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kajsa ㅇㅅㅇ

i know i just posted

but i'm editing

and i really like how these sentences turned out

His eyes searched her face, scrutinizing.

She wasn’t sure what he was looking for, but she prayed he wouldn’t find it.

or maybe this which one's better

His eyes searched her face, scrutinizing.

She wasn’t sure what he was looking for, but whatever it was, she prayed it would elude him.

( @Through The Living Glass hehe)
- March 20, 2025
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2. Bird Furious
  
  I personally like the first one for its simplicity
  
  I do rly like the "whatever it was"; "elude" just seems lofty to me idk maybe i'm just uncultured
  
  March 20, 2025
  
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3. kajsa ㅇㅅㅇ
  
  no i agree
  
  especially cuz kiesha's just a farm girl turned factory worker
  
  March 20, 2025
4. Through The Living Glass
  
  Mmmmmm it's good!
  
  I will say, I don't think "elude" matches the rest of the sentence.
  
  Like, the feeling of it
  
  HOWEVER:
  
  Spoiler
  
  EHEHEHEHE
  
  March 20, 2025