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  1. Cookie Spren
    Yeah cool. Were you implying that the shadow would be my character or is it something separate?
  2. Cookie Spren
    Ok. I can work with that. Give me a character overview for your character so I can work around it with mine. Sylas stares at Tellin, a look of fear on his face. "Please, I don't want to hurt anyone."
  3. Cookie Spren
    "Please!" He shouts. "What's happening?"
  4. Cookie Spren
    Uh... Sorry could you clarify? I edited the post because I hadn't finished it.
  5. Cookie Spren
    "Sylas..." The voice says, for both of you to hear. "Kill the cat... And I will reward you." The voice narrates a wall of force in the direction Tellin is running. Ok... *jots down notes* and what would be the aesthetic/mood/theme of these characters?
  6. Cookie Spren
    What would be the maximum age of this kid?
  7. Cookie Spren
    Sylas immediately turns in your direction in shock. "Wh-Where are you going!?" He shouts shakily. "Y-you're going to leave me here all alone!" His eyes look panicked.
  8. Cookie Spren
    It's a flip phone. mb I should've clarified.
  9. Cookie Spren
    Sylas hears the voice again. "Yes Sylas. With my help, you can even raise the dead..." It hurts to listen to. "But is that what you want? For them to have the chance to hurt you again?" Sylas looks up at Tellin. "I think there's something very wrong..." You can tell by the look on his face, that he hasn't come to terms with what really happened. "Th-There's a voice in my head Tellin. It tells me things. An-And I... I think it wants to help..." Sylas' lip quivers. "B-But... I-I swear! That wasn't me... Please! I-I pr-promise you..." Tears streak down his face, though he stays silent. Tellin hears the voice suddenly in his head. "I can help him Tellin..." It burns your ears when it speaks. "He is gifted... And I can help him learn. All you have to do is stay out of it..." Something tells you that this voice is not what is says to be.
  10. Cookie Spren
    "what?" Sylas says in surprise, turning around. He stops running as he sees the murders that he just committed. His face is a combination of doubt and horror. "I-I...." He looks like he's going to hurl. "Wh-what happened...?"
  11. Cookie Spren
    I'm using my phone rn and it's kinda difficult to quote stuff on other pages with it. Do you mind just checking my recent activity?
  12. Cookie Spren
    @Halcyon The Only ....?
  13. Cookie Spren
    @Halcyon The Only did you see my reply for the Sylas and Tellin plot?
  14. Cookie Spren
    @Halcyon The Only did you see my last post, replying to the Sylas and Tellin plot?
  15. Cookie Spren
    Yet again, there is a voice in Sylas' head. "You need me Sylas. I can help." The voice hisses. "Push back again..." It says. Sylas does as he is told, thinking that it is only his mind going crazy, and as he does, the people behind him silently explode into shreds of mangled pieces, but Sylas never looks back, still running up the stairway, unaware of what he just did. Yet still, tears run down his cheeks, as if his subconscious feels the guilt of what he did. (OOOOoooOOoOoOhhhhhhHHhHh cool plot with two minds inside of him?)
  16. Cookie Spren
    I kid you not, when I read this I was really happy, because the storyline with the Emperor is him trying to find out a way to destroy this voice that you hear (Xal'Badreal)'s army, which consists of demons that are undead and come back to life even after they are killed. This works perfectly. "What if I told you I could bring them back.... For a price of course...." It starts to get into your head so much that you are able to tangibly see this creature, a few feet away from you. Spoiler for Hero of Ages, just in case you haven't read it. It's body is of humanoid shape but that comparison ends from where you see it's hyena-like head that has charred fur with red eyes, staring deep into your soul. Its mouth drips with this viscous bloodred liquid (Probably blood, but it looks extremely viscous). Its lower jaw is split in two, like mandibles of a dangerous insect, and its fangs are a sharp black. Its arms bare resemblance to an insect as well, though the end of its arms, where there normally would be hands, are these long bladed segments that flow with venom, well seen under its foggily translucent edge, just barely oozing out of each serration of the bladed limbs.
  17. Cookie Spren
    "Go on...." It writhes in anticipation.
  18. Cookie Spren
    "You could be useful." The Voice hisses. "Why the Hell not!" It cackles. "Tell me Sain, do you have any regrets?" The voice sounds like acid in your ears.
  19. Cookie Spren
    "Thank you." The Emperor bows his head slightly. "If there is anything you require of me, please, let me be of assistance."
  20. Cookie Spren
    Is The Render a narrator? Instinctively, he throws his hand backwards as he runs up the stairway, throwing the people back with narration.
  21. Cookie Spren
    "Oh Bollocks!" Sylas yells as he runs out of the room and up the staircase.
  22. Cookie Spren
    "What are you talking about?" Sylas says trying to remind them that he's still there.
  23. Cookie Spren
    "I-I heard noises from this room, I don't know I just appeared in front of this temple." Sylas seems distressed.
  24. Cookie Spren
    @SpiritOfWrath A voice comes to Sain. "Dost thou seek vengance towards the Emperor? For he seeks to destroy everything you know and care for. But I can help you." Please, I'm trying so hard for someone to latch onto this storyline and nobody has yet.
  25. Cookie Spren
    "What the...?" Sylas stands there in shock.
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