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The Community, network of several hundred villages in the dryer part of the swaps The villages surround a large monastery, and are considered vessels to it. The monastery of changes Is inhabited by monks, dedicated to expanding the art of shaping and shifting. The population is mostly human. They were originally created by indulgence, but have since been altered by corruption, resulting in strange mutations. The mutations differ from person to person. Most, however, our subtly mutated enough, that they could still pass as a mutated human to most observers.

OK I suppose there’s room for at least one more magic system so I’ll start a poll for what the last magic system should be I see @CoderDrag0n8 can you give us an example about what a divine page might do?

Diviners, and THE WORMS?

What is the planet and biome that they live in? Are they true nations or more like city states with the surrounding land, loyal to them? What shard has the most influence on your civilization? We only have three magic systems proposed so I don’t see the need to vote on them. What shard is the most influential in your civilization

OK I’m not sure how many civilizations we’re going to get but we want at least five in our main planet hopefully you at least one more in the second planet. Here’s what you need to include 1.The name of the dominant species of your civilization 2. If a custom species details on their biology and what they look like 3. Their origin were they made by one of the shards or Do they pre-date the shards? 3. what Planet and biome are they in ? what is their nature of the civilization are they one single empire? Are they a loose Federation of independent states help together by a similar religion or ideology? Are they confederation of tribes that trace their origins to a mythical ancestor? or there’s something else entirely.

I figured we would do that, and the civilizations together since the two are connected

Entr0pic @IcedOutPenguin@CoderDrag0n8 @Lord Ruler Sylphrena@Lopens Tenth Cousin @Hoid_Slayer@Through The Living Glass @SpiritOfWrath@TheBestTruthwatcher Are we ready to move on to Civilization?

What kind of edits do you have in mind?

I’m a little confused number of people under them equals higher invested power? Does each person under them give them some of their own investiture or something? how exactly does one become a flock to a crown? Do you swear some kind of oath? Perform some kind of virtual something else?

I thought about maybe making them more invested so that they would have a bit of a healing factor maybe some increased strength and toughness as well. And if you really wanted to, you could maybe get them even some Limited hemokinesis. I assume it’s only the kings and his immediate heirs Who get these powers (kind of like the royal locks) so you can make them more powerful and so probably aren’t that many people who have this power. Explain?

That’s acceptable I don’t think we can do anymore though.

I thought about make them a little bit more invested, so they can be stronger and faster more competitive with the other magic systems as well have more detailed process of how they begin developing a thirst for blood. I was like along with some more details about their origin I feel like we have at least one magic system for each shard now. Do you’ll want to begin discussions, civilizations, since we already have several proposals for that?

I like your crowns system It is a little vague, though is it all right if I flush out the details a bit more? where I think your magic system is basically all right for right now we can add more details or change more details as problems come up if necessary I do have one request. Could you change it to something other than hijacking I like the system but hijacking this feels so modern term. But If you can’t think of a replacement, then that’s fine we can go with it.

Can I suggest a different age. To become a shift or you must Consume a poison that produces temporary madness needed To create the cracks in the spirit web. This Is an extremely dangerous process and requires training in order to survive even then some either still die, or become completely insane. This process must be repeated for every new crack in your spiderweb. What do you think? So essentially superstrength and explosives? This has potential is it all right if I flush it out a bit more?

Probably but i don’t want to make any official until we finish with the magic systems and start working on the civilizations

Unknown if there even are humans on planet

He terraformed it according to the description Entr0pic @IcedOutPenguin@CoderDrag0n8 @Lord Ruler Sylphrena@Lopens Tenth Cousin @Hoid_Slayer@Through The Living Glass @SpiritOfWrath@TheBestTruthwatcher Dose any on want to make a magic system for the two other shards

Prologue: excerpt taken from a translation of the hymn of beginnings In the Beginning was Indulgence and possessed God and Indulgence was God. He looked upon the Earth and saw that it was empty and dry. And Indulgence said “Let the Waters fill the earth and Let the Earth bring forth Life. And it was so Indulgence Named the Earth Arvus. And Indulgence Named himself Lord of Arvus And it was so. Indulgence Ruled Magnanimous and with Great Splendor. Then came The Great Other, the corrupter of all. He came slowly and with Great Stealth. And Indulgence Saw not. He touched all that was Indulgence and all that He touched became like him. And Indulgence was wrath. His face was red with fury. ”How dare you take what is MINE” And across in might, our Lord Lifted his fist. then came the Third. The one of Shining and pride. He came not as the Other but with Boldness and much arrogance. With a Great voice he did give challenge. With a conceited face he did demand a confrontation. Indulgence drew back not out of fear but wisdom . For why fight your enemies when you can get them to fight each other? And Our Lord did plot.

I writing a prologue expanding this

So I suppose the civilization should be primitive be give that they would have to be created by indulgent or migrated afterwards

So the more they gain power, the more they grow unstable? I like the idea of eating something as when you eat something you either corrupt it changing into part of your body, or interrupt you, I change your body in some way @CoderDrag0n8 sorry to pin you but on reflection I have any idea of a limite and cost I can add to your system

@CoderDrag0n8’s @CoderDrag0n8 I like the basic idea, but I do think that I need some different initiation makes no sense for someone swear else to corruptions like it would be for honor, for example. I also do agree with the criticism that it’s a little more overpowered but that’s easy to fix. We can simply make the higher levels (realm shifting for example) as of yet unknown or making them require a lot of power.