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2026/01/19

Usseewa

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Me

I feel like me,

Whoever that may be.

I feel like me,

For perhaps the first time, you see.

 

I start losing that feeling,

It slips between my fingers.

No matter how tight I hold on,

It finds a way to escape.

 

I may not post as much in the future. Or for a few days. I may even stop. But I'll try not to. May miss a few days though. Also for anyone who actually reads this, sorry I've just been posting these short poems...

- Lily

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CoderDrag0n8

CoderDrag0n8 Voidbringer

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I like short poems!

I think that if you stop trying to fill a lot of space, and just focus on smaller stuff, then the stuff you do make has more thought!

I would recomend not trying to keep at the same level as enthusiasum as you started, maybe try to go slower.

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Usseewa

Usseewa Enefel

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2 minutes ago, CoderDrag0n8 said:

I like short poems!

I think that if you stop trying to fill a lot of space, and just focus on smaller stuff, then the stuff you do make has more thought!

I would recomend not trying to keep at the same level as enthusiasum as you started, maybe try to go slower.

Yes, good point........................

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