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Aeoryi

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  1. "I will help you only partially. I am in need of weaponry, lest I fall to narrators or authors." How long would it take Desolation to find spook? Also, in case you haven't noticed, Desolation thinks of basically everyone as "easy to manipulate and easy to kill" so that's that for you.
  2. Desolation, as it seemed, was not completely alone. That voice. It was so persuasive. Almost too much. In that sense, he could almost smell the hints of betrayal from their conversation earlier. He went and remembered the steel plate, on which he read. The guy had wanted to leave desolation behind eventually. Finding mordite was a daunting task, but not impossible. Even then, it wouldn't be his. It was technically worthless. So why was he doing this person's bidding? Because they made a false promise? Besides, no matter if the mysterious voice continued with the promise, it wouldn't benefit Desolation. But what did Desolation need? He needed weapons. Powerful weapons. If the mysterious voice or Platypus were to attack again, they would certainly bring something strong. Maybe others, other narrators even. But what weapons would last against narrators? In a single thought, they could make a normal steel blade disappear. Heck, they could make planets disappear. The weapons that imnediately came to mind were the Plotblades. There were many, and holding even a single one gave you a decent advantage over anyone else. Desolation already had Foreshadowing, but he knew there were more. Aranis or Falvan - one of the two held Side Character. That one would be easy to get, and Desolation wouldn't be drastically affected by it. Spook - he held Plotblade of Plot as a young child susceptable to emotions, he could be manipulated. Nobody - he held analysis. He was worthless. Onyx - They held Suddently, Pineapples. That blade still scared Desolation. Without the proper protection, Suddently, Pineapples could end him and the inklings. Conflict - That was held by Onyx. Due to them having Suddently, Pineapples, Desolation wasn't going to try them. Venegance - Platypus' blade. Desolation didn't need it, butif he could get it, he would take it. Plot development - Rirrom. He could do stuff to Desolation, but desolation would overpower him easily. He was an easy target. Endings - Desolation would sure enjoy that one. But he didn't think it was worth the risk. Of course, there was Change. Who even held it now? Falvan? Aranis? That one was fun to work with. There were smaller, less known plotblades like Flashback or Annotation. But those didn't have a weilder and were therefore worthless to Desolation. Desolation decided to go try to retrieve Plot development, Side character, Character (spooks blade), and Change. He split himself into four Desolations to each go and tail down the blade. @Thaidakar the Ghostblood Spook is where? Assume Desolation arrives nearby. I didn't want to write something that might be wrong so yeah. @Scars of Hathsin I think you held Change or Side character. One of the two. Either way, Desolation is coming. Again, same as Thaidikar. Don't want to cannonize a location yet. @Nameless* Rirrom is with Dark figure and Falvan. Desolation is also going to arrive there. I would ping witisthebest but since I can't: That'll have to do. Desolation is totally the antagonist and I'm fine with that. He just now has a greater goal to hype up the eventual Narrators vs Desolation fight. Please don't bring Suddently pineapples. That would be anticlimatic.
  3. is he evil? I would say yes. You are right about the 1 dimensionality of Desolation. He wants to kill all the narrators, but why? I would say he does this to be in control. If he kills enough narrators, eventually they'll fall into line and conjoin with an inkling. Or maybe they won't. That's where the normal people fall. Also, fire is not one of Desolation's weaknesses because then he would wind up being a venom rip-off or an analogy for peterol oil. In case you were wondering, inklings can use other narrators' powers so long as they follow the right criteria.
  4. I had a great terrible idea to combine all my scrapped magic systems into one story and make a crappy book out of it. Sounds fun though.
  5. The reason I brought him back was because I enjoyed writing his scenes. That's the purpose of TLT. TLT is not supposed to be a complete book or story or whatnot. It exists so people can enjoy writing things in here. Suddenly pineapples, I had never heard of before (I thought it was a person if you remember) It certainly didn't outline it's full capabilities, and if you expected me to know what it was doing by reading back a couple hundred pages, then no, I did not know what it did, and you should have specified what "anti-light beams" do. I wouldn't have given kill permission if I knew they weren't returning for a while. Why is desolation an evil person? Good question. I think you've already realized, he sort of doesn't have other emotions that cause him to be evil besides his desire for chaos. And where does that stem from? Great question. Either way, desolation has weaknesses (I was considering making one of them fire, but decided that was too generic). If I would say his emotional weaknesses basically consist of being proven wrong. Desolation started to split, sending copies to go try and find a secret lab of Nowhere. I mean I'm a big fan of not invincible, not powerful, completely normal characters (in a sense) but Desolation is the first time in a while that I've tried a character who is actually strong. EDIT: Steelheart analogy was meant not for platypus (anyone on TLT could probably kill steelheart) but for a random person in the Fractured states.
  6. The thing is, even if you have the Lavengers Walmart edition (okay they're not that bad) they will still not instantly win. And if you notice, Desolation has not had any real wins in the last while. He got rejected by Unintelligible and outsmarted by Subversion. Hacob removed him. He hasn't exactly won, and he certainly has been punished. But a bunch of powerful people aren't able to necessarily kill an immortal thing. It's like nuking steelheart.
  7. I thought I postponed the game for a day
  8. I am a Bloodsealer! Yeah!
  9. Fifth favorite Unmade? Your favorite RP character (from anywhere, from anyone) Worst person you've ever met? What did they do to make you think of them as the worst? (Don't need to disclose names)
  10. Are you... amassing people to annihilate Desolation? That's not gonna go well... for you
  11. I would live on Thenrody. It seems like it has good trade things and plus I enjoy suffering.
  12. Desolation has a tiny bit of Narration from fighting Subversion. Desolation... cannot absorb authors but can suppress their abilities. The sword probably can kill them. Desolation needed to go find Mordite. Or he could go and kill narrators. No. He quickly split up into multiple Desolation's and started heading in different directions. One started heading towards Urithiru, and the other started heading towards the cave.
  13. "Very well. But do be warned. If I do not find Mordite, I will come back here."
  14. "Well, then I certainly know where some Mordite is. Perhaps right here." Desolation looked at Unintelligible, studying him. "You're the bright one, aren't you? You're the one who used the spheres to knock out Falvan. It would be a shame to kill you"
  15. "I'll leave if you tell me where Mordite is." Desolation smiled, "And if you're lying, it won't go well."
  16. "I only need the Mordite. And Michael has it." The Nohr-maul blade glowed bright white in response.
  17. No. Would you steal from your friend?
  18. "I can already kill them. And I would recommend any of your narrator friends to stay away from me." The blade is in a different location since Desolation used some narration. Hacob is probably in Urithiru or something. Desolation and Hacob are not bound together. Either way, Hacob is not priority for Desolation anyways.
  19. Why not just make the wall believe it is many many many many many little objects?
  20. Unfortunately Trump goes to the Well of Ascension (Antarctica) in 2162 and ascends, but does nothing and ends up unleashing true Ruin, who kills Riun. People in Asia start being born with breath
  21. The obvious answer would be to remove the dor's presence around the room, then kill the forger once they arrive.
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