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Also I have an Epic called Steampunk here are his stats: height 6'9"cloths Steampunk trenchcoat and welding goggles with combat boots and leather jeans.

Powers:can create steam and heat that steam to shoot plasma like a Kamehameha blast. Has a healing factor close to wolverine's. Can create tech as long as he has a base, like 'hunk of iron now its a gun!' that sort of thing.umune to heat fire lightning.so yeah heat. And heat manipulation like 'dough to bread' kind of thing. This is mostly his power-set.

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3 minutes ago, DreamLord_Erith said:

Also I have an Epic called Steampunk here are his stats: height 6'9"cloths Steampunk trenchcoat and welding goggles with combat boots and leather jeans.

Powers:can create steam and heat that steam to shoot plasma like a Kamehameha blast. Has a healing factor close to wolverine's. Can create tech as long as he has a base, like 'hunk of iron now its a gun!' that sort of thing.umune to heat fire lightning.so yeah heat. And heat manipulation like 'dough to bread' kind of thing. This is mostly his power-set.

Under the caveat that I know nothing about how to build chaarcters:

I love the aesthetic and the premise. Steampunk is a genre which is defined by it's cool, clockwork style, so I can absolutely see an epic deciding to define themselves in that kind of identity.

...But I'm not sure about the power set. The steam part, that makes sense (though I'm not sure if superheating it to plasma works, or is necessary. If you can create scalding hot steam, that's kind of dangerous on it's own). Presumably he'd have some sort of ehat resistance to it, to avoid... well, burning him with his own steam.

... But the healing factor, I'm less cool with. Partly because there is such flexibility with Wolverine that I have no idea how extreme you plan on making it; Old Man Logan barely shrugs off bullets, 616!Logan has regenerated from a single drop of blood. Even discounting that, though, I'm not sure if a healing factor is necessary, or really fun; unless you plan on having your guy take a lot of damage all the time, it sounds like he would just tank everything, which... doesn't sound like a lot of fun to me.

(It's been a while since I read Recknoers, so not sure how a healing factor would be classified on the power scale)

Same with the tech part... I'm a little confused. Do you mean he's a tinkerer, ad can build things, or is it literally a case of matter transmutation? One involves a guy scrimping and scrounging for junk to cobble together workable stuff (which might work as a high IQ, rather than a super power), while transmutation... yeah, that would be straight up super power, maybe even count as low-level reality warping, and might be a bit too big.

... Again, though, I have no idea how power scaling works. SO, probably better to wait for someone who knows what their talking about to come along. :ph34r:

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1 hour ago, DreamLord_Erith said:

Also I have an Epic called Steampunk here are his stats: height 6'9"cloths Steampunk trenchcoat and welding goggles with combat boots and leather jeans.

Powers:can create steam and heat that steam to shoot plasma like a Kamehameha blast. Has a healing factor close to wolverine's. Can create tech as long as he has a base, like 'hunk of iron now its a gun!' that sort of thing.umune to heat fire lightning.so yeah heat. And heat manipulation like 'dough to bread' kind of thing. This is mostly his power-set.

To add on what Quiver said, having a High Epic as a first character, which the healing factor would make him, is effectively against the rules, so that's a no go.

To actually ask a question, could you go into a bit more detail for the heat manipulation bit?

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Sure consider the healing factor gone. The heat manipulation goes like this 'matter has four states not three, solid heat it becomes liquid heat it becomes a gas heat that and it becomes plasma(a from of liquid energy like I said Kamehameha.) Plasma is also what you call the sun so he can make a mini sun, without the gravity. Also the tech I was talking about means he just needs the 'casing' and  the tech just kinda fills the gaps. Also it is technological telekinesis like 'stripped computer you are now an Alienware' update on his power-set  he can upgrade any tech he touches like stated above none of that technopothy stuff. So this has been 'steampunk the power and the ruler (PS he is from Greece for further information wait till next time on 'steampunk the power-set and the ruler.')

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Yes.

He can increase the amount of heat in ay given point,so long as it is within sight. A focal point, such as between his hands heats faster than emitting a super heatwave.

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Hi Dreamlord! Welcome to Reckoners RP and whatnot. I know it was probably an accident, but please try to avoid double posting.

It's considered impolite. This isn't DDO.

Posted
2 hours ago, DreamLord_Erith said:

Yes.

He can increase the amount of heat in ay given point,so long as it is within sight. A focal point, such as between his hands heats faster than emitting a super heatwave.

So how much heat can he impart? Could he just flash boil a person?

To build on what breakingamber said, just editing the inital post is plenty.

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On the mechanics side of things: You can't exactly get plasma just by heating things up, it's not quite as simple a phase transition as the other states of matter. It would also come with it's own slew of problems, namely that steam heated to that extent would disperse so rapidly it would basically just be an explosion.

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As a chemical engineer who spent 3 months researching with plasma , I can confirm Voidus's assessment of plasma; you'd need extreme temps and high pressure, and without the pressure you'd either lose the gas entirely to the atmosphere or it would explode like Voidus says. Plasma machines are rather complex, and the temperatures of the plasma stream are very hot. Your character would need very strong, if not complete,  control over water molecules to reach the plasma state, as well as temperature immunity. That level of molecule control would be OP considering the molecule you want to control is water, ie that things that makes up most of the human body. 

I'd recommend keeping your molecule control down to power steam tech (I assume that's the point) which passively allows you to water bend and have control over ice, two powerful abilities in their own right. 

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I did not know about the ice,can you explain please,and the plasma is not really made by superheating steam,he just makes it and his heat resistance is like ' shoot me into the sun pfft I'll only die through lack of oxygen.' he can melt people with his steam or at least scald them. He can make people into ash if he charges the heat blast long enough,about five to ten seconds should do it. He has a cool down on his plasma blast, about thirty seconds to a minute, if that is a good enough limiter. The tech side of things goes clockwork and steam, but still effective. Kind of like a rail gun. the gears spin very fast, propelling objects at very fast speeds. These are with his sidearms and they are very quiet upon firing and use no gunpowder.the gun is powered by his steam allowing for limitless propulsion.

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So I'm I'd like to RP some more with Altermind.  Are there an Portlandians wandering around his route that he could run into?  

 

EDIT:  Princess post up!  @Mestiv, if you want, I was thinking the cat who shows up could be Summer's friend, but it's fine if you'd rather it be a different kitty.  

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@Comatosesure, it can be Henry, she didn't take him inside, so he might be caught in Princesses power :) he'll travel back to Argon's residence when he'll be needed :)

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8 hours ago, DreamLord_Erith said:

I did not know about the ice,can you explain please,and the plasma is not really made by superheating steam,he just makes it and his heat resistance is like ' shoot me into the sun pfft I'll only die through lack of oxygen.' he can melt people with his steam or at least scald them. He can make people into ash if he charges the heat blast long enough,about five to ten seconds should do it. He has a cool down on his plasma blast, about thirty seconds to a minute, if that is a good enough limiter. The tech side of things goes clockwork and steam, but still effective. Kind of like a rail gun. the gears spin very fast, propelling objects at very fast speeds. These are with his sidearms and they are very quiet upon firing and use no gunpowder.the gun is powered by his steam allowing for limitless propulsion.

At this point it might work best to clear up some confusion, if you write a segment of the character actually displaying his powers.

4 hours ago, Comatose said:

So I'm I'd like to RP some more with Altermind.  Are there an Portlandians wandering around his route that he could run into?  

 

EDIT:  Princess post up!  @Mestiv, if you want, I was thinking the cat who shows up could be Summer's friend, but it's fine if you'd rather it be a different kitty.  

He could make a trip to have a look at Voidgaze's house, because of the whole FOB plan.

Oh yes, Kenshin will indeed be thrilled. :ph34r:

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18 hours ago, Blaze1616 said:

 

To this I say thanks and steam tech works best I dudI

 

18 hours ago, Blaze1616 said:

 

Thanks, IcannotFixthisplaesehelp

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5 hours ago, Edgedancer said:

He could make a trip to have a look at Voidgaze's house, because of the whole FOB plan.

FOB? 

Spoiler

The only thing I can think of is Fall Out Boy, and I don't know how songs from a 2000s punk band would help Altermind's master plan. :mellow: 

 

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2 minutes ago, TwiLyghtSansSparkles said:

FOB? 

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The only thing I can think of is Fall Out Boy, and I don't know how songs from a 2000s punk band would help Altermind's master plan. :mellow: 

 

Forward operating base, aka a base of operations outside of one's main territory.

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Just now, Edgedancer said:

Forward operating base, aka a base of operations outside of one's main territory.

Oh, okay. That makes more sense….though it is a lot less musical. 

Spoiler

I think Altermind would be more of an MCR fan, anyway. I may or may not be picturing him running through the streets of Portland singing "I'm Not Okay (I Promise). :ph34r: 

 

 

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19 hours ago, Edgedancer said:

At this point it might work best to clear up some confusion, if you write a segment of the character actually displaying his powers.

 

      Ok so I will do that. Soon.hopefuly.

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i hope he is acceptable.

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Steampunk watched as the epic called pyranis( pie-ran-hiss) walked down the street, tossing fireballs, vandalizing his clocks, a vein pulsed in his temple as he watched the idiot epic destroy a rosebush. "This will not stand."he said. The lord/God/emporer/King/whatever other titles there are, began to prepare. "Nutro!" Called steampunk, "prepare the hilt!" His armor was being built and his takeout wasn't finished, this idiot, torching Aphrodite's bushes, would come to a quick end at his hands or a long one at her's. He decided that the quick end was more epeec(his own word for humane). He sat down on clockwork square, an interesting item of his design, that was basically a huge clock, that was square. He was finishing his takeout, when a blast of white fire engulfed him, turning his food to ash in the blink of an eye and basically liquifying the glass face of the clock. He was now, annoyed. Steampunk shot a blast of steam at the epic that instantly negated his fire, charging a heatwave, steampunk felt the air cool around him, he would see if this epic would be fried by heat other than his own. He released enough heat to grill the epic, this was ineffectual, and had a laughable affect. In fact the fire epic actually did laugh, a step to close to insult. A blast of plasma took off his leg, he looked down on surprise. "Ow."  Said the epic weakly and blacked out. Steampunk was waiting for his blast to charge. His sword hilt was made from nutro material and a magnetic field kept the now released plasma blast in a sword form. (like a halo sword). A steam enhanced jump propelled him through the air. At the apex of his jump, he readied his sword for the killing blow, and begun his decent he swung the sword, the other epic's head rolled on the ground, any watching vanillas shruged and continued on their day. A kill by lord Steampunk was nothing new.

 I am not afraid of critique give it to me straight.

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45 minutes ago, DreamLord_Erith said:

i hope he is acceptable.

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Steampunk watched as the epic called pyranis(pie-ran-hiss) walked down the street, tossing fireballs, vandalizing his clocks, a vein pulsed in his temple as he watched the idiot epic destroy a rosebush. "This will not stand."he said. The lord/God/emporer/King/whatever other titles there are, began to prepare. "Nutro!" Called steampunk, "prepare the hilt!" His armor was being built and his takeout wasn't finished, this idiot, torching Aphrodite's bushes, would come to a quick end at his hands or a long one at her's. He decided that the quick end was more epeec(his own word for humane). He sat down on clockwork square, an interesting item of his design, that was basically a huge clock, that was square. He was finishing his takeout, when a blast of white fire engulfed him, turning his food to ash in the blink of an eye and basically liquifying the glass face of the clock. He was now, annoyed. Steampunk shot a blast of steam at the epic that instantly negated his fire, charging a heatwave, steampunk felt the air cool around him, he would see if this epic would be fried by heat other than his own. He released enough heat to grill the epic, this was ineffectual, and had a laughable affect. In fact the fire epic actually did laugh, a step to close to insult. A blast of plasma took off his leg, he looked down on surprise. "Ow."  Said the epic weakly and blacked out. Steampunk was waiting for his blast to charge. His sword hilt was made from nutro material and a magnetic field kept the now released plasma blast in a sword form. (like a halo sword). A steam enhanced jump propelled him through the air. At the apex of his jump, he readied his sword for the killing blow, and begun his decent he swung the sword, the other epic's head rolled on the ground, any watching vanillas shruged and continued on their day. A kill by lord Steampunk was nothing new.

 I am not afraid of critique give it to me straight.

The gwammers and speelings could be improved. A more liberal use of periods would be nice, but otherwise, it's good except for this...

I'm guessing Pie-ran hiss is a fire Epic not a heat Epic right? Should I just pretend the Epics he mentioned don't exist? Is epeec an actual word? What is Steampunk's obsession with clocks, rosebushes, and takeout about? What did he get for takeout? What would he do if the store was all out of Cocoa Puffs and he had a CRAVING for them? What is Nutro?

I don't think the vanillas would just "shrug and continue on their day" if an idiot Epic just threw a million fireballs at them and their lord/master/emperor/king/WHATEVER killed him. It would be more reasonable for them to, say, run into their houses, or hide under a rosebush. 

Am I being too harsh? 

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On 10/23/2016 at 9:15 PM, breakingamber said:

The gwammers and speelings could be improved. A more liberal use of periods would be nice, but otherwise, it's good except for this...

I'm guessing Pie-ran hiss is a fire Epic not a heat Epic right? Should I just pretend the Epics he mentioned don't exist? Is epeec an actual word? What is Steampunk's obsession with clocks, rosebushes, and takeout about? What did he get for takeout? What would he do if the store was all out of Cocoa Puffs and he had a CRAVING for them? What is Nutro?

I don't think the vanillas would just "shrug and continue on their day" if an idiot Epic just threw a million fireballs at them and their lord/master/emperor/king/WHATEVER killed him. It would be more reasonable for them to, say, run into their houses, or hide under a rosebush. 

Am I being too harsh? 

No, thanks for the criticism. I will explain, takeout comes from China. He has to order takeout from China and it takes a while, he loves takeout. The rosebushes are aphrodite's bushes, she loves her rosebushes, and she is steampunk's girlfriend. The citisenz are all equiped to handle the situation, by that I mean that they hide in their homes and watch from behind their near-impervious glass windows. The repair bots designed by steampunk, repair any damage done. but steampunk does not like to have hus stuff messed with. 

P.S the rosebushes were getting torched, you'd only hide under a rosebush if you were on the walking dead.#peoplesostupidtheycan'thearawalker1footaway

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Floating city was a bit farfeched.
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