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Flaming Coinshot

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  1. I kinda hate the fact that I need 1 bloody more reputation to get to bridgeman. And yes, I have been reading wheel of time. I'm almost to the end of Book Thirteen! 

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    2. Flaming Coinshot

      Flaming Coinshot

      I'm a Bridgeman! Woohoo! *Realizes I'm essentially (If not literally) a slave*

    3. Flaming Coinshot

      Flaming Coinshot

      Oh, I'm also done with Book 13

  2. I'm going to be away for five days, so... yeah. I also might be able to log in on mobile, but I dunno.

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    2. Flaming Coinshot

      Flaming Coinshot

      I didn't. I almost died of the thirty storming mosquito bites! Now that that's out of the way, I went horseback riding, zip lining, messed around with some friends, swam, and didn't get to go to the beach even though we were on an island. Oh, and I finished books 10-13 of Wheel of Time. That's it.

    3. Mystic Syn

      Mystic Syn

      Danggg. Sounds like you had a good time, man.

    4. Flaming Coinshot

      Flaming Coinshot

      I did. Aside from the fact that I got into a fist fight with my brother twice.

  3. John chuckles. "'Spartan' is a term for something that is poorly or lightly furnished, so it's not as comfortable. It's what I'm used to." John sighs, and starts to walk. up the stairs. Halfway through, he turns and waves. "Nice meeting you two! See you later!"
  4. "Alright." Elduvar's legs are wreathed in a fire tornado and he launches huge meteor-like fireballs from his vantage point at the enemy. "All set! And do it fast!" @Channelknight Fadran
  5. Thanks! I don't actually have the whole thing written, but I will once I'm done.
  6. "Kill the orb thing? Got it!" Elduvar focus fires on the orb thing now that the others are gone.
  7. Okay. I think I'm just gonna make a draft two for the first few chapters.
  8. Elduvar looks over at Martin. "You good?" Elduvar tries to fight his way towards Martin and Fadran whiled tossing fireballs over his shoulder and occasionally aiming a sword slash at the blue one.
  9. Elduvar continues to make attempts to fight the blue while avoiding the reds and tramples the greens.
  10. I do play D&D, and I can see how I messed up on that. I might adjust the abilities later. Although, I'll probably end up burning the draft and restarting the powers.
  11. Thanks for the follow!

  12. First off, Milos was wearing bad clothes, had a backpack over his shoulder, and was obviously running away. Markos is pretty smart, so he can put 2 and 2 together. Btw, all of this is on me for not describing that better, so I'll fix all of that. Milos just literally saw everyone he lived with burned or captured by clearly ruthless police, and his home got burnt to the ground, so his judgement isn't the best right now. He's also supposed to be fairly new to theiving, but again, I'll edit that. Mystic Syn, thanks for all of that. I just learned more grammar from you than from my teacher. I think I fixed everything. As for the character arc, a lot of it is gonna happen after Chapter 5. This is just getting a grip on his abilities. Thanks to both of you and keep it coming!
  13. Elduvar continues to fight the blue monster while his rhino charges into it and attempts to trample the green ones.
  14. I may have written that wrong, so I'll go see, but I think that he was.
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