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I finally wrote a poem again!
WARNING: It's probably the longest I've ever written.
Why Canât We Fix This?
SpoilerIâm a tiny little worm.I crawl through the dirt, just living,Just doing as I wasCreated to do.ÂI poke my tiny headOutOf the dirt.I wiggle further,FurtherâŠÂSplat!I hit something hard.What is it?I canât see it, for,I donât have eyes.ÂI try to push through itTo no avail!I try to go around itBut I canât escape.I canât eat it,I canât get out of it.ÂI am trapped!ÂOver the next while,It becomes hot.Very hot.I can feel the sun, and I tryTo squirm away,But the sun burns me!ÂItâs hot, so very hotIâm drying out,The heat-ÂÂÂÂI am a squirrel.I bounce, too and fro,Collecting food and savingIt away forWinter.ÂMy purpose.ÂI see something on the ground!Itâs shiny.I creep closer, trying to seeâŠIt smells good!I take a small bite of it.Itâs slippery, crinkly, and doesnâtTaste like anything IâveEver eaten.ÂA sound comes fromThe hill above me.I smell human.I bound up the nearestTree,Perching where I can seeâŠÂThe human throwsSomething down the hill.Something shiny, roundish,Clear- like water, like ice?ÂThe thing hits a rockAnd⊠shatters?Little bits go flyingEverywhere,Then, the humanLeaves.ÂI wait for a long time,Unmoving.Then, ICreepDownThe tree,Scurry overTo one of thePieces.ÂI sniff at it,But it doesnât move.Itâs so shinyâŠI reach my paw forwardâŠÂA stick somewhereBehind me,Cracks suddenly!ÂI jump at the sound,My paw, comes down onThe shard of the thing-It goes right throughMy paw!I squeak in painAnd fright,Bounding up the nearestTree!ÂThe thing, now stuckDeep into my paw,Comes with me.ÂI look down at theBark of the treeIn which I cling.It is spattered with blood.I can smell it.ÂItâs my blood.ÂI try to climb higherIn the tree,LimpingAll the way.ÂWhen I feel Iâm safeEnough,I examine my paw.The pain is excruciating,My blood continues to leak fromTorn skin and matted fur.ÂI can still feel the thingInside.It seems to beGougingDeeper.ÂAfter trying,With no luck,For some timeTo getThe thing outOf my paw,I start to feelSleepy.ÂMy paw starts to feelNumb, my headFeelsLightâŠÂI have to find my nest,Just toTakeA smallSleepâŠÂÂI am a deer.Iâm trotting over my patch ofWoods,My head heldHigh, my eightAntler pointsDisplayed proudly.ÂI am at the top of a small rise,The strange rock Iâm standingOn is interlacedWith strange,Metallic-smelling bars.It makes me uneasy, for someReason.ÂItâs going to be fine.Of course it will be.ÂI take oneStepCloser to the edge,Ears alert forAny sign ofDanger.ÂMy ears couldNever have warned meOf what happenedNext.ÂThe footing underMy front hoovesSuddenly collapses,Tumbling me over the edge!ÂBut my rear legs becomeTangled in thoseStrange metallicBars, snagging me painfully.ÂIâm suspended,Upside down,Three deerlengths aboveThe rocky ground.ÂThe bars are hard and solid,Digging into my slenderLegs,Cutting them deeply.ÂIf only I had knowWhat sharp edgesThey had!ÂIâm kickingFrantically,Trying to break free,Trying to escape the painThe horror of being soPrecariously high!ÂA sound rises in my throat,Tears out my mouth beforeI can stop it.ÂWhether from painOr fear, I canât tell.ÂI bawl again, continuing to kickFor a long while.ÂIâm getting soTired.ÂI stop struggling, feelingThe weight ofMy bodyPressingDown on myLungs,Blood rushingTo my head.ÂMy vision isTurning red,Clouded by the bloodIn my skull.ÂMy breath comes in pants.ÂEverything hurts.ÂI have no more strength.ÂIâm bleedingâŠÂBleedingâŠ.ÂÂIâm a person,A young person.Iâm waking through the woods,Beside the river.ÂIâm disgusted!There is so much trash!I canât take a single stepWithout glassCrunchingBeneath my shoes.ÂPlastic and metal protrude fromThe surrounding leaf-litter.A small bird hops over a halfBuried soda can,Another perches onA beer bottle.ÂTiny, sickly plants attemptTo grow around a deflatedPlastic pool float.ÂEverywhere, there are glass shards,Beer bottles,Smashed cans,Broken containers,Shattered jars,Dirt and rust,Filth and chemicals.ÂOld tires and plastic toysScattered betweenDying, hole-filled, blackenedTrees.ÂConcrete stairs,Cinder blocks,Concrete pads andAn entire cliff,Twisted, sharp, metalSaluting the dead tree branchesAbove.ÂI walk- slide, more like-Down the steep hill, to theBottom of the cliff.ÂI kick aside leaves,Sticks, rotting wood,Cans, glass, bottles,UnderneathâŠThere lies an oldDeer skull.An eight point buck.ÂI pick up the skull.Itâs white, bleached,It no longer smells.ÂI shake my head,Trying to imagine whatMight haveKilled the poorThing.ÂI look around the dying woods, down to the murky, nasty,WaterBelow.ÂIs there any hope for this land?Can it ever beReturned to whatIt was created to be?Can we reconcile allThat was lost?Can we restart theEcosystem?Diversify the floraAnd faunaAs it once was?ÂI donât know.Iâm but one teenager.What can I do?ÂI think about it,Sweat tricklingDown the back of my neck.The gnats swarming my arms.ÂI need to start back soon,Go back to the clean,Bright cottage.ÂI have a beautiful place toStay, here,But the animals?The permanent residents?Those defenseless againstPollution?ÂTheir woods-Where they have been sinceDay fourOf creation-Is now fullOf things they canâtStand against,Things they had no partIn making!Things that onlyDesecrate their habitats,But help us so thatWe can do less work,At the expense of theEcosystem,At the expense of that whichEnables us to live at all.ÂTheir woods seem toNo longer beTheir woods.ÂWhy can we not fix this?ÂTake care of all thisPollution,Take care of our farms,In turn, our health,The health ofOur children,Grandchildren,Yes, great grandchildren!ÂWhy canât weStopFighting out wars,Our petty squabbles overLand-Land that is slowlyDisappearing.ÂWhy donât we take careOf this wonderful giftGod has blessed us with?ÂWhy canât we fix this?Â-Stick 4-16-24ÂÂÂÂÂÂ
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AHHHH GUYS GUYS GUYS GUYS GUYS!!!!
I WAS JUST A WITNESS TO THE MOST EPIC BURN BATTLE I'VE EVER SEEN!!!
I WROTE IT ALL DOWN FOR YOUR ENJOYMENT!!!
AND YOU MIGHT KNOW BOTH OF THESE PEOPLE!!!
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Veil- @Part Of The Narrative
Shard boi- @Shardwatcher01
Me- @Just-A-Stick (me)
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ENJOY!!!
SpoilerSpoilerVeil: You look wackyÂShard boi: you arenât wrongÂVeil: Okayyyy⊠we love a man who can recognize his flaws.ÂShard boi:Â

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ÂShard boi: I'm just better than you in every way, clearlyÂVeil: WUT OH IM HERE FOR THIS-ÂVeil: I mean I donât believe in evolutionÂVeil: But I can see how scientists could think you evolved from a monkeyÂVeil: I still wanna know what your parents look like
ÂVeil: Then I would know for sure where the inter breeding occurred, cuz with that face he ainât no purebredâŠfilthy little mud bloodÂVeil: *channels draco*ÂShard boi: Clearly God turned around when making herÂShard boi (to me): Ur friend is a witchÂMe: My mamma is a witch? What does that make meÂ
ÂShard boi: Son of a witchÂShard boi: lolÂVeil: Bold of you to assume god made meÂVeil: Bold of him to assume Iâm humanÂShard boi: Ur right youâre straight from hellÂShard boi: Pesky demonÂShard boi: No wonder she looks like thatÂVeil, replying to âUr right youâre straight from hellâ:And what does that make him from? Surely not Hades. Not even he could stand to see THAT in his court of demons every dayÂVeil: Iâm not surprised heâs never kissed a girl. Shouldâve known he didnât have a motherÂVeil: Bet the stork had a job carrying him to the chimney, since every time it peeked in the blanket it almost dropped him in disgustÂVeil:Â
ÂVeil: If you leave my bb girl on read I will leave your application to life on readÂVeil:Â
ÂShard boi, replying to âIâm not surprised heâs never kissed a girl. Shouldâve known he didnât have a motherâ:ÂWoowÂVeil, replying to âWooowâ:Thatâs what I thought you teenage soil bagÂShard boi: Iâm done with yâallÂVeil: (Dirt is too good for him)ÂShard boi: I canât roast good enough!ÂShard boi: She was clearly made in hellÂShard boi: Thatâs how she roasts it's the fires of hellÂShard boi: I canât compete with thatÂShard boi (to me): *alsouradopted* COUGHÂMe: Iâm adopted?ÂShard boi: Satan canât have childrenÂVeil: Your threats roll off of me like water, my less then divine brethrenÂVeil, replying to âSatan canât have childrenâ:I KNEW HE DIDNT HAVE A MOTHERÂVeil:Â
ÂVeil: Everything makes sense nowÂVeil: Hey, if the fires of hell have chick-fil-a then fineÂVeil: *slurps milkshake*ÂShard boi: LollllÂShard boi:Why do I talk to yâallÂShard boi, replying with to âHey, if the fires of hell have chick-fil-a then fineâ:They donâtÂVeil, replying to âWhy do I talk to yâallâ:Because youâve never kissed a girl so you grasp the desperate hope that even though if we meet I will surely give you the kiss of death, itâs better then nothingÂShard boi: I quitttttÂVeil, replying to âThey donâtâ:Silly me. You would know better then anyÂShard boi: Lemme alooooneÂVeil: You and your invisible girlfriend. No mating you twoÂVeil: Until next time, spawn of the pitÂMe: The poor guy-ÂVeil: Yeah, he shouldnât have triedÂVeil: I slayed thoÂVeil: Slayed himÂ
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BUT IT WAS AWESOME!!!
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There's a lesson here.
Don't get into a roasting battle with @Part Of The Narrative.
She is a worthy foe.Â
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~ Stick
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@The Bookwyrm- tbh, i feel the same... like... it's been a learning curve between me and Veil, cause she can't roast me without hurting my feelingsÂ
As a rule, I mostly only roast annoying younger siblings, but not my friends.
Veil, however, is very different
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