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Well he wants Star to be happy and people in relationships are happier. Star wants Shadow to be happier and again, people in relationships are happier. Therefore, the obvious plan of action is to ship you two together

 

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*Screams and runs around panicking* (I legit spit out my milk by Butt’s post)

“…Is it just me, or is it getting a bit hot?” BoS looked up from her book and looked at Ember. “…I’m sorry, I’m just a bit tired…” Sweat beaded down her forehead. Her armor disappeared in a puff of black smoke, replaced by ripped jeans and a tank with Cthulhu on it. BoS continued to read Edgar Allan Poe. 

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“…Is it just me, or is it getting a bit hot?” BoS looked up from her book and looked at Ember. “…I’m sorry, I’m just a bit tired…” Sweat beaded down her forehead. Her armor disappeared in a puff of black smoke, replaced by ripped jeans and a tank with Cthulhu on it. BoS continued to read Edgar Allan Poe. 

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It's Butt; he's meant to be clingy and annoying.

Ember's face fell. "I am... hurting you?" She looked down at her own hands. The air rippled in her heat.

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“No, no…It’s fine really.” BoS scooted away. But the sweating continued. By this point, there were several drops on the book. She slammed it shut, making it disappear. BoS summoned a fan. She looked…miserable. “What the hell is happening…”

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“No, no…It’s fine really.” BoS scooted away. But the sweating continued. By this point, there were several drops on the book. She slammed it shut, making it disappear. BoS summoned a fan. She looked…miserable. “What the hell is happening…”

Ember regrew her armor and the air around her cooled. "Are you... sick? Did the drink do this to you?"

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Ember regrew her armor and the air around her cooled. "Are you... sick? Did the drink do this to you?"

“Obviously.” 

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“By letting me sleep.” She sounded irritated. 

"Oh." Suddenly, Ember felt guilty about her own selfish desire to have Shadow close. "Do what you need to. I am sorry."

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"Oh." Suddenly, Ember felt guilty about her own selfish desire to have Shadow close. "Do what you need to. I am sorry."

BoS mumbled something about it being fine, then went below cabin and crawled into bed. And laid there in sweat. She kept tossing and turning, trying to sleep. That obviously didn’t work, so she summoned some sedatives and finally got some sleep. 

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BoS mumbled something about it being fine, then went below cabin and crawled into bed. And laid there in sweat. She kept tossing and turning, trying to sleep. That obviously didn’t work, so she summoned some sedatives and finally got some sleep. 

Ember could not stop thinking about Shadow. She understood it was irrational, but her Connection to Star made emotion cloud her judgment. She was perfectly capable, alone.

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Did you ever get the recordings to work?

 

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Good. I'll probably do tomorrows about Ember. 

I know this doesn't really apply to you, but I find it interesting; Star didn't even really notice Pheonix at all. It's really sad, actually. She ended up loving him because he paid attention to her, but she didn't return that, not at first. She left him hanging. And now she feels worse than she already does. It's crazy how much better I've gotten to know her, as I write. 

 

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Have you learned anything you hadn't known before from the entries? Sorry if I'm being annoying, Star is like my baby. Well, pretty much all of my characters are.

 

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She regrets a lot of things. Thought once said, "Guilt will kill you if you let it. So you either have to move on or do something about it." My characters aren't usually the types to simply "move on." Shadow is a really interesting character to me, particularly because she has no past. Are you going to develop that?

 

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:D That'll sure be interesting to see. It can't be too generic; she's a Narrator after all. 

Star, the Narrator who wanted something more and paid a heavy toll.

Pheonix, a Narrator born of the ashes of the ones before him. 

Ember, a warrior created for a purpose she can't seem to fulfil. 

Butt Venture, a character given sentience. 

And Shadow. A drunk with one drive; to destroy. 

We sure are an odd bunch.

 

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Kay, I have a few things. I have Shadow and Tom (and Ember, technically, though I'm not very impressed with myself for that one. Tom was fun to do 'cause he's a bit insane) and a short journal entry and a little sketch that I did. I want to work on a bigger, more detailed version. It'll take me a little while, but I'm really excited to work on it. However, I'm having trouble finding where to put Ember. Anywhere I can think of looks awkward. She is a bit of a fifth wheel. Anyone have any suggestions as to where I should insert her?

 

Impressions - Tom (and Ember).mp3

Impressions - Shadow.mp3

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Entry 5.mp3

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