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Channelknight Fadran

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  1. Sighing, Kleisha held up a finger. "If you were actually drunk, you'd smell like it. And your voice is too methodical." She turned around to look at the newcomer. "You've got the walk down, though. I'll give you that. Anyways... Shadowcastles? What's that?"
  2. "Somehow I doubt that."
  3. "If we're about to give it up anyways, then I don't see the harm."
  4. ...that's why I had "Hate of necessary filler" in there
  5. Otherwise, I do love me a soft magic system!
  6. Princess Bride is perfect. And the tone really allows Inigo to go around telling people about his character arc.
  7. Kleisha shook Bree's hand, eyes not far from the mysterious duo behind her. "Pleasure doing business with you too, miss."
  8. Also the Macrosmos isn't a normal universe. It's a collection of all the universes ever, so saying that Starborns can "pop up anywhere in the Macrosmos" kinda ruins the whole idea. It's supposed to be a way for everyone's own universes to interact, not a large universe in and of itself open for worldbuilding.
  9. Pet peeves! Everyone has 'em. I have 'em too. Imma drop the ones that I have for writing. That's it. Go ahead and read.
  10. VIBIN LIL' BLOB BOI!!! I LOVE HIM!!!
  11. Would anyone mind if I put a list of writing pet peeves on RightingWrite? (It might offend a few people)

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    2. Frustration

      Frustration

      Stab me with words and I will laugh, have at me Fadran!

      Also I desperatly need something to do on the shard so do it.

    3. Chinkoln

      Chinkoln

      Say what you will, I won’t hide from the truth 

    4. Condensation

      Condensation

      Mine is "In conclusion..."

  12. Ellis felt at his pocket, where the Crystal was. "We could use this."
  13. "Don't look now," Kleisha said, "but that guy behind you? Following someone. I don't suppose either happen to be one of those people you're trying to avoid, are you?" It wasn't necessarily a question she needed answered, though it certainly couldn't hurt. More so she just wanted to gauge this person's savviness with the underground; as well as how they judged hers. It helped her maintain her level of professionality to see just how their dynamic was. @Sorana
  14. Ellis glanced a Gerald. "Do we have to go down in a bucket?"
  15. "I prefer not to wait on these kinds of things." Kleisha replied. "I'm in, and my lips are sealed. Client security is our trade, after all."
  16. "I prefer weaker drinks myself." Kleisha replied, setting a bill on the table for a refill. "Better not to get yourself drunk in the Underworld." As an afterthought, she added, "But I can stomach one or two if you're offering."
  17. "My name is Kleisha, but you can call me whatever you like." She tapped the bar with her fingertips. "And I know better than to set a price before I know what the job entails. Can't have you paying me a fixed low if we get ourselves caught in a firefight halfway through."
  18. Peering down into the well, Ellis scratched his head. "So... what. We just jump?" @xinoehp512
  19. You come before me, hunter, and plead for my sanctuary? Cassander was caught in a bow, eyes on the floor and hand over his heart. "From thee, o great one, that is all I desire." Your sacrifices are... powerful. And yet I sense little meaning behind them. "I assure you; I only chose my most treasured to offer." It was true. He knew better than to go by halves when it came to bargaining with a higher being. Perhaps. There was a hesitation. Very well. I shall grant you sanctuary so as long as you don't squander it. "Of course." Now please retrieve you companion from the children's play area before my wardens cast him into prison. "O--of course." What?
  20. AH WHOA Geeze. COMPLETELY forgot about this lad...
  21. "I'm a mercenary." Kleisha replied. "Not a hitman--more like a bodyguard--but that kind of work." Mostly for traveling merchants. She thought to herself. Whoever this Brianna person was... they were clearly something different, even for the Underground. They were unnerving, unnatural, inhuman... but then again, you didn't get many unlike that among the Tailored. Even so, Kleisha started having second thoughts about selling her services to this person. "So you've got a job?" @Sorana
  22. Now that was someone who knew what they were doing down here. Kleisha was torn between giving the stranger a glance or pretending she hadn't noticed. Not that it mattered, really; if they were anyone worth paying attention to, they'd already know that she'd noticed them. It'd be nice if everybody weren't hiding behind a million layers of masks down here, she thought, setting an empty mug down on the counter. It was easy enough to get into the habit of keeping her cards close to her chest when it came to mingling among people with a backup plan to every backup plan, agendas stacked atop other agendas; not so easy getting out of it. They'd try to pay her in a million ways; reputation, favors, information. None of them had seemed to consider that someone so well-versed in Underground culture just wanted some money to eke out a living. "I don't suppose any of you lot are looking for a hired hand?" She found herself asking.
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