So are people not allowed to talk about things in the book that disappoint them?
Well it's too late now, obviously, but that doesn't mean that it was a good idea to make it a name that would throw people out of the book.
You do come off as slightly abrasive, yeah. I know what that's like though, don't worry.
I would say that naming someone December, in a world that does not have December as a month does come pretty close to breaking the fourth wall. You might not. There really isn't a fine line.
Yes, but if the king is named Tonald Drump, I think you'd find that off putting. Some people just have different standards and tastes.