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7 minutes ago, Through The Living Ketek said:
W O W
This is exactly how I feel.
This is great work.
Thank you!
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HOLY COW THAT IS AWESOME!!!!
Seriously, I have no clue how you do that. It's amazing!!!0 -
3 minutes ago, Through The Living Ketek said:
Whoa.
This is awesome!
Thanks!
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Just now, Through the Living Potato said:
Not that I noticed. Its really good!
Thanks!
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Hmmm yeah, I think I see what you mean.
Anything else?
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Sooo does anyone have anything I need to fix on this?
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YES YES YES
IF THIS IS WHAT PEER PRESSURE GETS ME, I WILL BE DOING IT ALL THE TIME (I'm kidding, just so you guys know, I don't peer pressure people. Or at least I try not to)
PLEASE WRITE MORE
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Well, we've all got to start somewhere.
I don't share half of my stories because they are straight up horrible. If you want examples, just look at "Firefly's Light". *shudders*
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1 minute ago, Conure1243 said:
I'll just take that as
"It's a better opening than Draft 1"
Well, I kinda forgot to read draft 1. BUT YES IT IS VERY GOOD
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NOOOOOOO
DON'T MAKE ME WAIT THAT LONG
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2 minutes ago, Conure1243 said:
Heh. See, that's the trick. I already have a full chapter 2. I can release it at any point...
Just preferably after I finish chapter 3.
WHAT?!?!?!??!
POST IT POST IT POSTITPOSTIT POOOOSSSSTTTT IIIIITTTTTTT
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Ooo! This sounds really good! Please write more!
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NO WHY CAN'T I UP VOTE THIS?! IT'S SO GOOD
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This is really good. *hugs* I'm here if you need to talk lol
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WAIT NO YOU CAN'T END IT THERE!
This is super good. PLEASE GIVE ME MORE
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11 hours ago, Ink and Embers said:
I love this!!!! The concept is really really cool and the characters feel very alive!
Thank you!
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This poem is basically my way of saying that people will surprise you. it's really easy to judge people and say, "they wouldn't care" or "they have no idea who I am" but trust me when I say, You are important, you are heard, and people do care about you, even if it doesn't seem that way.
On 4/17/2026 at 10:42 AM, Ink and Embers said:Yay!!!! Happy poem!!!! This is awesome!!!!!!
Thank you!
On 4/17/2026 at 1:13 PM, Verdance said:I can’t find the correct word to express what a positive experience reading this poem is
Really? Reallyreallyreally? *jumps up and down giddily*.
That is the entire point of me writing and posting that writing here. My entire dream with my writing is that it impacts someone for the better. I'm not in it for the rep or anything else. I just want my writing to make the world a better place, even if it is only in a small way.
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This is so good! I relate...
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This was so good! Holy cow I love your writing
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On 4/8/2026 at 11:43 PM, Ink and Embers said:
Aaaaaaaaaa
*hugs a lot*
So sad!!! It's a really good poem
16 minutes ago, Adonalsium Will Return said:*gives more hugs*
For a while in 5th and 6th grade (a while ago) I had a reputation as “that one who you can push his buttons easily”, so I get this a little, but nowhere near this. Wow.
*hugs back* Thank you!
So, one thing to realize is that I wrote this when I was like super depressed; I hadn't had the greatest day and everything was just kind of washing over me and all I could think about was my failures and it wasn't good. I've realized more and more over the years that writing/reading is a good release for me, so when the words kept circling in my head, I decided to write it down. All of these feelings are real, if a little overstated at times. Tbh, I am kind of the odd one out. People think I'm strange, and I'm trying to accept that, but that doesn't mean it doesn't hurt. Some days are worse than others, and that's kind of what bring stuff like this and The Weight of the World (my other poem) out. Talking to people helps. Having people understand helps. And people like you guys on the Shard definitely help. To be honest, all the other Sharders I've met have felt more like friends than anyone irl has felt like in a few years...holy cow that got depressing. I just mean to say, Thank you.
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4 hours ago, Usseewa said:
Definitely..
I relate.
4 hours ago, Adonalsium Will Return said:Wow. Just wow. I wish I could write like that.
5 minutes ago, Verdance said:I love this so much!!!
Thank you so much! It means a lot!
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Uh maybe don't do that. Also don't hurt yourself in general please
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*DIES AS WELL*
*REALIZES STORMLIGHT HASN'T FINISHED YET, SO I CAN'T DIE*
*REVIVES*
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1 minute ago, Usseewa said:
HAHA NOT MENTALLY
NEITHER AM I. IF YOU NEED EVIDENCE JUST LOOK AT MY SHORT STORIES AND WHERE MY HEAD GOES
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Poem: The Weight of the World
in Written in the Stars
A blog by Stardust in General
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I just saw this
I don't know how I missed it.
@Keteᛕ, if you still want to, that would be great.
@Verdance, if you ever come back, I would love to do it with you.