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Just now, xinoehp512 said:

Tom laughed cruelly. "I'm not the one who forced a vial of that horrible black liquid down the throat of someone who trusted me."

"I don't even know what you're talking about! Leave me be!"

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Narrator Silva, using one of the most powerful Narrator powers, snapped. Suddenly, everyone was transported back in the time stream to the end page 413. All the events on page 414 until this point ceased to have occurred. No one was spiked. No one had vanished. No one was in love with Star. No one was crying. 

Everyone had been given a second chance. Narrator Silva hoped they wouldn't waste it.

And in this particular post, No one was not a person, place, thing, or anything else Narrator Silva did not intend.

People, this is TLT. How did the story get so depressing? 

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Xino vetoed the reset.

Tom bent down low and whispered in her ear.

"You betrayed me. I trusted you, and you threw that trust away."

He stood back up. "But don't think I haven't gotten my revenge."

He smiled, a sinister smile.

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Narrator Silva sighed and reset the reset. If they wanted to suffer, they could suffer. Who was she to stop them?

But Jay! And Luna! They don't deserve this!

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Xino shrugged. "She does deserve it."

Tom Joebob began to laugh. An evil laugh.

He cut off abruptly. "Don't think your precious AJ will come to save you."

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"I don't even know what I did," Thought cried to Tom. "I don't remember! You can't blame me for something that happened thousands of years ago! Isn't this enough? To have me at your feet, sobbing, trembling, bleeding, dying, waiting?! And yes! AJ will come save me! I know he will! I have faith in him. No matter how long it takes. He will save me."

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Jaywalk couldn’t take any more of this. He stepped out of the void, hooked his arm around Tom’s neck, and slit Joebob’s throat.

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Tom Joebob sneered. "I wasn't talking about that, girl. I moved on past that a long time ago."

He smiled cruelly. "But AJ doesn't even remember you exist. I killed him, you know. He was reborn. But he never remembered anything. He's living with his wife right now. They have three kids, and they're happily married."

"Wait all you want, Tamika. He's never coming to save you."

Then his throat was cut. He fell to the ground, gasping, and expired. But the smile never left his face.

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Or not.

The cut didn’t seem to faze Tom Joebob. Jaywalk stepped back, mortified. This was a power older than that of the Narrators’.

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Through the power of edits, Xino saved TLT from Things More Powerful Than Narrators. Nothing could be more powerful than a Narrator, after all.

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Marsh drunk in the view of the suffering Star, letting the sorrow flow over himself. He savored it.

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