Cool! I may honestly change the ending (the reason the ending was so sad was that it wasn’t really believable that the perspective character would be happy at the end, but I thought up a way to fix that)
Another thing. I realized after I posted this that the short story has a good amount of violence (no gore though) so I may need to just provide a link to the doc. But for now, imma post snippets until I get to the “wow that’s violent” part. (Also, does anyone know how to paste whilst keeping the italics?)
Fair warning, this does contain some short (like, a single line) disturbing things, I’ll just edit that out whilst I try to figure that out.
Ok! I found a solution: I found it with the Aether of Night thread.
(as long as it’s ok, mods)
Post here and I’ll PM u the link.
@AltonicKeys, you posted. Are you interested?