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Not very far; my stamina is awful How many times have you committed arson?

all of those were answered in my proposal, except the second. Isnae and sertl are both fully independent countries, and Corul is a smaller city-state.

1: humans, descended from those cultivated by indulgence. 2: they generally have tanned skin, and darker hair. Nothing else to note about them. 3: the swamplands and plains of Velia (continent on Arvus) 4: humans (and the planet) were created by indulgence, and later nurtured by corruption. 5 they’re a trio of countries, each having a separate form of government. Isnea, which uses and oligarchy, Corul, that uses a monarchy, and Sertl, which uses a meritocracy. Isnea and Sertl mutually hate one another, and Corul always tries to keep the peace between them all. Corruption will sometimes intervene, sparking or stopping conflict. It depends on how long peace or war as lasted.

I’m ready, personally. I already have some ideas.

I have a few questions 1: does something need to be sentient/sapient in order to add to a crowns investiture? 2: how invested can a sin crow be, at most? Fused level? Yoki-Hijo level? Returned level? 3: as a follow up to the last question, would their investiture prevent them from leaving Arvus? 4: is their healing spiritual or physical? 5: what’s the point of domination as a charm? It seems that grandeur can do the same thing, but with an added emotional aspect 6: why can a sin crow be a shifter but not a hijacker? Both need high levels of corruption’s investiture, with shifters needed at least the same amount as hijackers 7: how does the extra strength that a sin crow get manifest? Muscle growth, or more like A-pewter strength?

An aluminum spike gun would be op. The only problem would be sourcing the spikes.

I was worried about the prose when i made hijacking, but I couldn’t think of anything better. I am definitely open to suggestions. I’m toying with the idea of “distorters”, as a more old synonym. Any thoughts?

Dude, this is sick! It establishes the shards so well; indulgence as the overconfident schemer, corruption as some kind of malevolent invader, and verity as the self-righteous crusader.

I always imagined that they arrived pretty close to one another

We are, thanks for posting both of them Coder.

Btw I’m calling my planet “Arvus”

Cool!

I don’t particularly like any of them best way to make a deal with a demon?

Edgy crime lord assembles a crew that includes a dyslexic chemist, a gambler, a former slave, a magic masseuse, and a Viking with anger issues to break fantasy Walter white out of fantasy Alcatraz.

Okay, i see. The timer is measured in minutes btw. I don’t think var is native to this system. I imagine he choose a system that was largely uninhabited and that corruption/indulgence influenced the planets heavily. I like the suggestion the hijacking came about as a result of a natural magic system being warped by corruption into hijacking.

Alright, thank you.

I can answer your gripes on hijacking, but i would ask @CoderDrag0n8 about shifting. For limitation, i, admittedly, should have emphasized this more. Hijackings go away very quickly. You can only do bursts of change, unless you have a copious amount of vaw. Also, your right about corruptions vessel (I’m calling him var btw) is unassertive. And what is corruptions intent, it’s to change and to alter what was previous. This is what hijacking is trying to achieve, at its very base. I thought the “reverse plausibility” thing with hijacking would be a good way to convey that, but agian, do you have any suggestions?

It believe so. I’m glad everybody liked it.

Yea, me and coderdragon have a shared magic system, and Hoid slayer has his sonomancy, all of which are fleshed out

So what are we doing next @bmcclure7

Assuming everyone’s planet gets an equal amount of votes, would this be a quad planetary system?

We should start the poll, i think. I like all our current suggestions

Ye, that’d be good.

No, @bmcclure7 implied that we should save the magic system stuff for later, so i held off from saying it. You needn’t apologize

That’s similar to the magic system i came up with.