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I think he is inhaling it somewhat unconsciously, but not trying to maintain a minimum level of Stormlight in himself. I think it's just beginning to become a habit and he just breathes it in when he walks around. Kind of like how Pewterarms and mistborn can burn pewter unconsciously.

Ok, fixed! Good to know!

I'm one of those who reads fanfic occasionally but never writes it. I don't think I could do the characters justice. I only read it sometimes. I've read a few HP ones and these, that's really it I think. When Im looking for one, I test-read one of an authors stories and if I like it, I go in-depth and read their other stuff.

Oh I wasn't trying to imply thar Wax didn't have much control at all. I was just showing the only evidence I know of that talks about this. I think Wax has enormous amounts of skill with Steel and with combining that with Feruchemical iron.

So Tanavast and Rayse were fighting over Cultivation's hilder's love? I like it.

I just found the quote I was thinking of from WoA.

Or even worse, fling chull dung.

But it's Peter, so basically anything he says gets upvoted. Brandon is the only other one who just basically automatically gets upvotes. If either of them came on and posted Hi, it would get at least 3 upvotes.

As long as they are never on the same team again. Sorry, Sadeas, but it's going to take a lot to prove yourself to me.

Oh, ok. That makes much more sense. Thanks!

Please do! :) By the way, do you have a planned length for that story or are you just writing until you decide to stop?

It said somewhere in the books that Coinpushes were possible to control, but very difficult. I think we only see Zane and Kelsier do it. I assume Ironpulls would be the same.

I agree with the Nature thing. I didn't get it the first time, then I read the sentence again and understood, so I think if you, as yankorro suggests, you capitalize or add mother it will make it more clear. The odd phrases thing, I found very interesting and they made sense, even the cat one, though I do think it could be worded a bit better. Good job! I really do like this so far.

If they have to move the distance, how would anyone ever travel to the other worlds? Regardless of if you are in the Physical or Cognitive realm, planets are not close by.

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Here' my liveblog of A Training Session: -Too bad he's not Ham and can just rip the sleeves off -Of course there's no sloppiness in Dalinar's camp. He's Dalinar "The Blackthorn" Kholin. Sadeas is a jerk who doesn't know how to run an army. -Yes!! Haha Kaladin's cloak is higher ranked than Adolin's. - Haha, Syl. Just floatin' here in front of Adolin's nose. -Come on, Adolin, the man's got a spear and you have a Shardblade. I hope Kal schools you. -Oh, good, it's just a regular sword, now I know Kal will school you -maybe he wants to fight because he heard rumors of you storming flying over a chasm and catching hundreds of arrows on a shield and you saved Dalinar with a spear, just maybe it's that -Yeah, Kal has skills. -No, Kaladin, you're supposed to beat him. Even if I do understand your reason. -Good, Adolin, recognized that Kal let him win -Yes! There's Shallarin's appearance. It was great! I think you really captured the characters. I could see something like this actually happening in WoR. Liveblog of Beneath the Bells of Kharbranth (Warning: Major Spoiler Alert) -Shallan! I love how she always makes an appearance of some sort. -second nahn? Dang, Kaladin is really moving up in the world -The women's script really is confusing. I can't wrap my head around it -Oh, no. I know what's going on here. No! I hate this place! Taravangian is messed up! -Argghh! No, don't kill her! you're all deranged! -Yes, the surgeon was trying to kill her, just like he has murdered many others, just for a couple phrases chanted -You can protect by killing, but not by innocent slaughter -Ugh, you disgust me, Taravangian. I used to like your character. Not any more -you take people who aren't dying? Even more repulsive. -There's the Kal we love, fighting for right -No, they're going to kill him! -Ahhh! No! And here's the one for all three chapters(that I've read) of A Strange Mix of Both Chapter 1 -that's how I feel every night! -Renarin's reading! Yes -Poor Renarin -aww, this is so perfect! -Sword-fighting for reading Chapter 2 -Good job, Renarin -He's so right, alethi women's script doesn't make sense to me at all -25 isn't canon, right? But it does make sense -Is the way Shallan explains writing actually correct? If so, it might make a lot more sense to me now. [Edit: I now know how to write in Alethi Script thanks to firstRainbowRose and there is some truth in this description, but it's not complete.] Keeping a Pet Skyeel -Ooh I like the metaphor -Can you ever get comfortable with guilt? -Ooh, Adolin I still can't decide whether I really like him or not -Haha Jasnah and her free time -Pet skyeel similies. Awesome! -Yes, please. I so want to see Wit meet Shallan. -He's quite honorable, hmmm -Good job, Shallan, make him fumble his words Edit:A Smile to Calm a Highstorm -First, great title! -Ooh, secret meetings in an empty tower -Only a glove, gasp! Haha Oh, Vorin society -I love Renarin's blunt wit! -Kabsal, urgh -A first date! -"He could've summoned a Shardblade in the blink of an eye." Perfect! I'll be sure to post mine for the fourth chapter sometime this week when I get around to reading it.

First of all, Feather, I'm very disappointed you didn't inform me of the fourth chapter of ASMoB To start off, here's a list of Feather's current fanfics(all SA) -A small Renarin POV fic. -"Beneath the Bells of Kharbranth" - (Beware, it's not a happy story...) Synopsis: Instead of joining the army, Kaladin goes to Kharbranth to train as a surgeon. After years of hard work, his talent for healing earns him a promotion. But there are secrets in Kharbranth, the likes of which he could never have imagined. -"A Training Session" - (This is a nicer one, written for Tumblr's Cosmere Secret Santa exchange last year.) Synopsis: After the events of The Way of Kings, Kaladin is working to train the members of Bridge 4 when Adolin Kholin unexpectedly drops by. -"A Strange Mix of Both" - (This is Feather's Shallarin fic. It's multiple parts so you'll have to click the "Read More" links at the bottom of each to open each full post.)

Doloken, Yes! I'm serious, if Feather's okay with it, I really think we should. Plus I've liveblogged all three main ones so I can share those too! (by the way, if you haven't noticed, I'm trying to use my Cosmere curses more ) Also, Alaxel, ask Feather about her original stuff. It's really good too. I haven't gotten around to all of then yet but what I have read is so good.

This. Storm it, Alaxel, why do you always have to voice my own thoughts before I even think them. Have you read Beneath the Bells of Kharbranth and A Training Session? Those are also Feather's really good fanfic