Like she finds him attractive, then decides she wants to be in love so she isn’t in love with Ien anymore? Does that make sense?
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8 hours ago, Edema Rue said:
Heehee
I don’t have a ton right now but here’s a lil baby scene from right after Liz left the Academy…I’ll write more of it at some point
First:
Liz shivered, pressing against the dirty wall of the alley as if it would help keep the rain off her. Not for the first time, thoughts of her room at the Academy filled her mind. While far from comfortable, it had been a roof over her head. She’d give almost anything to have that back.
She stiffened at the sound of footsteps on mud. Privacy. There was another thing to miss. She shifted further in the shadows, reaching for anything she could use as a weapon. Her hand closed around half a brick as a man tottered into the alley.
He stank of beer and urine. His eyes were glazed as they glanced around, but they still landed on her. He grinned, and Liz shivered harder.
“Hey there, pretty,” he crooned. “All alone, are yeh?”
“Get back,” Liz growled, trying to sound dangerous instead of terrified. Her voice cracked.
“Or what, girl?” The man’s lip curled, revealing about 5 rotted teeth. He stumbled closer, brushing rainwater off his face. His grin widened as Liz squirmed, and he reached out, grabbing her arm. Almost reflexively, she swung with her other arm, which still carried the brick.
He fell back, dazed. A trickle of blood made its way down his forehead. Liz’s mind seemed to blur. She didn’t remember getting up. She didn’t remember wanting to hurt him. But she remembered swinging again, and again, and again. She remembered the exact moment his eyes went dark.
She remembered leaning back in shock and horror.
She had never killed before.
That night and the next day continued to blur. She knew that she ran far from their alley. She knew that she threw up more than once, until she had nothing in her stomach and could only heave painfully.
She remembered sitting against a wall and thinking, Ien would never love a murderer. Then she thought, I don’t have to tell him. Then, I miss him. With a fresh burst of horror, Liz realized that the thought of never seeing him again hurt more than the thought that she had ended a life.
She started having dreams. Liz never dreamed at night; her father had once told her it was because she spent so much time dreaming while awake. But now she dreamed every night. She couldn’t call them nightmares. They were much too pleasant for that. She couldn’t always remember them, but the emotion was there.
Longing so strong it was almost hunger.
Control so complete it was nearly intoxicating.
She saw the man die, again and again and again. Each time was more brutal. Each time it became less of a reaction and more of a choice, until she started to attack him before he even grabbed her.
Several times, she woke calling Ien’s name.
Liz wasn’t sure when she decided that she was going to kill again. Between one night and the next, she knew. She’d done it once, and now she needed more. So she took it.
She wasn’t particularly strong or fast, and her “skill” with blades was laughable. But by the stars, she was clever. She chose her victims. She chose the time and place. None of it should have worked. But it did, and each kill left her a little more sickened, and a little more hungry.
It was an unholy hour of the morning when they found her. Liz was huddled under a tattered blanket on an inconsequential roof. The streets, she was learning, were a dangerous place. She didn’t hear footsteps. She didn’t see anyone coming towards her.
She did, however, feel the blow that knocked her unconscious.
Absolutely incredible!!!
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Chapter 9:
Spoiler“I’m sorry, but we don’t really know much more than you do,” Lazarus said, holding back a laugh. “Nathan told us the same simple things that he did to you, and now he refuses to answer other questions.”
“Oh come on!” Anson said with exasperation. “You don’t know anything either?” he asked Phoebe, who was sitting across the table from him.
She smiled at him, and despite Anson’s obvious attempts to stop it, he grinned back. “We really don’t. Like Lazarus said, Nathan won’t talk more about it. We’ve tried, I promise. Even Naomi can’t get him to talk about it!”
Naomi, who was sitting next to Phoebe, frowned. “He’s a jerk.”
Phoebe laughed. “Yes, he can be.”
“Is she a Shaper?” Anson asked Phoebe.
“Why don’t you just ask her, she can answer,” Phoebe said, her voice cool, expression hardening slightly.
Anson’s face fell. “Oh, right. Sorry.” He turned to Naomi. “Are you a Shaper?”
Naomi didn’t speak, but her voice rang in Levi’s head. Yep.
Anson jumped slightly. “Oh, cool!”
“She’s not just a Shaper, she’s a very talented one,” Lazarus said. “She has some of the strongest mental Shaping I’ve ever seen, though she does struggle to control it.”
“That’s so awesome!” Anson said excitedly. “I wish I knew mental Shaping, it seems a lot more useful than I used to think.”
“I’d be happy to teach you some things if you’d like,” Phoebe said. Anson perked up, looking at her.
“Really?” he asked, even more excited.
“Yeah, of course,” she said, a slight blush appearing on her cheeks. “Would…you like to join too, Levi?” she asked, though she seemed reluctant.
Probably best not to have those two alone for a long period of time, Anson already seemed to be getting very close to her. “Of course I would,” he said, his tone a little harsher than he had meant it to be. She, in return, jumped a little bit, shrinking away from him.
Anson shot Levi a look of disgust. Levi decided he should go apologize to Phoebe once they had finished their discussion. Just the thought of it disgusted him though. She was trying to take his best friend from him, or that’s what it seemed like, and Anson seemed to be falling for it. And if they were together, where did that leave Levi? He’d always had Anson, he couldn’t leave now, right? Those thoughts disgusted him more. Phoebe had just saved their lives several times! Why did he feel this hatred towards her?
“Anyway, like I was saying, we know nothing,” Lazarus said.
“Alright, then what are we going to do now?” Phoebe asked. “Is there anything we can do to prepare for whatever Avery has planned next?”
“I’m not sure, but I could use some help getting some supplies from the rebellion, it’ll take a couple hours. Anson, why don’t you come join me? I’d like a chance to get to know you better.”
“Sure, I’ll do whatever,” he said casually.
“I could use another person if anyone else is willing,” Lazarus said, looking at the rest of them.
“I won’t go,” Naomi said. “Me and Adelia are playing Hoops.”
Adelia smiled at her. “Yes we are, which means I can’t go either.”
“I’ll go,” Phoebe volunteered, looking eager. Levi frowned. There it was again, why was she trying so hard to get close to Anson? Or was it just natural? Levi knew several people thought Anson was quite good-looking, even discounting Cathy the crazy lady.
“You can play with us!” Naomi said excitedly to Levi, her hand latching on to his arm. He squirmed slightly, but she ignored it. She began to drag both Adelia and him down the hallway, away from the main entrance. Anson looked at him and shrugged, then followed Lazarus as he began walking in the opposite direction.
“So what game are we playing? Hoops?” Levi asked, having never heard of the game before.
“Yeah, it’s easy to learn, I bet you’ll get it easily. How it works is you have three hoops set up a distance away from you. One of us will stand in front of them and try to stop you from throwing a ball through them. If you make it in, that’s a point and you rotate to the rest position. If you miss or get blocked, you move to defense and if you get scored on you lose a point.”
“Ok, that sounds easy enough, you’ll have to show me so I can make sure I’m doing it right though,” he said back.⤞⤝⤞⤝
“So, how did you get roped into this?” Levi asked Phoebe as she was winding up to throw.
“This? She asked, throwing the ball and scoring, Naomi narrowly missing the ball.
“The revolution, overthrowing Galahad. What drove you to join?”
“Some similar things to what Lazarus has said, to try to help as many people as I can,” she said, though her answer sounded well-rehearsed. Levi knew there was something more.
“And what else?” he prompted, hoping she would answer honestly. He stepped forward, taking a ball from a nearby bin and taking aim.
“Honestly, I do really want to help people and to make sure my sister has a world she can survive in. But I also think that this gives me an unparalleled opportunity to gain a position that would otherwise be impossible for me, especially as a woman, to gain. Avery has promised to appoint me as his general once this is through and I’ve been trained for it.”
Levi felt his respect for her grow. Power, most people would look at it as bad motivation, but it was an honest one and she had other, more honorable motivations as well. There was nothing wrong with gaining something from the revolution. He threw the ball straight towards the left hoop, Naomi jumped in front of it stopping it. She laughed, causing him to groan. He switched her places, standing in front of the middle hoop. Phoebe threw and he dived left, the opposite direction of her throw.
“You’re losing,” Naomi said, smiling widely as she positioned herself.
“Yes I am,” Levi said tiredly. He stepped to the right as Naomi made her shot, and reached out to catch it. The ball flew through his hands with extraordinary force, cracking the stone behind the hoop and bouncing off. Levi howled in pain, pulling his hands to his chest. Naomi and Adelia broke into a chorus of laughter.
“What was that?” he asked gingery feeling at his fingers to see if any were broken. They didn’t feel like they were, thankfully.
“Shaping, dummy,” Naomi said. Her smile was infectious, and Levi felt one spread across his face as well. He repositioned himself, then caught a ball Phoebe lobbed to him. He shot her a grateful look, then stepped into the rest spot.
“You’re friend’s cute,” Naomin said, not looking at him.
“What?” he asked, taken aback by the comment. He wasn’t sure what he’d been expecting, but that wasn’t it.
“Your friend is cute,” she repeated a little bit louder.
“Oh. Uh…I guess he is. She scored on Phoebe. Levi moved up to throw.
“You’re not cute,” she said right as he began to throw. His shot went completely wild. He really hadn’t been expecting that.
“Oh, I don’t know about that Naomi,” Adelia said slyly. “But he is bad at Hoops,” she said with a wink. Levi blushed, trying not to think about what she had said. He failed.
I know!” Naomi said exasperatedly.
Levi positioned himself, then dove to block Naomi’s throw. It ripped past his fingers and he cried out in pain again. Naomi laughed uproariously, sitting down to keep from toppling over from her hysterics.
“Why didn’t you catch it?” she asked sarcastically between chuckles. Levi groaned.
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Levi stretched out across his bed, enjoying the sense of it enveloping him. He cradled his aching fingers, considering using Manna to help with the pain. It could also heal them faster, though it would still take a while. He decided against it, he couldn’t afford to waste it, then need it later.
Someone knocked on the door. He stood, the opened it. Adelia stood outside, looking slightly nervous. “Are your hands ok?”
“Yeah, they’re fine,” he said, trying to ignore the throbs of pain they were sending up his arms.
“Can I see them?” she asked. He lifted them and she took one in both of hers, inspecting it gently. “I’m so sorry, Naomi can have a hard time realizing how strong she is and that she can hurt people with that strength.”
Levi’s cheeks flushed at her touch, the memory of her calling him cute, or at least saying he wasn’t not cute, returning with full force. “It’s ok, I think seeing her reaction to it was worth all the pain.”
“She’s incredible, isn’t she?” Adelia said fondly.
“That she is.”
Adelia paused, then dropped his hands suddenly. “Sorry,” she said, blushing.” Levi winced in pain at the sudden movement. “Sorry,” she repeated
“You’re fine,” he said, his face burning. He was glad Anson wasn’t there, he would mock Levi for so long if he knew a girl had been holding his hand, even if just to see how hurt they were.
“Actually, that’s the other reason I came here, I wanted to apologize for what I said earlier, I know it could have made you uncomfortable.”
“If you think that would make me uncomfortable, you should hear some of what the drunks say when the bars close,” he said with a chuckle. She laughed too, and Levi felt some of the tension between them vanish. He tried not to think about how much he’d been thinking about her comment before though, it had affected him more than it should have.”
“Ok, cool,” she said. She looked like she wanted to say something, but at that moment Lazarus’s voice rang through the Corridor.
“Hey! Adelia, Naomi, Levi! Come help us take some of this to the cellar!” he called.
“I guess we’d better go then,” Adelia said, turning.
“Yeah, I guess so,” Levi said, though he wished they could have stayed for just a few moments longer. He had enjoyed talking to Adelia.
I don't know why it's bolded but I can't fix it.
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2 minutes ago, Vyzkel Willbender said:
What does NHD stand for?
(I lost the game)
National History Day, a very taxing history competition.
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38 minutes ago, The Clarinetist said:
Never mind.
Yup. We love NHD sooo much.
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11 hours ago, The Clarinetist said:
Which class? Should I take it?
NHD, and if you want.
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23 minutes ago, Edema Rue said:
Aww scud get out of my brain…me too…
*winces*
*hugs*
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I haven’t worked on it in a little while and I’ve made some significant changes to my plans. I won’t be posting anything else here from now on though, if you want to read more PM me and I’ll share a Google doc with you (at some point, it might take a minute).