Kelsier'sGodComplex she/her Posted March 3, 2020 Posted March 3, 2020 (edited) So, in my ELA class, I have to write a poem about a chosen book. I chose Warbreaker. It has to be in Haiku form. It has to be about how the characters changed throughout the course of hte book. This is what I have so far. Any tips or advice on how to make it better? Siri: Beginning: Unimportant, free Living her life carelessly The princess baby Middle: Father gave her up Father loved Vivenna more Forced into marriage End: Queen of Hallendren Serious and hardworking Time to stop a war Vivenna: Beginning: Controlled childhood Destined to marry God King Oh, wait, nevermind Middle: Unimportant, free Father sent Siri instead Time to go save her End: Turned to a beggar Was taught how to use her Breath She fled with Vasher Lightsong: Beginning: A god people praise He doesn't feel that special Man brought back to life Middle: A coming war starts Time to be responsible The Pahn Khal rise up End: The God King is trapped And Blushweaver has been killed My breath becomes yours. Nightblood: A black talking sword Who is obsessed with evil Does not change that much. Edited March 3, 2020 by Kelsier'sGodComplex 1
Karger he/him Posted March 3, 2020 Posted March 3, 2020 8 hours ago, Kelsier'sGodComplex said: He wanted Vivenna more Nice poem. I would change this to loved.
Quantus he/him Posted March 3, 2020 Posted March 3, 2020 At first glance Id recommend moving the "Beginning/Middle/End" bits to a more obvious title location rather than in the first line, it throws off the syllable count.
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