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The Narrator nodded. "I know. It sucks, doesn't it? But that's what happened. That's real life. See, this is a true story. And true stories don't end happily." The Narrator paused. "Well, at least, stories without True Love. Star didn't have True Love. Yet." 

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The Narrator sighed and got out a pencil and began drawing in the air. With quick motions the figure sketched out Star and Pheonix and, once the drawing was complete, the pencil marks came to life. Star and Pheonix leaned into each other, kissing. The figure sighed wistfully. 

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I actually think this is gonna be a new character...

Smiling at their reactions, the Narrator twirled their pencil in their hand. They began sketching again, adding other characters. The drawing of Xino pulled a sword from a scabbard and a doodle of Heather uncapped a bottle of wine. 

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On 2/28/2020 at 3:21 PM, Shard of Thought said:

Granite paled. What the storms, he thought. He paused, mouth frozen open and looked around. Of the three other people on the mountain top, he only recognized Sophie. He looked back at Michael. What's a mime? he thought. No. Ask about Mom. "Can you tell me about my mom? Please."

"Star? Uh..." Michael looked at him sideways. "What do you want to know about her?"

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1 minute ago, Shard of Thought said:

Granite blinked. Storms, where to begin? "What... What is she? Why did she leave?"

"What is she?" Michael blinked. "Um... a Narrator?"

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Granite bit his lip. "Yeah, I've heard that term, I just wanna know..." He sighed. "I wanna know everything. What is a Narrator anyway, what really happened to Marsh, why did my mom leave us, where is she right now, did she ever really... care. In the first place..." His shoulders fell as he looked at Michael. He looked back at Sophie, then glanced at the other man. "Who are you guys anyway?"

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4 minutes ago, Shard of Thought said:

Granite bit his lip. "Yeah, I've heard that term, I just wanna know..." He sighed. "I wanna know everything. What is a Narrator anyway, what really happened to Marsh, why did my mom leave us, where is she right now, did she ever really... care. In the first place..." His shoulders fell as he looked at Michael. He looked back at Sophie, then glanced at the other man. "Who are you guys anyway?"

"Uh," managed Michael, overwhelmed by the onslaught of questions. "I mean... a Narrator is someone who, ah Narrates. They're Narrators. I... well, actually, I do perform some Narration, but I use Narrativium, so it doesn't count."

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"Narrativium? What... I..." Granite scoffed, frustrated. "Just tell me why she didn't come back after.... what happened. If nothing else, that's what I most want to know."

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5 minutes ago, Shard of Thought said:

"Narrativium? What... I..." Granite scoffed, frustrated. "Just tell me why she didn't come back after.... what happened. If nothing else, that's what I most want to know."

"Er... I don't think she had much choice in the matter," Michael said, scratching his head.

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9 minutes ago, xinoehp512 said:

"Er... I don't think she had much choice in the matter," Michael said, scratching his head.

Granite's eye widened hopefully. Maybe his mother would have come back if she was able to. Maybe she cared. Or maybe she didn't. But there was still hope. He nodded. "Wh-where is she right now?"

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1 minute ago, Shard of Thought said:

Granite's eye widened hopefully. Maybe his mother would have come back if she was able to. Maybe she cared. Or maybe she didn't. But there was still hope. He nodded. "Wh-where is she right now?"

"In the other Universe," said Michael.

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"Umm... Okay?" Granite furrowed his eyebrows in confusion. "Wait, hold on, other universe? What in the..." He shook his head. "You know what, I just... I need some time to... process... this..." 

"Oh, oh!" Sophie said. She jumped up and down and raised her hand. "I can explain, I can explain! You're a character, right? So by learning about Narrators you should be breaking the fourth wall. BUT 'cause your mom is a Narrator, your brain doesn't explode when we tell you all of this stuff!"

Granite regarded her with more confusion. "What?"

"Cool, right?"

"Wait hold on, a character? Is that like code for something?"

Sophie shrugged. "Not really, it's pretty straight forward. Here, see, I'm a Narrator. Watch this." A chair appeared for Granite to sit in, she Narrated.

Granite's eyes boggled. "What the..."

"IT'S AWESOME!!"

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8 minutes ago, Shard of Thought said:

"Umm... Okay?" Granite furrowed his eyebrows in confusion. "Wait, hold on, other universe? What in the..." He shook his head. "You know what, I just... I need some time to... process... this..." 

"Oh, oh!" Sophie said. She jumped up and down and raised her hand. "I can explain, I can explain! You're a character, right? So by learning about Narrators you should be breaking the fourth wall. BUT 'cause your mom is a Narrator, your brain doesn't explode when we tell you all of this stuff!"

Granite regarded her with more confusion. "What?"

"Cool, right?"

"Wait hold on, a character? Is that like code for something?"

Sophie shrugged. "Not really, it's pretty straight forward. Here, see, I'm a Narrator. Watch this." A chair appeared for Granite to sit in, she Narrated.

Granite's eyes boggled. "What the..."

"IT'S AWESOME!!"

"Wait a minute," said Michael, furrowing his eyebrows as a thought came to him. "Shouldn't you be in the other Reality with Star?"

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